| …Not Just A Drop!
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2008-03-31
lucid expressions on a drop,great images... beautiful poem.
thanks!
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| Most strong are the words unspoken...
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2007-11-14
just a small correction,
When heart fills with affection
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| Most strong are the words unspoken...
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2007-11-13
dear Zoya,
When heart flows with affection
In life's azure terrain
Our presence essence rain
From clouds of strong emotions
And my take on that
which never was...
But, could have been...
And better still-still
Has a chance to be...
you inspired me to pen this words in my limited capacity.
Thankyou, my friend
take care
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| In the hall of fame
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2007-11-11
nice poem,i took time to reflect myself with your poem.
tankU!
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| Hope till Eternity
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2007-11-01
amazing poem Zoya, it is just brilliant! ,this philosophical line touched me most.
While I weave my veil of Hope
With twines of love and passion
Lace it with my longing and desire
The glow is stolen from the inner fire
thanks a lot.
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| White Nights
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2007-10-17
thanks zoya, the follwoing lines i liked most:
Pristine, like our Youth
Pass from one light into another in a blink...
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| Seed
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2007-10-15
sweet poem, filled my heart with joy while reading it.tnks!
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| solitary air
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2007-10-01
good poem sir. i enjoyed it.
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| When God cries
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2007-09-27
dear gopi,
i like the following lines..
The creator suffers
The follower enjoys
thankyou!
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| And the World Will Sing my Song
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2007-09-25
i love this poem. i particularly like the following lines...
If man could keep a MELODY deep in his HEART
If man inspires HARMONY in LIFE,
And let SWEET MUSIC CAST OUT STRIFE
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| Once again I wonder why . . .
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2007-09-21
thanks a lot for the wonderful guiding poem.i have book marked it.
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| Soul Caves
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2007-09-16
Dear Zoya,
I liked particular the following words:
Friezes of my emotions
Are etched
On the walls of my existence
-Fossilized-
In 'Soul Caves'.
Thankyou,
Venkatesh
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from India 