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AN ODE TO MOON

2012-02-19
welcome to poetbay. ..

beautiful poem .. very well written ... Love with Shakespeare.. reflects :)


I need u

2011-10-20
short.. beautiful .. real


I wish

2011-10-05
I wish you'll be appreciated by the members of the bay for your beautiful writings :).

Nice one :) and Welcome to this bay of happiness :)

Regards
Amandeep


Broken

2011-08-19
Beautiful Poem. Touched the heart..


i lust you

2011-08-16
its beautiful. Enjoyed reading this one :)


An obsession?

2011-05-28
this is the beauty .. i really loved this poem .. wish you happiness


simply..want to reach u..

2011-02-03
nice one .. enjoyed reading this poem:)


Decieved

2010-12-28
All i can say about this poem is this .. that it is filled with very strong emotions and love..beautiful poem .


All my Life

2010-07-25
Oh beautiful Poem . Wonderful and so lovely.

Applauds.

Bookmarked


Hurt

2010-07-25
oh ,,.. your poems are just wonderful.. you are expressing your innerself... so sad and full of feelings ..

I wish soon You'll see the "Light" and Again your hopes will be alive and Soon you'll be star Gazer.. :) Wish you happiness

Welcome to this Bay of Love

Regards
Amandeep


Destination

2010-07-25
Becautiful text.. sad and pain . you expressed your feelings so beautifully.
".....Sadness is my Destination"

I was just reading this text and lost in memories may be I found myself (to some extent) in your writing. But I think we should never curse life. Happiness and Sorrows are like the two sides of the coin. They co-exist. I know there comes time when we lost all the hopes and just feel that everything just gone and nothing left. But Sun rises after the darknesss.. So "Learnings" never stops.. :) .. keep walking on the road and you'll reach your destination one day .. and yeah I was talking that we should not curse life because .. see if we curse someone then we can't expect polite and good from that one .. so as life .. if we will curse Our life then how can we expect that it will give us something Good in return . So .. Try to be happy.. Stand up .. and Start Walking .. See the beauty around you. Try to find the inspiration in the little stuff even. You'll Surely Happy.. Take Care. Wish you a happy life


Long Live Democrazy

2009-12-20
Truely .. Wonderful it is


Onions You are better than A invisible God

2009-12-20
it was wonderful and thought provoking text.. i liked it . lovely.. what a comparison.. few days ago i was reading some sort of story. that was related to poverty and richness. that poors worship a alot. everyday , every time .. they just involved in the Worship of God.. and on the other side Rich one .. awakes neary 10-11 AM and never prayed... lolz.. but still the rich was rich .. living life happily and poor ...just the life with difficulties... he ask god ..why ?????

when i was reading your poem .. this story just came into mind .. haha. dunno what to say you.. because "Scientist makes a thing for good use of humans, but we use that thing for destructive purpose.".... God Created human for doing something good.. but .......... i think you are smarter than me.. you can understand better...

oh ..about temples.. haaha .. yeah agree.. BIG MONEY SHEEPS are sitting in the temple with very Respectful name "Pujari" and "HEAD of the TEMPLE"..

i was just astonished(and smiling) ...when i heard some channel on the TV , interviewing a pujari, Pujari said, "If you donate more and more money to the God then your wishes will come true..." haahha... wow.. what a nice business/deal with God...

Sir, so much to write here.. but some other day will share with you... but thanks for sharing this stuff.... Really a cool stuff

Regards
Amandeep


Beyond

2009-12-13
Welcome to this bay of love..
present asks past.... Why you come again and again?? to hurt me, to make me cry?.. past just answers.. I am just making you strong so that Future can never hurt u ...

keep writing .. nice text..loved the feelings behind this poem.. it was a nice text..

ENJOY WRITING Here....!!!!!!!!
Regards
Amandeep


The Brilliance of Being

2009-12-12
it was so beautiful .. and fantastic.. just expressed the human thinking/mind...lolz. nice one.. i read ur bio too.. that was also awesome... wow

regards
amandeep


Decisions

2009-12-10
a little thoughtful text.... why does it happens when we just cant decide What to do ..or not to do.... nice ..one

regards
amandeep


The Little Part of Me

2009-12-10
Yeah really you have such beautiful art of reflecting your emotions/feeling beautifully in a poem.... beautiful poem...

regards
amandeep


Dream World

2009-12-09
ooo ...wow .. what a cool poem.. beautiful , tender and so so dreamy... it has REAL Dreamy touch .. lovely.. you have wonderful quality of relating the surrounding with the emotions of people in a poem....
*applauds*
with best wishes
Amandeep


Tibet is our issue... India is our soulmate...

2009-06-23
Nice Post

Being an Indian .. I am feeling so much proud.


Right-handed

2009-02-06
yeah i liked this one.. i enjoyed reading this poem..
It was very nice..


Taste

2009-02-06
hmm the first stanzas were fantastic..something different i found this ..

welcome to this bay of love and peace


a horse called flint <3

2009-02-02
Welcome to this bay of love and peace..

liked the poem ... u love ur horse so much ....poem reflects ur love...

nice peace... the way was good... different but still nice.. (once i wrote the same as ur way)


Don't leave

2009-01-27
it was a heartfelt poem.. beautifully wrote and well expressed.. May God Bless You


Heartiest Welcome to u on this bay of love and peace

Regards
Amandeep


Cheaters

2009-01-16
two different situation.. just changed with a sudden

nice ..well expressed

Welcome to this bay of love and peace


Rhyme Royal Compilation

2009-01-13
congratulations to everyone...
yeah nice poems..
congratulations to Seda also... her poem won the comp.


May I have this dance?

2009-01-06
yeah it was a fantastic poem....the scene was fantastic. nice one..

tough i dont know how to dance yet i felt i am dancing under the shadows of moon light with a cool singing breeze


A photograph

2009-01-06
Beautiful poem ..

Time goes by,

Things change,

People change,

Nothing stays the same,

Only things that remain with us are Memories.


Possibilities

2008-12-24
nice and beautiful poem..
lovely text

keep it up

and u are good poet


The blue winter breeze

2008-12-18
once i read the poem by Emily Dickenson where she expressed that "loosers know the real taste of Win"

but i think u are a winner urself..who could participated in India Level competition.. I remember once that when i was in 10th then i joined Air wing NCC camp and i got the Third position in the "Firing (shooting) compt." and i was sad and happy... but my firned just realized me that how big victory it was.. because it is not easy to get the third position among more than 350 students..

and in my case they were just 350...but i know in urs ...they would be thousands...

so congrats..and i assure u that u'll win next time..


Bad Music

2008-12-14
ur style is quite different

but i liked it ...though it has no rhyme ..but it feels like it has


Culture

2008-12-14
yeah thoughtful

nice one


CHRISTMAS AND BEYOND!!!

2008-12-14
this poem was beautiful
i enjoyed it

especially third stanza..it was so nice...

such a nice poetry

welcome to this bay of love

regards
amandeep


Dearest BFF,

2008-12-09
this poem is good

nice one


Insecurity

2008-12-09
Insecurity....

why are u feeling insecure..


forgotten the days

2008-12-09
this was wonderful poem.. i liked this poem ..may be ..because i went through this...but anyway nice poetry..keep it up


she gave me

2008-12-09
nice ...last stanza was nice and i would suggest u Tamar ... if u wrote the poem directly poetbay ..then write carefully...because there were some typing mistakes in the poem...other wise u can write the poem into the MS word and perfrom a spelling check ...then just copy and paste the poem here...

i hope u'll look after this

by the way
welcome to the bay

regards
amandeep


My soul.. no My songmate..

2008-12-06
ur poem is a great tribute to them
excellent work

just read this u'll understand what i think

http://amanspoetry.wordpress.com/category/my-texts/

regards
amandeep


What I see in me...

2008-12-06
everyone has so many expectation from their children

they want to see him/her a doctor, engineer , pilot or so on...

but reality lies in ur heart and mind..


to: you; from: me.

2008-12-01
it was a goood poem
the third stanza is quite interesting ..(gave me some knowledge :) )

last lines of poem was so beautiful...amazing poem..


i am

2008-12-01
nice poem..welcome to Poetbay

thoughts were nice and enjoyed ur style of writing


Tears and Laughter

2008-11-27
hmmm truely i say... i need to understand this.... plz tell me what do u mean by this


Happy Birthday Marjan!!!!

2008-11-25
oh yes...its marjan's birthday

Happy birthday...thought she is not here on this site..but she is always be in our poems and in our thoughts...in our heart

Many many happy returns of the day

great work sir


words

2008-11-20
nice one

there must be heart instead of mind???? what do u

anyway good text...enjoyed reading this


proved wrong.

2008-11-20
Welcome to this bay

nice poem..true reflection of ur thoughts and the way was simple but good and impressive


Do you think they care?

2008-11-19
hats off to u
* Bookmarked *


I hate you doctor

2008-11-16
the way of expressing ur thoughts (or anger )...was fantastic ..and rhym was good..the line.."I hate u doctor'..haahaa..nice

well done and well written


Would you be my valentine

2008-11-16
hahaha...enjoyablepoem
good written


Twisted Time

2008-11-01
fantastic poetry..

rhyme was nice and words were powerful ..thoughts were exceptional and great..

Hats off to u


Smothered

2008-11-01
when i was reading ur poem ..i just looked at ur profile picture..wow..!! beautiful
ur poem is nice the idea is good..

i dont know...but truely i say its the first time tha i am not getting the word to write about love..eehhe:)

i dont know about love much...so

what i know..that is "Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love"

anyway nice text...some another day i''ll comment on the related text

regards
amandeep


The Little Girl Who Cries

2008-11-01
ur poem was a relection of a child ...u expressed the feelings of that child who is dying to talk to his parents ..who is dying to get love from their parents..nice beautifull u wrote..well done

sorry i read ur poems very lately..
but even then i would like to welcome u here

Welcome to poetbay, bay of love, inspiration and peace

regards
amandeep
Nice quote on ur profile..i admire and respect