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SEEN TIME TO TIME

2018-02-18
Good on him. I love individualists who have something to say.


BLOODY GUNS!

2018-02-18
Good question Ken.


Something Else

2018-02-18
Wonderful, especially the last 2 lines :)


For My Astronomer

2018-02-18
Beautiful. You know that you are not allowed to look at an eclipse with the naked eye. So you will have privacy :)


Forget About the Future

2018-02-18
A wonderful thought. Be here now.


Vernal Sequence

2018-02-18
It reads like pieces of a dream. Nice snippets.


Blues in The Morning

2018-02-18
Strange how we get solace from the blues. We do though. Great stuff.


green for green

2018-02-18
Very interesting Thomas. Dreams and wakefulness are intriguing.


Mrs Chicken

2018-02-18
Lol, I love it. Trapped with a feuding loved one on a plane, lol :)


Milky Way

2018-02-18
the sky at night in the country is wonderful. Overpowering in a way. I am afraid I am used to city stars. Nicely done Joe.


The Kidder

2018-02-16
Nicely done. Made me smile, dickens and chickens, lol


Two Valentine Poems

2018-02-16
Ooo I love them both. But the second one is so brilliantly contrived. You write well about love :)


Wonder

2018-02-13
Well done indeed :)


To be Human

2018-02-13
So true, unfortunately.


A Proximate Approximate

2018-02-13
Nice to have plans. And lovers to choose from :)


After The Singing

2018-02-12
Sad. We hold onto life like we hold a good hand. But eventually we have to play it. A nice memorial to her Helen.


Why?

2018-02-12
Because you have been hurt. Sometimes we even destroy relationships unwittingly rather than give of ourselves. There is less hurt then. This is open and honest and heartfelt.


Islets

2018-02-07
Lots of cool phrases here. Not waving but drowning I guess.


the salesman of the infinite night

2018-02-07
Commercials seem to be infinite in length. I enjoyed this snippet of life.


Sighting

2018-02-07
Interesting :)


IN THE YEAR XXXX! (Completed)

2018-02-07
A brave new world Ken.


Forget Somethin?

2018-02-07
We do that with shopping lists, lol :) Nicely done.


Happy birthday to my cousin Deyana Ivanova by Ann Wood

2018-02-07
Happy Birthday Deyana :)


Elon’s Legacy

2018-02-07
There could be exciting times ahead for space exploration buffs like me. You may well have nicely captured the future here.


When White Is Not Enough

2018-02-01
I missed this one. powerful and so well written. Who suffers more, those you had everything and lost it, or those who never had it?


Revolution

2018-02-01
I watched a documentary about them a while back. What a terrible life to live. I suppose it went along with strong violent beliefs. How do they feel now? You portray the subversive life so well.


Nativity Star

2018-02-01
I missed this one. It has a contented feeling to it. Probably the season to be reflective. Great stuff.


Intrusión

2018-02-01
Clever creatures cockroaches :)


single lock buckle or double lock buckle is enough

2018-02-01
I don't get this. Is it an add or perhaps a modern statement of poetic art?


Trust Me

2018-02-01
Don't we all. I enjoyed this helen :)


'MY NAME IS SAM!'

2018-02-01
You have a good heart Ken. Sounds like a good day :)


russia

2018-02-01
Do they? I suppose everything is comparative.


Midnight Eyes

2018-02-01
Beautiful but sad. Owls are scary but wonderful creatures.


January 31

2018-02-01
You are such a good writer. Conveying the mood wonderfully.
I had heard the word milquetoast before but had to look it up. It fits well. I have shredded hopes for breakfast every morning :)


Quietus

2018-01-30
Wonderful writing.


batter up

2018-01-30
A metaphorical life game. I think I will stay on the bench. Well done.


Don't Forget

2018-01-30
I love this so much. So many great lines (especially the last). You have the ability to combine great life lessons with humour.
As for me, I often take pleasure in being a cranky and solitary figure at war with the world, lol.


It's A Beautiful Day

2018-01-26
Great rhymes and enjoyable to read.


January

2018-01-26
Well done Bibek. This is laced with the feeling of lost love.


Nasty, Pure Nasty!

2018-01-25
Makes me wonder what they are. Mice perhaps. Interesting though :)


Useless Memories

2018-01-25
So much worry in this work. Something unresolved perhaps. We all have parrots on our shoulders. But we must remember that they are only parrots.


Bearings and Seals

2018-01-23
What a wonderful snippet. The play on words with the pic is good too.


Strange Math

2018-01-23
Lolol :) love it.


Huelo raro

2018-01-23
A very smelly poem, but interesting to read.


Technology Takes Another Job

2018-01-23
So true indeed. Orwell was right.


Monster

2018-01-23
That is the problem. The stalking thoughts afterwards. The is a fine piece although it is about a sad issue.


Civil Engineering

2018-01-22
You should post this in twitter. Is that the right way to say it? I know nothing about how that works. Of course this would go straight over the presidential head :)


The Vessel

2018-01-22
Very well done. I often wonder if the the things that are man-made have a "soul". Perhaps an imprint of our being contained there. Of course all the major religions would call me very wrong for suggesting such a thing. But still the thought is there. I liked the rhymes here too. Mine have been rather unimaginative lately.


Thunderstorms

2018-01-19
You mix pain and imagery so well. An angel washed world we drown in is so clever a thought.


Turkey

2018-01-19
Oh I love the last line. I love it all actually. The turkey muse.