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2007-09-22
well, this was written from the perspective of someone i know. it is what i would be feeling if i were someone else and looking at myself. hm. well, that doesn't make much sense.
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| [//RiSiNG.]
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2007-09-22
yes, of course. i'm too young to feel REAL emotions.
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| [//ANiMAlS.]
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2007-09-22
you know, if you read every other paragraph, there are two different poems. i wrote them around the same time, then i combined them.
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| [//WATCHiNG.]
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2007-09-22
really now? i thought this was the worst structured one i have posted up. weird.
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| [//R3M3MB3R.]
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2007-09-22
more loves? well, it was a family love. that was the day she died. i don't think there is a person to replace a family member that died.
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| [//LiES.]
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2007-09-22
don't you get it people? i is like a joke. if you aren't breathing, your face turns blue. yeah. laugh.
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| ~ PROMISE
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2007-01-29
you're so good at writing, lisa!
i hope you feel better,
anything i can do to help you feel better?
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| ~ One best friend
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2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?
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| ~ One best friend
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2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?
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| ~ One best friend
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2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?
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| ~ One best friend
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2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?
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| ~ One best friend
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2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?
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| ~ One best friend
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2007-01-28
you need help,
and i'll give it to you.
will you be my friend?
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| ~ Moving on
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2007-01-21
BEAUTIFUL.
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| ~ Starlight
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2007-01-21
ummm i think i just commented like a bazillion times...
oops XD
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| ~ Starlight
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2007-01-21
ummm i think that i just commented like a bazillion times...
oops xD
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| ~ Starlight
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2007-01-21
OH MAN LISA!
just to let you know,
you're an AWESOME writer!
and i LOVE all of yours!
keep it uuppp :D
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| ~ Starlight
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2007-01-21
OH MAN LISA!
just to let you know,
you're an AWESOME writer!
and i LOVE all of yours!
keep it uuppp :D
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| ~ Starlight
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2007-01-21
OH MAN LISA!
just to let you know,
you're an AWESOME writer!
and i LOVE all of yours!
keep it uuppp :D
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| ~ In the end
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2007-01-21
OH MAN LISA!
just to let you know,
you're an AWESOME writer!
and i LOVE all of yours!
keep it uuppp :D
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| ~ In the end
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2007-01-21
OHMAN LISA! you found me already :o
just to let you know,
you're and AMAZING writer!
and i LOVE all of yours so far!
keep it up ;D
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| ~ In the end
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2007-01-21
OHMAN LISA! you found me already :o
just to let you know,
you're and AMAZING writer!
and i LOVE all of yours so far!
keep it up ;D
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| Coming to Terms
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2006-11-29
i love it! it flows so good. i hope you feel better. i'd tell you its okay that i'm here, but i'm a complete stranger that has only heard a few words you were able to bend and display for us. well, at least i can say that you're good at writing.
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| Truth Speaks in Mysterious Ways
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2006-11-20
i like it a lot! this one is very good, and it is easy to read because the rhyming and flow if it! =D
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| Seraphs Will Come
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2006-11-06
"Roots" and "Once Terrible Dead" are capitolized [that was just me pointing out the obvious, not correcting. i was not correcting you]. I can't wait for that day too. weee maybe there'll be more cotton candy there too! ^^
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| Disappear ~Response to A.N's Haunted Eyes Poem~
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2006-11-06
Thank you for the comment! I can't say that i know much about poetry, but i think yours is very good! I guess indirectly, you got me on poetbay, because i saw it while i was on xuxa's myspace! well, thank you (indirectly ^^;)
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| Of Truth and Misery
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2006-11-06
sheesh the second day i have been on here you wrote something this sad ><;; i really cant say that i know much about poetry, but i think this one is strong. haha i might just be a sap but this one made be well up. you're whole family is so strong and i hope that the next door you see is filled with cotton candy! well maybe not that but you know what i mean ^^;
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| For KJC ~ My Muse and inspiration and the bay's inspiration soul.....
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2006-11-06
thank you for commenting me, and i think that it is really wonderful that you can write such great poetry about just about anything. for me, it usually comes in spurts. i like it very much and again thanks for welcoming me to the bay! ^^
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| More friends join the bay!
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2006-11-05
>< thats embarassing...
thanks though!
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