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Our never ending poem *It's a new day*

2012-02-02
Caught in ripples among the drift ice.
Here, is where our demons demise


Star-struck

2011-03-07
Thanks a lot!
It`s been almost a complete year i think, since i last posted, so it was time to do something about it:) have been busy studying and just never got around to do anything creative (except some notebook-texts like this one)


My friend of misery

2011-03-07
Well written and easy to relate to, and it also keeps to theme of the song expanding the thoughts and words you find in hetfields version of the song.. i like this!


Blend with Me…

2009-12-17
Love for the beloved descrebid in a beautiful way:)
i feel strongly connected to this write because i sometimes struggle to find the right words, words to describe love... as you obviously did in this write:)
i also liked the image you posted to this text!
Thanks for posting this:D

-Cr4ky


Sing a Song of Solitude

2009-02-16
solitude.. a dangerous weapon of a selfdestructing mind unaware of the reality that solitude is a making of it's own

well written, nice flow. liked it a lot!
-Cr4ky


The poet's privilege

2009-01-24
This is the most genius description of a poet i have ever read!
This is the world of the poet caught in motion and described in a way that capture me totally.
I couldn't agree more!

"since it's natural for him
to break conventional dimensions,
since his home is timelessness."
WOW!


Bloodied Cream

2008-12-04
you're on a roll liz:D wicked and good poetry must be thundering through your veins and building up in your head:D keep up the fantastic writing;) or else your head will explode^^


The Backward Man (short story by the writers of Poetbay)

2008-12-01
I'm proud to be a part of this.
a joyful thanks for letting me participate in this:D


Molten Chains of Stone Burdens

2008-11-18
Listening to the song and reading your poem at the same time was one WICKEDLY COOL experience! these stones rock!


You Are Good Enough(For Cr4ky)

2008-09-19
heartfelt hug liz:) and i like the feathers on your wings, they are so soft and warm:)


I Haven't Forgotten PoetBay

2008-08-31
Feels Fantastic to see a post from you again Liz:D it`s been a while!:D
Welcome back!:D


Check Your Six

2008-07-31
Check your six - watch your back/look behind you:D


Illuminate [darkened]

2008-05-21
i hope i won`t go anywhere.. i`d rather just float around in this world looking at the people in the streets without them looking at me.. and sometimes do a prank or two:)

This write is dark and powerful and i can feel the depth of how far you belive your rejection goes.. it drives me mad that the world could possibly do that.. but what do i know, right?
anyhow. remarkable good text and i liked it, like the mood of your text.

Sincerely
Øystein


Update to the family of Poetbay

2008-05-19
Keep up the good work S!! and by all means keep posting updates throughout the month so that this reaches every outpost of the bay;)


The journey of the tear of sorrow - To our romantic hero

2008-05-16
absolutely!


To the family of Poetbay

2008-05-16
ready anytime:)


missing you...

2008-05-11
a fine start! good rythm and flow.. could almost hear a tune in my head while reading this. a text with good potential of becoming a beautiful and heartfelt song! keep the spirit alive and feel the song in the poet inside of you!
Kindly
Øystein


Never look back

2008-03-14
Yes! never look back but use the experience!
and to the work of art.. couldn`t agree more, altering the first completion or trying to make things "better" is a dangerous thing to do..
These truisms are as true as can be!

A nice text with good points and simple messages decorated by the craftmanship of a poet!


A Paralyzed girl's song By Aisha Razem

2007-10-11
absolutely fantastic. such images you create in this text! knocked me off my chair!


Along the River Bank

2007-10-01
Excellent images! i closed my eyes and saw the picture being painted.. sad, yet beautiful in the light of the sparkling river, almost felt real for a second:D


Hark!Observe Sméagol - givelendone's ear

2007-02-24
yeeeeees! written well it iiiis:D
precious likes!:D


TIME

2007-02-23
Using time to read this was not a waste at all!
a superbly written text! it must have taken some time;)
well spent time!
great text!

Øystein


MISTY VALLEY

2006-12-10
It left me with a feeling of actually floating on the fog.. just dreaming away into nothing..


Nocturne

2006-12-10
a wonderful composition of words truly creates the fog in this poem and breathes a very heartfelt feeling of life and heartbeats into it
and the way this fog has stopped the time in a perfect moment really does show its outmost beauty!


A contrast of want and need

2006-12-10
a very good reminder of how terrible the contrasts of our world really are!


Never stop!!!

2006-12-10
A strong text!
makes one wake up!

with a new will to fight: to find the life ment to live and never stop living no matter how the world treats you on your path.


Mind Fog…

2006-12-10
The fog is a beautiful place.. an inspirational place
but also a dangerous place.. i think we`ve all been there sometime
a well constructed poetic describtion of the mind fog!
There are many fogs to be within!


There is No Excuse....But Sorry

2006-12-10
This is a extremly good text aaron! makes me sit down and think of what i could have done differently in the past. a strong and true text!


A Flame

2006-12-10
strong text! a good flow of flaming words!
the flames within are indeed able to light up again and make us feel reborn.. well done!


Lies

2006-11-03
wise words wrapped
in a
very viciously verdict
and the
thruth told towards
the
people playing perfect


A Sensual Scene

2006-11-03
hehe.. it`s the chocolate love story:D
well written. chocolate sweet:D

dark, white or milk-chocolate?


Under True Illusions ~Liz's Challenge~

2006-10-19
nice! this is a very good text and i believe this could make a hit;D


[song] No More Living Fantasys [Under true illusions now]

2006-10-19
you nailed it! this is a great song liz!
verse 2 really rocked:D enjoyed reading this!:D


Some sweaty lines, four (4) Nepenthes' four line challenge

2006-10-16
enjoyed this one;) nice!


Blackout

2006-10-12
haha.. another frustration got it`s words on the bay! love this:D electricians are slow when things go wrong, and man! who doesn`t get pissed when the coffees cold??


The cellphone rings while I’m driving

2006-10-11
frustrated? guess so^^ i would probably be a person doing things like that.. just leaving the car and walk:D love the twist it gave at the end:D a higlight of this text:)
nice man! good write:D


Blue in the Face (Kiss challenge)

2006-09-26
ooh^^ intense write! intense kissing!:D

what a woman!!


Empathy

2006-09-23
love it!bloody wonderful!
i do the same thing form time to time..
just walk out into the streets to find myself^^ it`s a trip for the mind:D


Walk this way (A Tribute to AEROSMITH)!

2006-09-22
rock on! i "sing for the moment" ! nice tribute!


Can I have?

2006-09-22
you are Reina de la noche, but blooming everyday makes you quite exceptional! take all the time you need! and do take care of yourself!


A song for the bed (Rock on)!

2006-09-22
Write more of this!

"the show must go on"!;)


Lessons about Life (ABC Challenge)

2006-09-22
nicely put! a good write.. nice flow, good choices of words!


From The Cradle by M.A.Meddings an entry to Kathy's music challenge

2006-09-21
Clapton acoustic:D a good write:D
only missing claptons music! that would send this to the top!


My shadow and I

2006-09-19
this is haunting!

A very good image.. a little scary to think about though.. but such a strong text!

Bravo!


Unlock, please!

2006-09-19
...i just almost blew my brains out^^

this is deep thinking... deep..
man... now i need some coffee to get my brain started again..


Words by M.A.Meddings

2006-09-18
GREAT! you are a superb poet! that`s for sure!


New Poets Challenge:"Who or what am I" (Riddle Challenge)

2006-09-18
hmm.. sounds fun:D looking forward to reading the final compilation^^


My Heart Lies Beside Me

2006-09-08
this is a good text, it takes time to get over a lost love. you describe it in a nice way with this poem, very good images of the situation and a beautiful choice of words

"The smokey air blends perfectly
With the smell of my perfume."

really liked the imaginary of this particular part.

-Cr4Ky-


189. In a musical sense

2006-09-08
A philosophers words indeed..

I like the way you center music as a part of the worlds exsistence! music has so much feelings and such a healing effect on people!

Nice!


These Are the Angels of Earth

2006-09-06
strong beatiful text with good sense and a very good mission!

*bookmarked*

-Cr4KY-