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79 years old from Canada


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All Souls Shall Arise

2023-12-14
The poem is spot on and I’ll blessed to be considered worthy of your thoughts Dougie. May we Al “find in life eternity’s sunrise”

Joe


SOWED SEEDS (My Response To josephus Work)

2023-09-04
Well said Ken. We plant, not for ourselves, but those who come after us.


Sundry Notebook Jottings

2023-06-06
Like an artist’s sketch book. Random but collectable. They’ll be of use one day.


CARING FOR FREINDS (Added Line)

2023-06-06
Well written Ken. You’re a good friend indeed!


FINAL HORIZON

2023-04-14
Beautifully written! Ethereal. The last stanza is especially compelling, Bravo!


The Stations of The Cross - Epilogue

2023-04-14
I sincerely hope you will publish this brilliant opus Dougie. I ve refrained from commenting on each station, holding back until this epilogue I knew would be presented. It is a fitting end to a magnificent work of meditation; theologically sound yet innovative in context and structure. BRAVO ZULU!


The Stations of The Cross - First Station

2023-04-08
Magnificent work. It reads as Jean Valjean’s monologue in Les Miserables. Brilliant. Bravo!


The Stations of The Cross - Second Station

2023-04-07
Brilliant interpretation of Judas’ actions and motive.


The Stations of The Cross - Third Station

2023-04-07
Bravo! Very well crafted with a fine sense of rhyme and rhythm. The “Stations” is a huge task. Again BRAVO ZULU!


Sunday Morning Gratitudes

2023-03-30
AMEN, THOMAS!


This

2023-03-30
Bravo! Succinct and on target!


The Disillusionist

2023-03-28
You write very powerfully of the worst of the evil ones in our world. Those who prey on the naivety of others beliefs in God


For Sam

2023-03-28
Simply lovely, Kathy. A beautiful tribute and prayer for a loved brother.


MUSIC TO MY EARS

2023-03-21
What a wonderful fresh poem Alan you had me smiling on a dreary March day. Thank you!


A dark future

2023-03-21
Brilliant! Beautifully rendered with a constant evolving theme and close attention to a subtle rhyme scheme. BRAVO!


Prayer

2023-03-20
Great distillation!


5 Micropoems, March 2023

2023-03-20
Nicely done Tom. I especially like the first and last!


Time slips by, bye bye

2023-03-15
Surgically written but containing huge volumes for the reader to ponder. Bravo!


castle walls

2023-03-15
All I can do is echo both Tom and John. Brilliant…! Bravo…!


Inklings

2023-03-15
Brilliant! I especially am drawn to “ like the sun,
death cannot be looked at directly.” Bravo!


GARY LINEKER - THE FOX ON THE BOX

2023-03-15
The UK has been a nation populated by refugees and conquerers since before the Roman invasion in 52 BC. Good point Ken. I don’t think a full blooded native Brit exists today.


SS ST LOUIS CARRYING 900 REFUGEES 1939 (Work In Progres)(Aditans)

2023-03-14
Ken it’s critical that you retell this story. Your style is surgical as always. I am at a loss to understand how we as a race have not learned from history. It’s men and women such as you that hold our collective feet to the fire by reminding us of the horrors we have so casually perpetrated. I pray that one day it will sink in.

Joe


The Sun

2023-03-14
Well done Joseph. Bravo!


Ye Shall Have a Song

2023-03-13
We each have a song, unique to us alone. Our life journey is the finding of it. Our prayers are the singing of it. Beautifully posited Tom.


I Love You for who You are ...

2023-03-11
Beautifully rendered. The Greek word for love of this nature is Agapao. Someone is very fortunate.


Julie

2023-03-11
AHH sweet memories! And they become more pleasant with each recall. Well done!


Cherry Tree

2023-03-11
Nicely Done!


BAD BOY'S LAMENT

2023-03-11
Interesting poem. I think you’ve struck a universal chord in this piece. We all have regrets about encounters where we acted in a less than positive fashion with others. Acknowledgement of that is healing.

Well done


FOR A LIFETIME?

2023-03-11
Far less monumental events have imbedded themselves in my cluttered memory bank. Be joyful that yours is there in all its sensuality and eroticism.


Sorrowing Passenger

2023-03-09
Brilliantly evocative!


PHONE FAULT

2023-03-09
🤣🤣


March 1989

2023-03-09
The dying pain of winter balanced against the birth pains of spring. Brilliant work Tom. You’ve subtly created an almost erotic pain in the birthing of spring. Bravo! I mirror Jim’s comment with your seminal line. “It is spring when the wind says it’s spring” Glorious!


A WRITER

2023-03-09
Don’t you wish we could be the “writer” of our lives!?
Well done Ken


Could do better

2023-03-08
I disagree. On this forum especially, all subjects and writing styles are sacrosanct. I may find one post rather facile and another overly obtuse but it is my choice to read, possibly comment and potentially learn from these. It is the writers choice to post and learn from the comments or simply from reading other posts. This is a place of growth for all who partake here.


This Curse of Mine ...

2023-03-08
Brilliantly written. Bravo!


Sir Somebody Or Other

2023-03-07
Facing history in unblemished fashion is not fashionable but it is valuable. You’ve addressed that very well in this poem. Bravo!


C'est pour cette raison (It's for That Reason)

2023-03-07
c'est un refuge pour des gens comme nous. Il n'y a pas d'endroit plus sûr où vos mots et vous êtes si valorisés


BETTER IN THE MOURNING

2023-03-03
A gentle telling of a love lost… interesting rhyme and cadence. Bravo!


wait what

2023-03-03
Yep!


Evan John

2023-02-24
You’re a lucky woman,Kathy. Your poem sums it up beautifully!


unbuttoning

2023-02-21
Brilliant collection of verse, Jim


midnight (at the oasis)

2023-02-21
Yep! And so it is😁


FOX

2023-02-21
Lovely, Alan!


The Self-Crowned Emperor Of The French

2023-02-19
Wow! Quite a saga. Bravo!


The Sea

2023-02-18
Absolutely! Great economy of words but holding significant context on a topic very close to my heart! Bravo!


Summit

2023-02-18
You’ve made me smile, Alan. That’s a good thing!


Mixed ups

2023-02-11
A very enjoyable romp through your lively imagination. Bravo Alan!


People Change

2023-02-11
Well written. Hang in there. What appears catastrophic today will become landscape tomorrow. Trust yourself. You are getting better with every day you live!


I Know The Wolf

2023-02-11
This left me thinking… as great writing should.


All the Legends

2023-02-10
Well written, DG! It’s a very familiar chord well struck!
To everything there is a season. The challenge, to accept it all with grace and gentleness