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Star Man

2017-08-21
This is so wonderful. I hope you are getting better and a star man is just what you need. Maybe he will find a new constellation and name it after you. Your work always has so much deep passion.


A Young Woman of Boston

2017-08-19
A nice little vignette that fuels the imagination. Well done indeed.


Salt

2017-08-19
So many uses. Makes you think :)


For Zach--39 Years And You're Gone

2017-08-19
So sad. This must have been so hard for you to write. It reads like you are still in a bit of shock. Maybe you are. I am so sorry for the loss.


TIME MARCHING ON!* (Relervant addishans)

2017-08-19
Well said Ken. Complacency brings the mistakes of the past.


"Love Me Little, Love Me Long"

2017-08-19
This is great. I love the rhymes and metaphor. The last two lines wrap it up nicely.


There, Yet Waiting

2017-08-19
Yes, it is a bit subjective. I have read that our brain connections do not work as well when we get old. Maybe we just get more cautious and not actually wiser.


State Fair

2017-08-19
I have been on holidays like that. The problem is that you are really somewhere else.


Customs

2017-08-19
If it begins with F, forget about it being freedom.


The song of the Unborn

2017-08-19
Brilliant. Fields and waves and a tiny bit of matter and everything is possible.


honey

2017-08-19
Wow that's early. Only devotees get up that early. What kind of tea?


A Wee Rhyme about Coffee

2017-08-19
Nice little thought. Nothing like the smell in the morning. I only have 2 cups a day but I look forward to them.


the jar

2017-08-19
Very good :) Like wrinkles on a face.


Inside A Hospital Room

2017-08-17
This is so beautiful. You sound like you have been through so much you poor thing. But the seagull at the end I think is a good sign. He is calling you home. I hope you are recovering nicely my dear friend.


The Last Goodbye

2017-08-07
This is really good Bibek. I love the lines "Every night when the night rubs itself Against the windowpanes". Heart as a beggar is great too. This one's a winner :)


Cars

2017-08-07
Lol :) I love it.


Another Night at the Folies-Bergère

2017-08-07
I like the Lautrec analogy. Holds it all together nicely.


Little tiny flowers.

2017-08-07
beautiful :)


SHAME! Shame on me...

2017-08-07
We all get misinterpreted. At least you know you are popular.


Images

2017-08-07
Wonderful observant imagery.


when she leaves

2017-08-07
This is wonderfully sad. The metaphor of astronomy and star is the icing on the cake.


Sex in the Laboratory

2017-07-30
This is wonderful. Scientific sex must be quite kinky ;)


Consumption

2017-07-30
So sad. But very good.


Some other disaster

2017-07-30
Lolol. We should all have seismological instruments handy :) I like this.


at the park

2017-07-30
Oh the hope of possibilities. We always get ahead of ourselves with people. I would love to see the sketch :)


Meditation

2017-07-30
A good description of immersion into quiet thought.


jean toomer

2017-07-30
Rediscovering classics can be a great thing. The trick is allowing enough time to elapse so that you can pick up the extra dimensions they contain.


Caesar's salad days

2017-07-30
Lol :) very good.


Moving Bridges

2017-07-30
Kennedy said "we choose to go to the moon and do other things not because they are easy but because they are hard." Superficially this sounds like nonsense, but I think he was talking about challenging ourselves and our knowledge. How else do we really know what is possible. This is a wonderful piece and something we should remember.


Writings in the mist.

2017-07-30
This flows nicely :)


The Big One

2017-07-30
Nice Helen. The one that got away ;)


TO LOOK! TO HEAR!

2017-07-30
Yes, everything is spectacular, sometimes frightening but always wonderful. Nice work Ken.


George Strait To My Heart (A love letter)

2017-07-24
I check "yes" too because this is so sweet :)


Scenes From The Window Seat

2017-07-24
Wonderful images. The title is great too.


Pensacola

2017-07-23
Well said indeed.


July

2017-07-23
I enjoyed reading this too. Your Julys are much more interesting than mine.


Would You Believe me?

2017-07-23
So wonderful. You are a star, that is why you are there. I love planetariums, they let you know there is much more to this world.


subtlety

2017-07-23
Word origins, meanings and usage can sometimes differ.


Ray Of Sunshine

2017-07-23
This is so beautiful Helen :)


Happy birthday to my brother Drago by Ann Wood

2017-07-23
Nice. Happy Birthday to him.


Mind thinks

2017-07-23
That's the way it goes Ken :)


Open Notebook Resting on a Porch Rail

2017-07-23
Cool. Only a poet would think such things.


Peace within.

2017-07-23
Your work is always so positive. I like that.


My wish.

2017-07-23
very nice


Bossy Cow's Game

2017-07-23
What a fun poem. Loved it.


Two Figures in Gray

2017-07-23
Yes this is quite sad. I always thought "derring-do" was "daring-do". When ships in the night keep passing each other all the time things get a bit awkward.


Haiku for Hacker

2017-07-23
Not really into the old haiku. But I likes this.


Donahue Field

2017-07-23
A fine tribute. Poets are always good at seeing the story behind the obvious. And have done that so well here.


fifteen meter long ditch

2017-07-20
Powerful and expressive. And intriguing.


The Nineteenth Century

2017-07-20
Beautifully written. I wonder what the answer is? It was a century of prose and hidden feelings and you bring it to life so well.