| Fear Vorbei
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2014-08-20
Why have I not read this?
I think we all feel this way.
I began my 2011 NaNoWriMo with
"I thought that the time for poetry had gone."
We all had more to write about in that time.
So long ago.
With so much more inspiration.
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| Diary
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2014-08-20
You should keep a more detailed account of the goings on--I like this but you should write more. I'd like to hear a more detailed account of this diary's entry.
Also, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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| Senioritis
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2011-02-23
me gusta mucho este poema
tiene una explicación buena de esta idea
y me hace recordar este sentimiento vívidamente
es escrito bueno
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| Blue River
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2011-02-13
I really enjoyed this read.
It was very poignant and creates a mood very effectively. It creates a world and draws you in without overdoing it. It allows you to fill in the details which makes it much more universal. Again, I really enjoyed this one. Keep writing!
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| A Day I'll Long Remember
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2011-02-11
CUTE
that is all
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| The Brave, Bold Boys
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2011-02-09
This is AMAZING!
(I think you should write a melody to go with it though--it sounds so much like a song)
It weaves such an incredible story and really puts you there. You can really see it happening because it seems so much like what happens in real life. I love the image at the end with the meadow remembering--it works so well.
Behold!
I see a
Triumphant poet.
The words
Evoke such a
Robust and powerful image,
Sounding like the horns of
War and
Emoting
Everything
That should be felt.
Where did the inspiration for this one come from?
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| Little Girl
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2009-03-04
found the other poem this reminded me of
from p.p.
There Was A Girl:
I like it a lot
-N.V.
teehee
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| Little Girl
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2009-03-04
this reminds me of something else you have written
I do like it very much
it is very....
hmm...
I don't really have a word for it
pretty and contemplative (kon-temp`-la- tiv) will have to do
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| Secretly...
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2009-02-25
this is so pretty
my acrostics never come across this way and its
Like
Over the years
Very much you
Expect to happen and
Love
You expect to leave
but I know it won't neccessarilly be like this
I really loved this one
so much emotion... hope you feel better about this
-with love, studmuffin
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| Come close, go away (triolet challenge)
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2009-02-10
Creative and
Original in your ideas.
Myself included, all
People feel this
Emotional turmoil that
Leaves us
Longing yet
In the same time
Not wanting....
GREAT PIECE
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| Consider This
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2009-02-05
I really like the ideas in this poem
It's
Intense in many ways, and
Not too cynical actually.
This
Reflects much how
I feel about the
Gruelling
Uninteresting tasks of the day and how
I do often feel about
Not going to school...
Great... a few more hours o' shut-eye
Me Gusta Mucho
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| When Music No More Moves Me
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2009-02-05
I REALLY Like this
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I really
Think you have talent. I
'Spose you just have a knack for
Suggesting what
We all feel,
Even in our deepest hearts.
Everything can seem so
Tiresome and boring...
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....I understand the sentiment and I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY Like this
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| Sick of Sick
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2009-02-05
I entirely understand
for the record
I am taking far too long in getting better as well
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| Youth Suited
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2009-02-05
this is also intriguing
it makes me think of myself a few years back
and how I have changed to be me now
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| Yes yes I know
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2009-02-05
this is curious
I am intrigued by your partner
and what has transpired between you
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| Oh, Sweet Love
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2008-12-17
Beautiful
I like the format as well
it sets the poem well
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| The Epic Adventures of Katy and Tom, Part Two.
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2008-12-17
that was absolutely magnificent
what on earth?
but still magnificent
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| Pleading Glory
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2008-12-08
B E A UTIFUL!
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| Dear Father:
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2008-11-13
Cute city...
I like this a lot
good write
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| Why I do love you?
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2008-10-30
so sweet and so beautiful
I have known the feeling before
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| A Perfect Fit
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2008-10-28
I always mean to go to IMPACT meetings but then I just don't seem to
I sang at the opening of one once
when it was at my church...
good poem anyhow.
i like the descriptions,
they are very fitting
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| Blinddarm
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2008-10-27
BLINDARM!!!
I like this
and just so you know
your friends are completely right 100% of the time
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| Gently
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2008-10-27
nice
I can feel the uncertainty building throughout the poem
I don't want to pass judgement but...
were the last two lines really necessary?
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| Stone Skies
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2008-10-25
I can't decide if I am creeped out
or think this is really cool
well actually whether or not I am creeped out has nothing to do with this being cool
good write
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| Numb
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2008-10-07
awww
I'm sure your heart will get better
we can do marvels today's world
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| Material Weakness
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2008-10-05
leafy green?
teehee
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| Piedestrona
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2008-10-03
saddness
pretty though
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| number nonsense
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2008-10-02
amusing... I needed a bit of a laugh
this raised my spirits
thanks so much for NOT retiring
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| Would You Weep?
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2008-09-27
for what it is worth
I would weep if you suddenly were gone
I hope clarity in this area comes to you
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| Upon Witnessing a Glance
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2008-08-22
this is really sad
and you are a plenty beautiful muse
what more could he possibly ask for
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| Epiphany
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2008-08-21
Wow! That was powerful!
I was enveloped and just couldn't stop reading.
The end was so suddena and you can just see the old man dying and you don't necessarily feel bad about it
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from Seychelles