| Lifes delight
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2009-06-24
i like it. great writing. hopeful and honest. good job!
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| Strawberry Delight
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2009-06-09
nice way of making suicide sound like a well-thought decision. very beautiful poem.
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| Blooming stain
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2009-06-09
wow. really well written and thought provoking! deep. i like it.
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| Fragrancia Pura (The journey within - the land without)
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2009-06-09
i loved reading this one! the rhyme is descrete and, really, genious. i don't really like rhyme since it is often not that well done, but this is smooth and rhythmic. i love the picture this poem paints for me. i'm going on to read more of your stuff! well done! :)
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| Beyond The Dawn Of Love (co-written with Lastromantichero)
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2007-06-17
WOW. You are so good, i really feel like an amateur next to you. This is amazing. Good job! :)
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| Miracle Moments
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2007-06-16
I love it, very beautiful.
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| It wasn't out there somewhere
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2006-11-15
I really like the first part of it, but I don't really know what you want to say with the last part, or with what words you want to say it.. I really like how you use the language and the words.
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| This is how I live
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2006-11-15
I really like it. The words are intriguing, and it really gets to me in some way.
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from USA 