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2012-02-13
nice and shortest way to express. too good.
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| Your zero.
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2011-01-26
lovely in these shor lines
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| A Reaction
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2008-06-11
Depiction of feelings with just few words in absorbing way. Great written.
Regards,. Amir
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| Tenderness of the Kiss
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2008-05-27
Katherine - Selection of words & way to define the mildness of topic is awe-inspiring. Love the lines,
Kisses are the tender expression
Of love between two souls
United by their affection for each other
Thanks., Amir
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| Love Is A Tree
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2008-04-26
Katherine - Beautiful diagram of love, beautiful explanation too. Tree of love have to grow always. Thanks for the lines, as it may mold someone to understand the vision of love instead of wrong thoughts. Hub of poem is
Down below the roots seek their mission
A foundation true and strong
Love is a tree changing each season
A portrait of phases and their reason
Regards. Amir
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| FROM........
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2008-04-17
Abundant lines within the words. nice reading it. Rgds,. Amir
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| Touch
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2008-04-15
WG - I love last four lines, and read more than 13 times. Superb way of description and expressions of feeling.
there can be no liquor, no drug more intoxicating than
the smell of your hair; and there is no poetry to describe
the tender sweetness of your face pressed to my hands, and
your warmth upon my back.
Thanks,. Amir
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| the last love.. the best love..
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2008-04-04
Wonderful expression of love and longing. Love is just love and may found once in a life time. Thanks,. Amir
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| Sketch of routes.
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2008-04-02
Amna - Marvelous piece having many episodes in each line to understand. Extreme usage of words to define the whole. Regards, Amir
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| It's True
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2008-03-29
Kathy - Last line had changed all above. Love in return is the most precious entity one can get. Fit setting of words to describe the Love journey in lines. Thanks. Amir
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| A suffered Girl
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2008-03-28
Amna, you have publicize & elucidate a very appalling issue in few lines. Thanks. Amir
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| Way to you..
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2008-03-26
Some time you may write the words which are flying in some other mind too. Thanks sid,. Amir
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| I Cannot Offer You Diamonds By M.A.Meddings
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2008-03-19
words are not just words, true inner feelings. your words gave real price tag to feelings. absolutely right Love is Precious & Dear
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from Pakistan