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The latest comments that Tori has written.

[//FAlliNG.]

2007-09-22
well, this was written from the perspective of someone i know. it is what i would be feeling if i were someone else and looking at myself. hm. well, that doesn't make much sense.


[//RiSiNG.]

2007-09-22
yes, of course. i'm too young to feel REAL emotions.


[//ANiMAlS.]

2007-09-22
you know, if you read every other paragraph, there are two different poems. i wrote them around the same time, then i combined them.


[//WATCHiNG.]

2007-09-22
really now? i thought this was the worst structured one i have posted up. weird.


[//R3M3MB3R.]

2007-09-22
more loves? well, it was a family love. that was the day she died. i don't think there is a person to replace a family member that died.


[//LiES.]

2007-09-22
don't you get it people? i is like a joke. if you aren't breathing, your face turns blue. yeah. laugh.


~ PROMISE

2007-01-29
you're so good at writing, lisa!
i hope you feel better,
anything i can do to help you feel better?


~ One best friend

2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?


~ One best friend

2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?


~ One best friend

2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?


~ One best friend

2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?


~ One best friend

2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?


~ One best friend

2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?


~ Moving on

2007-01-21
BEAUTIFUL.


~ Starlight

2007-01-21
ummm i think i just commented like a bazillion times...

oops XD


~ Starlight

2007-01-21
ummm i think that i just commented like a bazillion times...

oops xD


~ Starlight

2007-01-21
OH MAN LISA!

just to let you know,
you're an AWESOME writer!
and i LOVE all of yours!

keep it uuppp :D


~ Starlight

2007-01-21
OH MAN LISA!

just to let you know,
you're an AWESOME writer!
and i LOVE all of yours!

keep it uuppp :D


~ Starlight

2007-01-21
OH MAN LISA!

just to let you know,
you're an AWESOME writer!
and i LOVE all of yours!

keep it uuppp :D


~ In the end

2007-01-21
OH MAN LISA!

just to let you know,
you're an AWESOME writer!
and i LOVE all of yours!

keep it uuppp :D


~ In the end

2007-01-21
OHMAN LISA! you found me already :o

just to let you know,

you're and AMAZING writer!

and i LOVE all of yours so far!

keep it up ;D


~ In the end

2007-01-21
OHMAN LISA! you found me already :o

just to let you know,

you're and AMAZING writer!

and i LOVE all of yours so far!

keep it up ;D


Coming to Terms

2006-11-29
i love it! it flows so good. i hope you feel better. i'd tell you its okay that i'm here, but i'm a complete stranger that has only heard a few words you were able to bend and display for us. well, at least i can say that you're good at writing.


Truth Speaks in Mysterious Ways

2006-11-20
i like it a lot! this one is very good, and it is easy to read because the rhyming and flow if it! =D


Seraphs Will Come

2006-11-06
"Roots" and "Once Terrible Dead" are capitolized [that was just me pointing out the obvious, not correcting. i was not correcting you]. I can't wait for that day too. weee maybe there'll be more cotton candy there too! ^^


Disappear ~Response to A.N's Haunted Eyes Poem~

2006-11-06
Thank you for the comment! I can't say that i know much about poetry, but i think yours is very good! I guess indirectly, you got me on poetbay, because i saw it while i was on xuxa's myspace! well, thank you (indirectly ^^;)


Of Truth and Misery

2006-11-06
sheesh the second day i have been on here you wrote something this sad ><;; i really cant say that i know much about poetry, but i think this one is strong. haha i might just be a sap but this one made be well up. you're whole family is so strong and i hope that the next door you see is filled with cotton candy! well maybe not that but you know what i mean ^^;


For KJC ~ My Muse and inspiration and the bay's inspiration soul.....

2006-11-06
thank you for commenting me, and i think that it is really wonderful that you can write such great poetry about just about anything. for me, it usually comes in spurts. i like it very much and again thanks for welcoming me to the bay! ^^


More friends join the bay!

2006-11-05
>< thats embarassing...

thanks though!