| Heartstream
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2007-07-07
Beautiful write ladies... very well done...
and I agree you must do this more often
Earl
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| Take Another Look
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2007-07-07
You done it again another wonderful write
Nice depth and flow... Beautiful
Earl
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| 1st Impression
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2007-07-07
This is a terrific write...
"I am a sad clown
I live with an internal frown
When people first look into my eyes
All they see is an evil demise
Someone they can't take serious"
Be sad no more my friend.... to be understood and accepted is what living is all about...
Earl
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| As It Was Written
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2006-08-29
wow!! what a write.....
WRITE IT DOWN, SON
And he did
And it was healing
Beautiful!!
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| My Adpotive Daughters (haiku)
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2006-08-29
Excellently piece Kathy-- loved it, you really are one terrific writer...
I have added a poem I wrote for my stepmother call "To My Mother" please have a read....
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| I, The Drummer
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2006-08-28
What a beautiful flow of words Mr. Henry David Thoreau is applauding you and so am I...
'I will recognize your freedom
And applaud you as you march by
Then we will take the flight of self
As we soar to our individual skies!"
Awesome write... thank you for sharing
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| No One's Knocking At My Door
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2006-08-23
Powerful!!!! What a beautiful poem... it has just the right amount of, "come back for more" loved your last stanza.
"Sitting now in lonely times
I am low and out of rhymes
Hoping for a better day
Wishing that you'd pass my way
Knowing that you're far from here
I, alone, shed this single tear."
Thank you for sharing...
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| Ramblings At Midnight
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2006-08-23
Wow! What an awesome piece you have going on here!!!..The little and more meaningful things of life always seem to be missed, especially in today's world... love it!!!
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| The beautiful, wonderful...
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2006-08-23
This is amazing... a very brilliant write about a shared moment that will last forever...
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| Right before September...
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2006-08-23
Beautiful write!!! nice tone..... I love this stanza
"when I turn my back
to my past that I had
I won't look over my shoulder
I won't stand by your side
but I will keep walking
- into another life"
very Beautiful....Earl
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| Right before September...
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2006-08-23
Beautiful write!!! nice tone..... I love this stanza
"when I turn my back
to my past that I had
I won't look over my shoulder
I won't stand by your side
but I will keep walking
- into another life"
very Beautiful....Earl
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from USA