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spring collection

2017-03-13
Beautiful


Painful Contradictions

2017-03-09
I wish


Its - D E M A S I A D O !

2017-03-08
Cocks are necessary so you're telling me


§ummer Charm

2017-03-08
Immaculately worded like always. The assonance is great, like always. Some of the wordplay is slightly obvious though like "Heavens winds are winding" as the internal rhyming of "binds my eyes that blinds" But nice poem nonetheless


mortal

2017-03-08
Sparse words but evocative feelings. I ended up using the words you wrote to form a story in my mind. Nice.


god, angels, and a blue kangaroo

2017-03-08
I remember talking a lot of shit when I was drunk as I remember a friend who always believed me. I don't talk to him anymore. I miss him.


A Human Failure

2017-01-21
The descriptions are so very potent. I love this poem. Bravo


Friendship

2017-01-05
I Want Moreeeeee


My worthlessness

2017-01-05
I love the way you write so direct and no nonsense. Bless you


It never is too late

2017-01-05
I hope what you say in this poem is true. I really do.


Consider The Zebra

2017-01-05
edible complex oh my god that killed me haha wonderful poem I love it.


engulfed with love

2017-01-05
My burning ember is right. Strong poem man.


S N I G G E R .

2017-01-05
This seems to say a lot more than it explicitly does. I will read it more.


modes of speech

2017-01-05
I love this. So many things to think about. A true poem and you a true poet.


THERE ARE THOSE WHO!

2017-01-05
There is a rub there ken my man what do you suppose we can do to rub out that rub!


The brilliance of Being

2017-01-05
Yes, beauty simply is. That's the first thing we as poets and human beings must understand. You put it so wonderfully here thank you.


The real reality

2017-01-05
The eternal ridicule of death, that's a nice phrase.

And this is a nice poem. I enjoyed it.


Attrition

2016-12-24
The ones who survive make history. Beautiful poem. Really.


Intimidation

2016-12-21
Better to live to fight another day eh?


Fakebook

2016-12-21
Facebook is cancer we all know that


The Curse of Political Correctness

2016-12-21
I think South Park said it best either it's all okay to make fun of or nothing is. There is no inbetween.


Shipwrecked comfort

2016-12-21
I agree with Ashe, you know what to say and how to say it. Bravo


One way only

2016-12-21
One fist in the air!!! There is so much power and conviction in your poems I love it.


Transnationalism

2016-12-21
But do remember, Plato said that in a perfect world poets wouldn't exist


bringing it home

2016-12-19
wow


Drinking buddies or a burst of joy?(!)

2016-12-12
Sweeet pretty great poem queen


The depth among the waves

2016-11-25
is is all we can be
beautiful write


Two-Way Mirror

2016-11-25
A great imagination. The boy in the poem would fare well from knowing there is someone who understands him


Red List

2016-11-25
Haha, the last great white winos


Supremacy

2016-11-25
What secret wars you fight dear?


The Lonely Parts Club

2016-11-25
HAha a wonderful dream and a wonderful ending


Orientation

2016-11-25
Yes, but which wall? The physical or the technological


Hidden meanings

2016-11-25
You are wise very wise and it shows in your poems
Thank you for sharing them with us


In between love.

2016-11-25
For now I will love you
In the midst of my intentions.

These lines ache my friend
They ache


chilled

2016-11-25
leave this marketa !!! for sanity's sake


Written words

2016-11-25
The softness and the wistfulness of this poem cannot be denied.


Haiku for an urban chill

2016-11-25
Perhaps they are my footsteps
How did you know though
stalker


King Apple

2016-11-25
Oh King Apple praise theeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


wednesday

2016-11-25
cold as the moon
how cold can the moon be? Hmm you've made me wonder


Your presence

2016-11-25
Beautiful

as nature, like all life, is just a constant resurrection
especially that line
I love this poem


F U C K T I O N

2016-11-25
Haha funny as always


hunter's moon

2016-11-25
damn


marketa (con't.)

2016-11-22
the last two lines really ache. what happens next? I want to know.


Before Dawn

2016-11-22
A wonderful sentiment one i have felt too


Song from a bedsit

2016-11-22
I miss him too


Guide of darkness

2016-11-22
I repeat Ashe's comment. I love it


Transcend.

2016-11-22
Powerful.


behind closeted doors

2016-11-22
The final couplet made me smile


Comfort in the fall

2016-11-22
Yes, that is all that matters. Love the title


I Am A Tree

2016-11-22
I wanna be a tree now too