| Why wasn't I let to dance away your pain?
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2007-04-28
yeah can understand what u want to convey. made for a nice read.
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| Te iubesc
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2007-01-19
the imagery is beautiful. although i couldn't comprehend certain words, yet the idea is v. clear.
well done, munir.
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| Love, the Elixir of life: A rapid-fire-round of Haiku(Zoya) and Renga(Liliana)
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2007-01-16
the poem is as beautiful and divine as love itself. a commendable endeavor.
bravo!
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| Your I love you
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2007-01-15
i love the attitude" bye bye men"
it is like the coming of age of women.
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| If I could wish
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2007-01-13
lovely poem.may god fulfil all your wishes
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| INVERTED IMAGES
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2007-01-11
livid.
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| *~._||love you mom||_.~* (for kathy lockhart)
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2007-01-11
beautiful poem. the bond is really sweet.
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| killer
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2007-01-11
sad , really a sad tale. finely expressed.
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| Spark of Life
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2007-01-10
a really nice poem. this one's bookmarked for sure.
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| The Scarlet Rose
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2007-01-10
the imagery is strong and beautiful.
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| Mahai Ramazan
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2007-01-10
bahut achi nazm hai. par beta, english site par urdu main kyun likhti ho
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| Drizzle on the Grassfield
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2007-01-10
fab. made for a nice read.
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| In Folly's Cocoon
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2007-01-10
a really good poem and the last lines are amazing.
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| Life and Time
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2007-01-09
it's enchanting. i savored every word of it and held my breath as my mind pondered over its depth of thought.
a v. beautiful rhythmic poem.
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| I Fold
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2007-01-09
simply amazing! how are u doing brian?
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| THE PROMISED NEW AGE
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2006-11-29
v. powerful and deep. one of your best poems. there an element of mysticism
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| silence
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2006-11-29
serene.
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| There is Love
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2006-11-06
encore! a beautiful work
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| Unlearn
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2006-11-06
a pure text . and what you convey is all true and beautifully brought out.
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| SUMMER END
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2006-11-06
BEAUTIFUL!
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| truth is there
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2006-10-27
yes the truth is out there for everyone to see but it just that we don't ponder over it. a great poem.
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| Allah
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2006-10-27
yea, He's the most powerful, the most merciful, the oft- returning, master of the day of judgement. Praise be to God almighty.
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| HOME
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2006-10-27
sigh! i can imagine what you convey.
a good haiku.
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| An Autumn Evening.... in Orange
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2006-10-21
indeed a masterpiece!
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| Young superman...
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2006-10-21
would have made a beautiful rock song too.
all the best and love.
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| Young superman...
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2006-10-21
a thought provoking poem. kudos to u 4 this one.
yea, as we grow older we tend 2 become accustomed 2 the ways of the world and start concentrating at our own selfish goals.
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| My son
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2006-10-21
beautiful. the relationship depicted is quite emotional. i'm still a kid myself, so can't say anything more. but it must be really beautiful to see thy children grow.
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| Sweetest are the Songs...
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2006-10-21
love you for this one. the words are wise and the rhythm makes it enticing.
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| Burning Bright Before Dying Out...
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2006-10-21
what a thought provoking poem. beautifully spun.
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| I Mourn my friend Joshua, Mexican-2006
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2006-10-21
it grieves my heart so much that i am almost into tears. i know what it is to part with a friend for life (i wouldn't say you have lost him cuz for eternity he's your friend).
the only way to pay homage to him is to help out those who are yielding to depression and the psyche of thanatos.
take care dear zoya
love
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| One more comment on Joshua (for Zoya)
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2006-10-21
good work here!
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| ...Burning Love...
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2006-10-20
what an imagination do you have, it is a novel idea to compare love with the candle. v. nice. a must read!
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| SNAKE
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2006-10-20
reminds me of the gooey slime of their trail. the depiction provides a livid imsagination.
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| TRYING TO SENSE HER
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2006-10-20
nice. plz. read my "musings"
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| HUMAN RIGHTS
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2006-10-20
now this is what happens. a commendable
poem.
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| THERE IS SO MUCH LOVE TO SHARE
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2006-10-20
truly praiseworthy work.
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| PUPPIES
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2006-10-20
so v. natural. we have cats at home and i love animals.
gr8 work.
(((hugs)))
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| PUPPIES
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2006-10-20
so v. natural. we have cats at home and i love animals.
gr8 work.
(((hugs)))
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| BUBBLES
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2006-10-20
a delicious poem.
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| TENSION
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2006-10-20
extraordinary and brilliant. a most beautiful depiction.
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| ASKS HIS FATHER
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2006-10-20
v. nice.
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| ARTHRITIS
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2006-10-20
a most byooootiful tanka. i am reminded of my grandparents who complain of joint pain.
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| War
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2006-10-20
this is a heart wrenching account of war. a most remarkable poem.
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| TAGS OF LOVE
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2006-10-20
liked the style of writin'. well done.
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| start
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2006-10-20
gr8 work.
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| Showing your naked body
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2006-10-19
some people r just 2 muchh obsessed with their bodies and expose on the pretext of being comfy in their own skin.
kudos to u for calling a spade a spade.
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| Twilight of Love
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2006-10-14
A V. TOUCHING POEM WITH A LIVID DESCRIPTION. IT'S SO SAD TO SUFFER FROM HEARTBREAKS. SOME PEOPLE WHEN GO, LEAVE A VOID BEHIND WHICH REFUSES TO FILL UP.
FULL MARKS TO THIS ONE!
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| Lessons learnt from life
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2006-09-25
a yet another expressive poem, and what you say is a truth well said.
you r right - triumph only comes when the time is ripe.
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| Grave yard of dreams
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2006-09-09
v. good work
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| Fragile
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2006-09-09
sooo vivid n sooo beautiful
i think i have joined your fanclub!
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