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Reflections

2017-12-05
INCREDIBLE


THE SEA OH THE SEA! (With Thanks To Anna Banasiak work)

2017-12-05
*BOOKMARKED*
Amazing visuals
~L.~


The poem with no title ...

2012-07-06
A very easy to read, well flowing
and wonderfully rhymed uplifting
poem that I rather enjoyed reading

~L.~


Eating Lunch For Breakfast

2012-06-30
I like this as often I'll have breakfast for dinner
lol no like porridge on a freezing night to warm you up

A great write that i enjoyed reading


reflections on the cessation of life

2012-05-14
Dark but such brilliant lines
I'd love to hear this to music
as it reminds me of [band]Nightwish
with the numbered parts


The cat

2012-04-08
I'm a cat person so the title grabbed me.

Nice opening line :-)

~L.~


Black Poem (Black History Month)

2012-02-17
WOW

Thank you, I never knew this,
and the repeat of lines highlight
really well the rhyme of the
story you tell

~L.~


Horsemen

2012-02-17
LOL
I know how Pestilence feels
it's meant to be summer here
& it's been SO cold & wet

~L.~


∞ Our never ending poem (fill in the gaps, imagine)

2012-02-17
In front of the Silla del Diablo (Devil's Chair)
waited for Their King - six
anticipation, like a mist, hangs in the air
as they,silently, await their king, like junkies for a fix

~L.~


POOR LOVE..!

2012-02-17
A fresh view on life/love
delivered with a smile

~L.~


∞ Our never ending poem (includes link to rhyme dictionary:)

2012-02-15
Twice crowing doth thy Rooster at Dawn
Heralding thee beauty of thy morning sun
Tis million of years it have'th been done
Twice crowing doth thy Rooster at Dawn
Arise with a smile for thy new day have begun

~L.~


Celebrities verses the rest of the world.

2012-02-14
i couldn't AGREE more!
Love the flow in this
& BRILLIANT opening stanza.

~L.~


AN ODE TO MOON

2012-02-13
this "birds are warbling thy silence"
is BRILLIANT
and the ending is GOLD.

~L.~


Like a Thirsty Child

2012-02-09
Can SO relate,
that's why my Journey poem
is the fave poem i've written,
it's the only poem I've been able to recall
and not write down straight away.

Love the imagery in the last stanza

~L.~


Life is not a dress-rehearsal

2012-02-09
The ending leaves me feeling
like there's an encore waiting

~L.~


infant art

2012-02-05
Summed up so simply
& so funny to read

~L.~


. . . and that's what happen to our never ending poem (part 1)

2012-02-05
The fox broke through the fence
his backside got a splinter
he gave him such a shock, he ran amok
and left the hens alone all winter


To His Beloved Self, the Author Dedicates these Lines

2012-02-03
These lines:
"If only I were poor!
As a billionaire!"
nearly made me wet myself

~L.~


Our never ending poem *TADA!* What will it be? You get to choose!

2012-02-01
the Fibonacci style sounds good

maybe the next poetry challenge style?

~L.~


Current writing challenge & who wants to co-write a pantoum?

2012-02-01
ME ME

"It's precipitating purple bruises
cascading rain of liquid tears
thunder whispering like a lover
Comfort brought by the closeness of fears"

~L.~


Our never ending poem

2012-01-30
YAY I'll start

"Quaint the loud woman's silent sobs,
Refreshing to see her quiet joy"

~L.~


Current writing challenge

2012-01-30
It's quite a fun challenge to do

~L.~


Cinnamon and Nutmeg -- (pantoum challenge)

2012-01-29
Made me hungry now
4 apple & cinnamon scrolls

An appetising read

~L.~


Pantoum craze is goin' round ( pantoum challange )

2012-01-28
This sums it up BRILLIANTLY

*BOOKMARKED*

~L.~


Pantoum + You = Art?

2012-01-27
Although it's a restrictive style,
I've found a lot of freedom in them

~L.~


We love to hate ourselves.

2012-01-26
This really grabs me
& i think it would be interesting
to read as a pantoum poem, as
it may help expand on the topic,
the ending leaves, for me, it
open to a continuation

~L.~


I am not what I am. (Pantoum Challenge)

2012-01-26
Actually, being this short
takes it PERFECTLY to the point.

*BOOKMARKED*

~L.~


Forget me not The right to be forgotten (Pantoum challenge)

2012-01-25
Love, love, LOVE the author's note
at the end, my new favourite quote.

This Is really good, I DID find it
confusing but ONLY because I am
new to this style of poetry.

This is, one of many, what I LIKE
about Poetbay, the encouragement,
through challenges or feedback, to
grow and expand horizons as a poet.

WELL DONE on this prose.

~L.~


Modern Pantoum Challenge (revised)

2012-01-25
This should be on the FRONT PAGE
of Poetbay in Ed's choice, that way
everyone sees it when PB page loads :-)

This is a dozzie of a challenge - i'm struggling
but the attempts are FUN to try

~L.~


New Writing Challenge! Are you up to it?:)

2012-01-24
Sounds like quite the challenge,
Looking forward to giving it a go


Certainty dies a slow death

2012-01-23
what does "antithesis" mean?

it kinda made it hard for me to understand
but a very eye-grabbing title

~L.~


The Fragile Stalemate

2012-01-23
Should be Ed's Choice I reckon

Nicely written

~L.~


Become What?

2012-01-21
I actually like the jumpy flow of this,
it MAKES the poem somehow.

How have you been?

~L.~


My Island Tonight

2012-01-15
I won't look at waves the same now
love that line

~L.~


Hurting

2012-01-15
I don't quite understand it,
but I like it's flow

*BOOKMARKED*

~L.~


The Sun and Moon

2011-02-23
very nice, great flow

~L.~


Becoming a Better Writer

2011-01-29
Very funny
Love the Haiku line best

~L.~


I'm All Yours Now

2011-01-23
nice flow
acoustic guitar would sound nice
to this i think

~L.~


How to Offend a Fish

2011-01-23
SO damn funny original genuis

~L.~


A beggar's child

2010-11-18
Sad that this happens.

Very powerfully expressed

~L.~


Waves

2010-10-10
this has a great flow like the ebb of a tide.

I like the meaning in these words


Best Regards

2010-10-09
Although this is a very dark poem
it is wonderfully written the line:
"though darkened by
demented shadows of schemes"
DAMN i wish I could think up
brilliance like that.

~L.~


The Devils Breath

2010-10-08
WOW a very powerful & moving write.

love the way you have expressed this

~l.~


Change

2010-09-19
[Clap Clap]

wonderful flow to this


A frenzy to ignore.

2010-09-18
BRAVO [CLAP]

Was not sure where this
was going until the end.

Love it

~L.~


Venom

2010-09-14
Words are quite hurtful

Very well expressed


My Birthday Wishlist

2010-08-13
This reminds me of the band Nightwish's
song The Poet And The Pendulum as the words
just grab & take you to such an impressive
imagery world.

~L.~


Forgotten and Away

2010-08-13
One word BRILLIANT!!!!

clever rhyme with a terrific flow

a sad but inspiring poem.

WELCOME TO THE BAY

~L.~


Phobic Disorder

2010-08-07
WOW! Never would have
thought of a poem using vice versa
VERY clever & witty

~L.~


The root of guilt

2010-08-07
I like the meaning in this,
very deep, yet easy to understand

~L.~