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Recycled Air

2010-02-17
nicely wirtten poem. sometimes it is too wordy but the finish is is of exceptional quality both for its words and content


The extraordinary in the ordinary

2010-02-12
wonderful theme and outstanding choice of words. In awe


You, Me and the Rain

2010-02-12
beautifully written. The way you end your stanzas is magical. Maybe review the start of the poem, cannot pinpoint it but the choice of words or perhaps grammar feels unnatural. Other than that I really enjoyed this poem


Sailing

2009-10-29
beautiful rhythm, last line is so nice


unvisible

2009-10-27
fantastic choice of words. this poem leaves tastes sounds and colour. Very interesting. Very painful.


To Tear Down a Wall

2009-10-27
I really like this poem, its simplicity contains great thought.


when she walks

2009-10-27
truly beautiful work. so rich in contrast, i find myself reading it over and over again


What I mean

2009-08-20
This is beautiful. Soem lines are a bit to "wordy" but your descriptions are heartbreakingly marvellous.


Whats Happened To My Country

2009-07-31
a wellwritten and passionate read. praise


empty/crystalline

2009-07-24
your choice of words takes my breath away. Terrific piece!


Colours

2009-06-20
remarkable. makes me pause and think. intrigued by your diction.


Holding you...

2009-06-15
such a beautiful piece. the human heart is capable of so much loving, it is lovely when we are reminded of this.


Rwanda's Rue

2009-05-22
painful. emotional. very well written


After 12 Midnight

2009-05-21
Im timbling through this poem. somtimes it jsut words and sometimes wow. hen i can hear the rain and touch the soul of the writes. intrigueing


Ooh-la-la Limerick

2009-05-20
AMAZING


In condition of none.

2009-04-23
very interesting. excellent rhythm.


A Carousel Parade

2009-04-23
im amazed how well you combine excellent diction with perfect rhythm. this poem tastes like english summer..


Mortal and Pester

2009-03-30
O my, this is amazing!! you leave me breathless. you're words, the beauty!


Eclipse

2009-03-30
simply beautiful. written with so much talent.


She Was Lightening, Then She Was Sunshine

2009-03-07
This is amazing. esp the title is breathtaking. spectacular imagery.
I strongly dislike the use of the word "sadly" really feel out of place when there are so many more beautiful word in the english language that would enrich the stanza.


Angel Mannequin

2009-03-05
this poem is genuinely different. im going to have to read this again. very very interesting.


in spring

2009-03-04
this poem is so beautiful. the words flow so softly and leave emotions with the reader


The kids are screaming...

2009-03-04
very very interesting read. I hope your daughter comes out wise.

you capture the moment in brilliant language.

thank you


Who Counts a Woman's Tears

2009-02-25
This is beautiful. Good rhythm and although the poem feels "uneven" in its choice of words it's theme is breathtaking


Variation in black

2009-02-23
very beautiful wording. good structure


Sound of hate, touch of cold (fibonacci - challenge)

2009-02-23
painful poem. good utilisation of the structure. good rhythm


she was never a queen

2009-02-22
very well written poem with stunning imagery.


IT RAINED THAT SUMMER

2009-02-22
oooo this is very interesting. perfectly condensed and brilliant tone.


For Elisa

2009-02-22
this poem has such a brilliant wording. excellent use of rhythm.


Mr. Ivories

2009-02-22
your choice of words in immaculate. brilliant descriptions.


Doodle

2009-02-22
very interesting. effective structure and nice rhytm


The Butterfly Effect

2009-02-20
your poem makes me smile. thank you.


CRUSH OF MY HEART

2009-02-20
this is very beautiful. wow


Visit at The Hawthorn House

2009-02-12
very emotional text and very well written.


she never / he never (a valentine-challenge reflection)

2009-02-12
your rhythm is perfection. excellent piece of writing


Numbers

2009-01-22
Your poem makes me smile, and think again, read it again. Brilliant.


hushed sonnet to the prostitute (I)

2009-01-22
Sometimes this poem becomes a bit to "wordy", the sentences a bit too long. However especially the beginning holds such amazing diction, the contrasts in the imagery is breathtaking.


For Granted!

2008-12-18
The beauty here! Brilliant.


The Feeling

2008-12-18
Your poem certainly has an amazing feeling to it. Starting every line with capital letters I don't like however, ruins the flow.


Culinary of Excellence (Acrostic)

2008-12-17
would be a lot better if there wasn't a capital letter at the start of every line. it really distracts me. the wording is beautiful and the ending surprisingly dark


Quiet so . . . quiet

2008-12-07
Får mig att le. ser hela scenariot så tydligt framför mig.


nemesis with silver eyes

2008-12-06
You imagery is unbelievable. Fabulously written. wow


Downpatrick Head

2008-11-28
So beautiful. Your words paint an unforgettable picture.


i still love you

2008-02-26
Such beautiful flow to it. The diction appears limited but it is saved by a brilliant strikin alst line.


Dangerous Delights (tanka)

2008-02-25
amazing use of diction


STRANGE WEATHER FOR WINTER IN THE ISLE THANET!

2008-02-24
the style is unique and the feeling the text leaves brilliant. thank you


Seascape

2007-02-19
your dictions flows amazingly.. the rhythm is brilliant and your rhymes are well developed.


Tolerance

2007-02-13
beautiful expression, well done


The last Kiss by M.A.Meddings

2007-02-11
the utilisation of the structure in this leaves me breathless.. It is brilliant and you capture so much emotions in these few lines


Haiku for pampas grass

2007-02-11
would love to write a decent comment but sadly.. wow.. is the only thing i can think of