| God's Haiku, An Accrostic
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2007-03-22
Perfect testimony of God's goodness. Reminds me of one of my pieces "Believe". Check it out.
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| Lonely
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2007-03-21
I know exactly what you mean. I love my own company sometimes. I may even opt for being alone, but when that feeling of loneliness comes I "can't stand" it. Good work. Appeals to the reader.
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| During an instant's capture
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2007-03-18
This reminds me of one of my old poems too.. not yet published. You wrote this poem when I was 3 yrs. old but it will still have the same effect 100 yrs. later. Vivid description of the dawn, image of sunrise is awakened. Lovely.
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| Esoteric Lust
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2007-03-17
You did it again Abstrakt.. Bravo.
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| A Haiku
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2007-03-15
Strong imagery of this autumn scenery. The acorn falls softly... yet the bell sounds. I love the quiet intense nature of this poem.
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| Rapture
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2007-03-15
Must also comment on your very artistic name... love it.
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| Rapture
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2007-03-15
Lots of sexual tension, desire. I love the buildup. Now I have "come" to the conclusion that this poem is well written.
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| A Love Lesson
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2007-03-15
A lesson we all must learn. full of depth.
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| A Song of Joy
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2007-03-15
I can hear the melodies of your heart within the natural imagery you've created.
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| Who is Responsible?
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2007-03-13
Very deep. Not one environmental issue left unturned..
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| Love Without End
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2007-03-11
i meant you COULDN'T say it any better
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| Love Without End
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2007-03-11
Vivid expression of love. the spinning and entwining etc. is exactly what our hearts go through when we finally give in to love. you could say it any better.
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| The Secret of Universe
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2007-03-11
the secret of the universe. even after reading this poem we still don't know- nice.
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from Jamaica