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2008-11-16
this is beautiful,
it gives me a feeling of empowerment :)
i suddenly feel ready to face the world, haha
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| Love is alive
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2008-06-15
you know?
funnily enough, as i was reading this, i was listening to a song named Keeping Me Alive by the Afters... and it goes smt like, "your love is keeping me alive..." blah blah.
i like this poem :]
bookmarked!
caoimhe
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| beware
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2008-04-25
"Stop, a second just to measure
What will be the repercussive cost
For to take forbidden fruit
Has repercussions so acute"
i love those lines :)
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| Pain and Fear
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2008-04-23
i love this, it reminds me of my grandmother.
she was left broken-hearted when my grandfather passed away in 1998 and she's never quite been herself since then.
thanks for this,
caoimhe
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| Silent Sobs
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2008-04-23
this is such a beautiful poem of remembrance, it brings tears to my eyes.
thank you,
caoimhe
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| Headaches
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2008-04-15
do you know how PERFECTLY this describes how i feel?
haha, thanks for this Paul!
caoimhe
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| POETRY LIVES ON, THE SONGS LIVES ON!
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2008-04-15
i always feel that if a poem means something to at least one person, it'll live on forever.
how true your poem is, ken, how true.
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| Funeral
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2008-04-15
it's a scary thought, isnt it?
that when someone dies, they are fully aware of everything, even their own funeral?
death is such a strange thing, really. scary thing.
i love your poetry! it's simple but they always discuss ideas that really make me think :]
caoimhe
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| Wings
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2008-04-14
it's so simple, but it's so heartfelt.
such a beautiful write
caoimhe
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| Cheap Lyrics Plagiarized
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2008-04-10
the funny thing?
i hate listening to the radio because sometimes it describes so perfectly how i feel, and i have to face all those emotions, all those thoughts.
but then..
i turn to music when i most need someone else to explain to me how i feel. maybe, just maybe, someone else understands how i feel at that moment, at that point in time.
it tears me apart at times but then at others it helps put me back together. does that make sense? maybe it only makes sense in my head.
i love this poem, cj, i always love your stuff. ur my inspiration!
love always,
caoimhe
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| Tried of Being Who I Am
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2008-04-01
i get the strong impression this has been a long time coming... anger built up?
if i understand it correctly...
give her a chance, she deserves it. she surprised me.
rmbr cambodia? cm was pissed beyond belief at her. and yet cm gave her another chance.
"I'm about to get rid of the very worst part of me"....
or maybe you're beyond that.
in any case,
i love this.
-- Caoimhe.
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| Love Me, Deceive Me
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2008-03-24
this poem made my day.
it tugs at my heartstrings, it really does.
thanks callisto.
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| Humpty Dumpty
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2008-03-24
I like this one, callisto.
It reminds me of a friend of mine, she's always there to put me back together when I fall.
keep writing, we all love your stuff.
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from Ireland 