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lost in paradise

2017-06-24
Wonderful piece. I can feel the relaxed atmosphere and sense the trepidation :)


TO ALL MY FREINDS ON POETBAY

2017-06-23
Thank YOU ken, for your friendship and encouragement. Poetbay is a wonderful place to hide from the world and express all our feelings without being judged or harassed. Bravo mate :)


A Journey Of The Heart

2017-06-21
New love brilliantly expressed. I am happy for you :)


Truth

2017-06-19
Wonderful piece. It fits so well with the time we live in. People would have us believe that there are layers of truth. It is the era of subjectivity. Bravo.


Not Floating but Exploding

2017-06-16
A very good reflective piece. Perhaps as we get older we notice things more and combine them with past memories.


MANCHESTER AND LONDON!

2017-06-14
The world can be a terrible place Ken. Nicely written.


Meet Me In The Parlour?

2017-06-14
There is a lesson there for us. Very nicely written.


Benvenuto

2017-06-14
Good for you. A lot of people don't like spiders. This is warm and playful. Who knows, perhaps like Robert he will give you inspiration :)


Keep me in your hands by Ann Wood

2017-06-14
This is so good Ann. Bravo indeed.


Destiny.

2017-06-14
It is good that you remain hopeful.


Walking, Or Whatever

2017-06-14
I love it :) Maybe you need to put them on a chain :)


One step in each second, become miles in time.

2017-06-14
That is all we can do sometimes.


Love

2017-06-14
best time of year :)


Empty Shell

2017-06-14
The "empty shell" reference is clever. I can't even pretend to know the feeling.


Three Weeks Hence

2017-06-14
A new lease of life. Well expressed.


Stability

2017-06-14
Very nice. And kind of comforting :)


Parting

2017-06-08
I can feel the anguish in this. The eyes/compass metaphor is striking and apt in such a situation. Well done indeed.


Memorial Day

2017-06-04
Very nicely expressed.


Driven

2017-06-04
Sounds like a bad experience. Well explained.


Driven

2017-06-04
Sounds like a bad experience. Well explained.


After Blake

2017-05-31
So good Thomas. Your rhymes are clever and meaning excellent. Praise to all types of life as well as interesting connections :)


One's Paradise

2017-05-29
Ha ha, that's right :)


MANCHESTER - 22 MAY 2017!

2017-05-29
Well done Ken. Sometimes terrible things happening brings out the best in people.


Arena

2017-05-29
This is interesting when you consider that many see the first "terrorists" as being in response to Roman rule in the first century AD and possibly even further back. The historic comparison you present is really well constructed.


Paint Me A Picture

2017-05-29
What an interesting thought. We always want the best for loved ones who have passed away. Beautifully written.


Bully

2017-05-29
Reminds me very much of someone we all know. It amazes me how these people are so egocentric that they cannot see what they have become. Great piece :)


Welcome Back

2017-05-25
Welcome back indeed. There are lots of poker faces these days.


WHEN LIFE!

2017-05-24
Just like a pommie. Complain about the weather. Hope you are not too down. All the seasons are mixed up these days.


An Ordinary Day

2017-05-24
Great imagination. Great piece.


Weightless Sand

2017-05-24
Interesting structure and great title.


I thank you

2017-05-24
This is great. Life is everything and experiences cannot be separated from it.


The song

2017-05-24
Nice. We all need a good song in our heart.


innocence

2017-05-24
the idea of innocence being overtaken by light is a good one Victor.


Homeless

2017-05-24
You have a wonderful way of painting pictures with words. And it is all true. Bravo.


And We Call It, "Love"

2017-05-24
It is strange how love is riddled with illusion. I think that love is more of an attitude than a feeling. Great as usual.


Just Breathe Baby

2017-05-24
I like this. Great advice too ;)


gold lined pockets

2017-05-24
very clever indeed :)


I'm Here

2017-05-24
Yes, welcome back Thomas. This is delightful.


In silence I find you.

2017-05-24
This is so heartfelt and beautiful Louise :)


Sleep and Poetry

2017-05-23
You are a master of it all :)


Hollerin' At Me?

2017-05-22
Lolol :) Great stuff. That would be a good name for a book "Holler At The Devil" :)


the sutra of disconnectedness

2017-05-22
Great stuff. Though Manson does not appeal to me.


shit people

2017-05-22
Crooks and shit people. Maybe you need to change bars. Interesting because if we could really read people by seeing them we would probably be shocked.


I Like Rainbows, Too

2017-05-22
This is very powerful. You recall a lot for someone who can't remember. All presented in a fine patchwork montage.


Stepping Away

2017-05-18
I hope you can and that all your worries fly away. There is a determination in this that I like :) hugs


Oranges for My Mother

2017-05-09
This is really good Bibek. From the title right through the interesting content.


Eva

2017-05-09
I like the way this flows down. Like thoughts emitted in hope0


Night Spat

2017-05-09
I love it! :)


Zion

2017-05-09
You describe it well. I wish I could soar on an updraft.


BORN IN A SMALL MINDED LITTLE TOWN

2017-05-09
I hate cliques. But they exist everywhere. Sometimes this earth seems like a little town to me. Good one Ken.