moon smile

2012-06-29
Wonderful essence through mixing an outer image with an inner feelings.

2008-04-04
Oh,what an expressing poem,i hardly hold my tears,your words pentrating my heart and mind,i rally feel its depth and you draw it well,but sharing such amazing poem takes me away from the darken loniness that i always have.good luck .hh ,xxxxxx.:):):):)

2007-12-01
Your words carry with its passion this kind of true love emotions in a heart of a delicate romantic person,i loved it sooooooo much, well done:):)

2007-11-29
This is such a gorgeous poem with true feelings,it representing a state we have in it lots of time,yet it have this superior transdental world where we have the chance to think about our soul 's needs away fom life over helming stuff.Well done my friend:):):)

2007-11-29
Your words are having such poetic tenderness with true emotions, and the music it have give it such grat harmony.Bravo,keep writing please.

2007-11-24
Sure it let my thinking dwelling into its far memories,nice piece.

2007-11-10
I raelly catch this sort of woman's deep emotons, an endless sea of love and heartiness,happy the one who could swim in such sea and catch its magical world with no fear .I hope to be friends,and if i am lucky i may receive your comment on my little poems.

2007-11-10
Nothing in life is harde as being a victim by the only heart we gave iyt everything love,sacrifice and true emotions.Your poem has this bitter taste of manipulation of emptions ,and your last two lines end the scene perfectly.

2007-10-30
A mysterious feeling has invaded me when reading your splendid words,it carries some sort of sensitive desciption of our first being ;the purity o our emotions,the first look,our first shaking heart beats,our first dream of love , the only love story that we may carry it inside us and celebrates its charming memories through any new love we may meet,nice piece.

2007-10-30
yes, we need to admit our faults,nice feelings.

2007-10-26
I really touched such pain,where you may smile with paining,extreme agony.well don emy dear.

2007-10-26
In love pain,but no love more pain,good piece.

2007-09-30
Sometimes the weather shares our mood with us,or our soul makr us see life from its own perspective where only our heart can touch life whether with agony or happiness.And that is the real scene which we sometimes could hide from others , but not from us.Good piece,it gave me a chance to think and to feel the reality of ourselves.'I hope to be friends".Moon smile.

2007-09-23
So expressive , i could catch the scene,good work.

2007-09-23
Full of beautiful longing feelings.

2007-09-23
yours is brief and so expressive ,well done my dear.

2007-09-23
Yes,it is hard to trust a wolf who keeps pretending as a lamb,i wrote something closer to the meaning ''Wild Lamb''

2007-09-18
Wow,wow,.......... your words are so touchable ,it embrace the agony of love ,when the struggle is set between your love and your dignity, i wrote a poem of the same meanings "Losten love'', i hope you read it.

2007-09-17
Being lonely is the most cruel feelings, but you know sometimes it give us a chance to discover more about ourselves .your last stanza has a deep wise meanings.

2007-09-17
Oh,i could not find a word to exprees the magnificant feelings i felt when i red your words ,your emotins are so true ,it's a splendid poem, i loved it soooooooo much.

2007-09-03
How soft these emotions? i feel that i already feel the fire of longing......Good piece,my dear.

2007-08-20
This is a lovely poem , i adore the last stanza,because of its deepness , i touched its meanings .

2007-07-31
Nice picture ,and wise words with deep meaning, i believe it.

2007-07-27
yoyr words are splendid your feelings are so true ,i could catch the situation,great piece my dear.

2007-04-01
your ocean of love and pure emotios are so deep, keep its safe depths for all the boats that want to sail in it with there poems,could you please accept me to sail ?Hugs my sensitive friend.

2007-04-01
sooooooooo lovely it embrace all the purity of love,its extreme charming emotions ,the first look with your heart shaking and flying,good piece.

2007-03-24
yes,my dear it is love spell where you cannot escape 4m its charming world,you just love forever ,good piece.

2007-03-24
Oh,your words are so deep,i hope she will forgive .i felt the deep and sincere feelings.Good work.

2007-03-24
soooo cute and delicate ,really has ahonest emotins.

2007-03-17
soooooooooooooo sharming,sensitive piece.i loved its warm emotins.

2007-03-13
Keep dreaming it is the essence of our longing for our aims far oclose,just that would recharge our souls with great strength , a daydreamer can hold the sky with just raising hands ,or touch a magical oses or even smell the breez of spring in the gloomy winter.great piece of poetry.

2007-03-10
good work , your last stanza is so deep, i loved it
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2007-03-09
i loved it so much,especially your last 2 lines.longing and missing our love would stop time to vague, gloomy world.My best wishes ''moon smile''

2007-03-08
sooooooooo lovely words,your emotins are describing what all of us feel ,the world of dream where you can share your love your own world away from the cold reality ,i adore the 7th line,it full of deepness and transcendental love when your love became a part of your soul.Master piece,''Monn smile''.

2007-03-08
you are the true angel my dear with your lovely poems ,so keep flying with such magical wings''your poems'',with love ''moon smile''

2007-03-08
to the point my dear, true love is a pardise you keep seeking all your life ,sth your soul cannot live without.all my wishes to find such love to all humans.Best wishes''moon smile''.

2007-03-06
Wow,your words are so nice,rosy images of deep love.The emotins in it is extremely unique ,good work.GOOD LUCK''moon smile''

2007-03-06
Dear Amanda ,your words are so deep and full of painful facts.And as i am reading i thought you are really live in such pain, but later i discovered that your being an honest human as you are,is the essence of your honesty.With love ''moon smile''

2007-03-06
Oh,my dear zoya i loved that emotions really ,you manage to weave a lovely scene with all the truth and honesty.Where anyone could see hinself or herself in such scene.WITH MY LOVE 'moon smile'.

2007-03-05
So nice words ,my heart shaked in front of your last line,so deep and sensetive image realy catch my tears.

2007-03-03
WOW,memories are the only thing that flame our hearts with life.EVEN our cold days of lonliness and sadeness would never remove our lovely memories ;it is our magical fuel to keep breathing in such life.

2007-03-03
OH ,you do not know how your sweet words touch my heart.AS if my heart was the ink you write with.BRAVOOOOOOO.

2007-03-03
so deep and meaningful,you draw the continuous human circle.Always working ,dreaming,till our life end we hold our dreams to stay more.

2007-03-02
SO DEEP ,AS IF YOU WRITE WHAT ALL THE HUMANTY KNOW AND HIDE INSIDE OURSELVES .BUT THIS IS THE TRUTH YOU CANNOT RECOGNIZE YOURSELF WITHIN ONE SIDE .WE HAVE SO MANY CHARACTERS WITHIN ONE SOUL.EVERY EXPERIENCE YOU MAY GO THROUGH LIFE YOU WILL DISCOVER A NEW CHARCTER INSIDE YOU.BUT IT IS UP TO YOU TO DECIDE WHWTHER TO KEEP THIS SIDE OR JUST IGNORE.