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Susan Hanging Hearts

2018-08-15
Thank you for the applauds josephus and Thomas DeFreitas :)


Susan Hanging Hearts

2018-08-14
Thank you to ken d williams, one trick pony, Praveen Bhusal
and Sona for the applauds :)


The Power of Reading

2018-08-13
Thanks for the applaud one trick pony :)


The Power of Reading

2018-08-11
Thanks for the applaud Bibek :)


The Power of Reading

2018-08-10
Thank you to ken d williams for the applaud :)


Worlds You Left Behind

2018-08-08
Thank you to one trick pony and Coo & Co for the applauds :)


Worlds You Left Behind

2018-08-07
Thank you for the applaud Praveen Bhusal :)


Seventy Years was Long Enough

2018-08-07
Unfortunately yes.


Wheel of Fortune

2018-08-07
Sounds like a delightful two days. Our hearts ride roller coasters and our moods follow.


Letter to a Friend

2018-08-07
Deeply heartfelt. Some days we unfortunately never forget. They are imprinted into our being. I am always amazed at how life can change from one moment to the next. It is after all only a moment, but it embeds sadness into our soul.


Stop All The Clocks

2018-08-07
Wonderfully introduced in the first three stanza where we are not sure about the reason for the woe. And then the drop into the reality of the piece that gives us the entire understanding of the lead-up. The rhymes are great and the ending is so heart wrenching. Brilliant.


Tripping to Tresco

2018-08-07
What a wonderful journey :) I love the rhymes. You write so beautifully of a trip full of colour and life. My mental tripping never has the detail that you manage. Perhaps you are traveling first class :) :)


Those Who Care

2018-08-06
Thank you to Bibek, ken d williams, Praveen Bhusal and Thomas DeFreitas for the applauds :)


Those Who Care

2018-08-04
Thank you for the applaud josephus :)


Sonnet

2018-08-01
I wish I could do that. Extra kudos for the "cogent meme" reference.


The Small, Immediate World

2018-08-01
Wonderful Tom. How peaceful this world would be following these instructions :)


Upon the Desert

2018-08-01
Thanks for the applaud Bibek :)


Upon the Desert

2018-07-31
Thank you to ken d williams for the applaud :)


Perhaps I am a Bird

2018-07-25
Thank you for the applaud Bibek :)


Perhaps I am a Bird

2018-07-24
Thank you to Ashe and josephus for the applauds :)


The End of My Beginning

2018-07-22
Thank you to Thomas DeFreitas, ken d williams, Bibek
and Ashe for the applauds :)


Quotidian

2018-07-20
I have found that good writers can make even the dreary exciting. There is no difference between life and art in that sense. There are always empty suits, the bad news is that they are a product of ourselves. Even though this is a bit sad I enjoyed it. Is that callous of me?


Words to Window Sills

2018-07-20
Thank you for the applauds ken d williams and melanie sue :)


Morning in Harbour

2018-07-19
Wonderful. Puts us right in the picture.


Water

2018-07-19
Good to see you back! Da Vinci said that "water is the driving force of all nature" and used to work out wave structure everywhere else. Perhaps he saw exactly what you have seen and explained in this fine work :)


Evil In Us All

2018-07-18
The last two lines sum it all up. Very powerful.


For Bipin

2018-07-18
Brilliantly constructed. I like it!


Last Night I Had A Dream About You

2018-07-18
Wonderful. Perhaps dreams cross into different dimensions and reach people. they are certainly a different consciousness.
is the repeating first line a type of style or did you decide on it that way? Nice.


Connections

2018-07-18
Thank you to ken d williams and Ashe for the applauds :)


Blood Flows

2018-07-16
Thank you for the applaud Coo & Co :)


Thoughts of You.

2018-07-14
Sudden loves are sometimes the ones you remember most. Nice.


A Modern, Feminist Beauty

2018-07-14
She is a real gem Bibek. I like the line "She is a half-burnt
Crimson piece of wood". Great stuff.


Buttons

2018-07-14
Great stuff. It's fun to push people's buttons sometimes.


Sharp

2018-07-14
yes, they have much of us. I wish it were only the good things. I enjoyed this :)


Straight, No Chaser

2018-07-14
Well done. The first one was the best :)


Woulda, Shoulda, Buddha

2018-07-14
Very clever. There is something to be said for Buddha sitting.


Mandalay

2018-07-14
Thanks to Bibek and Thomas DeFreitas for the applauds :)


Life is For the Leaving

2018-07-14
Thanks to Bibek and one trick pony for the applauds :)


Blood Flows

2018-07-14
Thanks to Bibek, one trick pony and Thomas DeFreitas for the applauds :)


Saved

2018-07-13
I like the last line. Oh and the rest of course.


The Incense Ritual

2018-07-13
Yes, very clever. Justifiably cyclic.


Augusta

2018-07-13
I like it. "swerve city" and "december's disaster" are very clever. Makes you wonder.


Blood Flows

2018-07-13
Thank you to ken d williams and shells for the applauds :)


Life is For the Leaving

2018-07-12
Thank you so much for the applaud Thomas DeFreitas :)


Mandalay

2018-07-10
Thank you for the applaud - ken d williams :)


Life Overboard (Ring the Bell)

2018-07-08
Thank you Thomas DeFreitas and Ashe for the applauds :)


Breaking News

2018-07-07
A sad way to receive some kind of closure. Life goes on and how we deal with loss structures the future world. You have written this as a report but turned it also into art. That is hard to do. Big hugs my friend.


I Hear You Sing

2018-07-07
Oh this is so good. Both stanzas are so well constructed and the last skips along to the sound of the song. I can almost hear it myself and I have a bag full of broken dreams :)


Capriccio Macchiato

2018-07-07
What fun! I loved it.


Learic

2018-07-07
Well done. A wondrous use of words :)