| Go away
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2007-09-10
all the lines you written... are looks like soliloquies ...
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| BOW DOWN
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2007-09-10
Nice poem ....
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| I said...
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2007-04-25
I said I'd never write,
You know it's true,
I have not really written,
As I used to...
It is a real feeling of real writer. always writer feels that he failed to write what he thought. If he is succeeded in this he never try to write again.
nice lines thanks,
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| in the wind
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2007-04-18
and the wind cries your name...
Lamentation on loved love ...
good poem...
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| Password for Happiness
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2007-04-17
Nature,
It is simply superb...
I liiiiiiiiiiiiked it very much..
thanks,
for the password..
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| Slash the open heart...
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2007-04-13
How nicely your are telling your observations. Deep rooted emotions are coming out very well...
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| Gin and lime
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2007-04-12
Lime and wine...
good poem...
I wrote a poem on lemon ..
in which I had written the different use of lemon..
Read ..
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| Equation
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2007-04-12
the poem is really fentastic with the beauty of its first person expression. I enjoyed the feeling and the comparision...
thank you for a feeling..
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| Between the Breaths
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2007-04-11
Death is a leveller,
the life in between death..
incidents in our life sometime feels like death..
we have to live with al those deaths..
It is really a good allegory for life..
I enjoyed...
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| Taj Mahal by Moonlight
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2007-03-30
Really the feeling in the poem is fantastic. You know it is my dream to see the Taj in full moon. Last year I went delhi and planned the trip to Agra in between my vehicle caught some problem. I cancelled my trip. till the beauty of the Taj in full moon is Dream for me. Thanks to your poem.
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