| Get out of my system(edited)
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2015-07-09
perfect last lines
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| The true home
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2013-06-21
simple, beautiful, and poignant. well done.
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| Blind love.
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2013-05-25
there is a much larger story not being told here, but i'm sure that is for personal reasons. i think too often people dive head first into relationships with their own idealizations and it can leave them cold when they don't hold up. this piece gets that across beautifully and in so few words. well done.
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| What you don't hear -haiku:)
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2012-08-13
tremendous. there is much that can be learned in silence
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| I'm Your Man
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2012-03-08
he was chuckling :)
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| ALL ABOUT YOU
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2008-05-05
beautiful as love is so is this poem
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| THE HURT
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2008-05-05
this is so fiery..
you capture perfectly the feeling of betrayal- i'm guessing-
very good read
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