| He washed my hair when we were young
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2007-02-16
What a sensual, beautiful poem. Last night, ( incidently), my husband washed my hair for me..I had never had someone do that-it felt fantastic..the imagery is fantastic here, it took me back to last night!
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| An Angry Mother
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2007-02-02
Mother Lioness! I love this write, full of love for your child, and agression at some asshole. Good one!
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| Through Love, We Are Connected [A Thomas-Liz Love-Tanka Collection 1]
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2007-01-18
I love how well you two flow together-that is probably what brought you together in the first place, a like mind--great job you two!! Love it! Passionate!
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| A Clothes Call
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2007-01-18
Quirky and fun! Your laundry comes alive here! ( wouldn't that be scary!)
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| Heartstream
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2007-01-18
It looks beautiful together.. a warm, fuzzy feeling all over at the brillance of love!
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| OCEANS OF LOVE[TANKA]
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2007-01-18
Fantastic! I love anything to do with the ocean--and using the dolphins in this one was great! Excellent, beautiful job!
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| Grovelling days
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2007-01-17
Hauntingly beautiful..full of emotion and vivid imagery..bravo!! bravo!!
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| Infant Stars of Infinity...
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2007-01-17
The cosmos and all it's wonder is so fasinating..thank you for this wonderful piece..the imagery is fantastic!
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| The topic of cancer
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2007-01-17
A unique, fun, interesting read!
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| When I dream of you.
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2007-01-17
A romantic write, full of longing and remembrance..excellent job, vivid emotions run deep.
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| Gettysburg by M.A.Meddings
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2007-01-17
This piece does bring history to life..I have always been into history, the Civil War being one of my favourite periods to read about. The imagery in this poem is superb..as well as the subject, of course. A true masterpiece! Bravo!!
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| Gettysburg by M.A.Meddings
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2007-01-17
This piece does bring history to life..I have always been into history, the Civil War being one of my favourite periods to read about. The imagery in this poem is superb..as well as the subject, of course. A true masterpiece! Bravo!!
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| The Love Birds a haiku renga for Thomas and Liz by M.A.Meddings
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2007-01-17
An excellent tribute to a wonderful couple here on the bay-great job!
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| Enigmatic
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2007-01-17
What a thought-provoking piece..the layout and thought behind this is excellent...brillant imagery.
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| in a wait
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2007-01-17
What a hauntingly beautiful piece...moving and rythmatic!
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| Missing Note
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2007-01-17
Excellent tribute..full of love and appreciation. BRAVO!
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| Love in terms of Rejection
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2007-01-17
A unique, thought-provoking write. Very nice series!
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| ...The First Time...
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2007-01-17
A beautiful poem about pure love and adoration...a very moving piece.
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| becomes a dream
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2007-01-17
There is truth in these words..beautiful and moving, bravo!
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| Too Far...
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2007-01-17
What a deep, raw, emotional look at human emotion..excellent job.
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| My Caring Friend [Zoya]
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2007-01-17
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful, caring person..our own Ms. Zoya. Excellent job!
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| a new sky
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2007-01-17
A beautiful, moving piece..what fantastic imagery!
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| apathetic
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2007-01-17
Wow--this is ever so thought-provoking. The imagery is unreal..everything is so raw and emotional. Brillant job!
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| In the silent darkness of the room by M.A.Meddings
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2007-01-17
Ah...what a sensual write..I love the imagery..we can see her through your eyes now:)
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| Love in terms of Affection
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2007-01-17
What a romantic, pure poem of love...the flow and imagery is excellent!
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| haiku for tom and liz's challenge
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2007-01-17
Wow! What romance and adoration..I love haikus..so much can be said in few lines..bravo!
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| prophecy.
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2007-01-17
Very haunting..what excellent, frightening imagery. Brillant job!
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| In The Begining Of Time...
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2007-01-17
Wow! What an excellent format to do this in! I love the layout, imagery, and how thought-provoking this is! Excellent work!
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| An eight level love haiku
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2007-01-17
Beautifully done, love and romance..ahhh..great work!
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| Hiding In Your Cloak
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2007-01-17
What a heartfelt, moving piece of love and devotion to the Lord. Excellent imagery and thought..bravo!
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| My Intelligent, Handsome Son
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2007-01-17
What an excellent tribute to your son--beautifully done!
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| My Heart's A Storm
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2007-01-17
A emotionally moving text..excellent feeling, imagery, and thought put behind this. BRAVO!
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| Good night poetbay. . .
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2007-01-17
Goodnight;) Although it is only 8:34 p.m. here!
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| MY REAL FRIENDS[haiku for all my poetbay friends]
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2007-01-17
Hahaha, I have sure thought exactly this before, Love it Liz!
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| SLEEP!SLEEP! SLEEP!
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2007-01-17
Been there! Hate that! The worst is when you are tired, but cannot seem to fall asleep! Excellent poem describing this misery.
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| A Liz-Thomas Perdue Tanka
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2007-01-16
So very true! Love does heal an empty heart..bravo!
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| ...When...
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2007-01-16
Beautiful! Excellent flow and imagery, bravo!
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| Angelic Sweetheart[Haiku]
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2007-01-16
How sweet and romantic..;)
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| A Little Love Poem
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2007-01-16
So simply put-beautiful and moving..lots of wisdom in these words!
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| Of Me
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2007-01-16
A very beautiful write, full of love and devotion. Quite moving! BRAVO!
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| Love, the Elixir of life: A rapid-fire-round of Haiku(Zoya) and Renga(Liliana)
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2007-01-16
What an epic tale of love and adoration! Excellent flow, wonderful piece, bravo!
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| Erotic Moments Between Two Lovers
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2007-01-16
How very sensual and beautifully romantic..bravo, my friend, a lovely, heartfelt read.
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| When Death Comes Round
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2007-01-12
The unknown is always scary..excellent display of emotions and thoughts here..bravo!
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| Do the words "Blah blah" mean anything to you
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2007-01-12
Oh, what a dark, intense poem. Excellent imagery and form, bravo!
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| Love and Hate
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2007-01-12
There is so much wisdom and power in this write..your writings have so much truth to them, my friend. Brillantly done!
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| My Apologies
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2007-01-12
We all should forgive and forget, but sometimes it isn't that easy. An emotional poem, excellent work.
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| The Burden of Charisma
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2007-01-12
Chills..the emotions in this really come alive. The imagery is superb..I can identify with this poem quite a bit. BRAVO!
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| Kisses so sweet . . .
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2007-01-12
What a powerful poem, full of love and adoration! BRAVO, Dan!
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| Sunbeams' Trance
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2007-01-12
This is such a fun poem! I love the imagery and layout..superb!
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| To Be A Survivor Of Abuse
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2007-01-12
There is so much strength and power behind this write. You are giving every victim a voice..I know someone that was abused badly as a child, their plan in life is to rise above their abusers, and overcome!
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