| AT THE BOTTOM OF ETERNITY
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2008-10-29
nice one
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| Cerulean Serenade
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2008-10-13
I know this isn't much of a comment, but.. awesome!
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| No Matter Where You Go
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2008-10-11
It captivated me in the very first line.
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| 10/11/1986
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2008-10-11
Oh, this is simply beautiful.
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| Without The Bad Times There Are No Good Times
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2008-10-11
Fight the machine!
No but seriously, really nice text, keep it up.
Nat
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| Summer Reign
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2008-10-11
Beautiful as usual, the last lines especially, and I love it.
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| Would you love me
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2008-03-22
Nice one there.
Men, "you're a deaf". Det blir lite som att säga "Du är en döv", funkar inte riktigt. :)
Nat
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| Love, longing and loneliness
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2008-03-05
I absolutely identify with this text. Been there, done that.
Beautiful!
By the way, how are you? Long time no see :)
Love
Nat
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| I Love You Jeanne
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2008-03-02
There is always place for personal poems :)
And this one is sugar sweet.
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| And your dreamgirl is waiting for you to save yourself
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2007-05-05
Nice :)
Fortsätt så!
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| in the gallery of angels
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2007-03-08
Deep and great!
Det borde dock vara "a bee hive" :)
Nat
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| Romancing Marilyn Monroe by M.A.Meddings
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2007-01-10
Boop! Boopy! Do!
Nice text :)
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| it's up to you..
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2007-01-10
Someone will come along and pick you up it that happens, perhaps a bum, perhaps someone really great, who knows ^^
Good one btw.
Love
Nat
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| Gorgeous
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2007-01-10
It's really weird how one can get lost in someone's eyes and just wander of for miles without contemplating what happens in the surroundings. But that's the curse of loving someone who's gorgeous I guess ^^
Love
Nat
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| Love and Hate
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2007-01-10
Love is a wonderful thing.
A portion of love a day can cure anything they say ^^
Love your poem, as usual.
How are you by the way?
Love
Nat
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| Tell her...
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2007-01-10
Three BIG words is you really mean it :)
Great
Nat
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| a new sky
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2007-01-10
Wonderful pictures you created there
Fortsätt så :)
Nat
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| There was a beautiful Woman from Sweden by M.A.Meddings
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2006-12-17
a big "Woho!" to being Swedish ^^ Haha
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| There is No Excuse....But Sorry
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2006-12-09
This is a great over all text. :)
I really liked the part
"Apologies themselves hold no moral value
Words mean as much as you want them to
Words don't change the tide of regret"
Becasue it's so true.
Keep it up!
Nat
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| Am I dead?
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2006-11-28
Haha, I love the ending "god? god??"
Like "dammit, I lost him too"
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| I want my heart to be torn to pieces...
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2006-11-15
Perfectly written :)
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| then again
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2006-11-09
This is beautiful :)
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| Israeli National Anthem (Censored Version by Edna)
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2006-11-09
You stupid, silly, pathetic little man
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| Freeze Burn
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2006-11-09
Hi
This poem is really great,
I love the beginning :)
love
Nat
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| I rejoin myself to her~ A contribution to Zoya and Alienas Earth element challenge
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2006-11-06
:O *speachless* DAMN!
I love it, love it, love it!
Almost as much as I love you <3
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| Skillfuly mastered
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2006-11-03
Damn you've got skills ^^
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| Yikes!
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2006-10-28
Pink clouds <3
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| Queen of the Underworld
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2006-10-28
This is great honey :)
Älskar dig <3
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| Judge me not, we're all unique
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2006-10-13
And don't you change missy
I love you just as you are
and IF you did change
I would be out of my mind
with sadness. <3
love <3
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| april 22.06
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2006-10-11
Cute :)
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| Glare
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2006-10-08
This is wonderful Bekim.
Btw, long time since
Love
Nat
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| let's pretend we're the only ones
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2006-10-04
Wonderful :)
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| Cater to You
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2006-10-04
Really sweet :)
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| I Mourn my friend Joshua, Mexican-2006
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2006-10-03
I have tears in my eyes
It's so sad!
At least they'll get to be together now
Forever
I will hold a silent minute for Joshua
I say that we all should
even though I didn't know him
I knew that he was a wonderful poet
I'm so sorry for your loss Zoya
And I think I speak for everyone at the bay when I say:
We're here for you
<3
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| Buzz buzz little bee
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2006-10-03
Aww, cute cute cute :)
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| My heart is filled with thorns...
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2006-10-01
Aww :)
Cutiepie!
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| English is the main language in Sweden
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2006-09-30
Haha really funny :D
And yeah it's true..
Smorgasbord,
a word to be proud of.
Nat
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| Memories of horror
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2006-09-30
"He say himself stroking her gentle neck with the palm of his dry hand. "
Huh? ^^
I love the ending honey
wonderful!
<3
Nat
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| I care for you
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2006-09-30
I must say it's very cute.
You care so much,
it's adorable :)
Love <3
Nat
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| Salvation
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2006-09-26
It took me some time to actually understand it. But with the help of my dear friend Mr dictionary I understand it now ^^
It's great hun! <3
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| Me??you??
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2006-09-11
Actually I think that if you removed the cuestionmarks this poem would be so much better :) Otherwise it's good.
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| Can't fight this feeling any longer
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2006-09-08
Awwh, söt :)
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| Long gone?
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2006-08-24
Not one of your best ones
but ok :)
<3
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| Enter the mall
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2006-08-13
As a shopoholic addicted to shoes I say;
Wonderful :)
Those evil sales men can make us by anything ^^
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| Mind-blowing sex
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2006-07-26
Wow, really good :)
Loved the finishing line
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| A hug
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2006-07-25
*hug* I don't wanna let go :) <3
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| Killer
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2006-07-24
Ohlala ^^
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| To All of my writing friends: GOODBYE!
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2006-07-18
Naw, why are you leaving?
*waving goodbye*
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| Things that makes me feel good
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2006-06-30
Aww that's so cute!
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| I LOVE YOU
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2006-06-27
Good poem :)
But shouldn't "make whole the different",
be "makes all the difference"?
Nat
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from Sweden 