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AT THE BOTTOM OF ETERNITY

2008-10-29
nice one


Cerulean Serenade

2008-10-13
I know this isn't much of a comment, but.. awesome!


No Matter Where You Go

2008-10-11
It captivated me in the very first line.


10/11/1986

2008-10-11
Oh, this is simply beautiful.


Without The Bad Times There Are No Good Times

2008-10-11
Fight the machine!
No but seriously, really nice text, keep it up.

Nat


Summer Reign

2008-10-11
Beautiful as usual, the last lines especially, and I love it.


Would you love me

2008-03-22
Nice one there.

Men, "you're a deaf". Det blir lite som att säga "Du är en döv", funkar inte riktigt. :)

Nat


Love, longing and loneliness

2008-03-05
I absolutely identify with this text. Been there, done that.
Beautiful!

By the way, how are you? Long time no see :)

Love
Nat


I Love You Jeanne

2008-03-02
There is always place for personal poems :)
And this one is sugar sweet.


And your dreamgirl is waiting for you to save yourself

2007-05-05
Nice :)
Fortsätt så!


in the gallery of angels

2007-03-08
Deep and great!

Det borde dock vara "a bee hive" :)

Nat


Romancing Marilyn Monroe by M.A.Meddings

2007-01-10
Boop! Boopy! Do!
Nice text :)


it's up to you..

2007-01-10
Someone will come along and pick you up it that happens, perhaps a bum, perhaps someone really great, who knows ^^
Good one btw.

Love
Nat


Gorgeous

2007-01-10
It's really weird how one can get lost in someone’s eyes and just wander of for miles without contemplating what happens in the surroundings. But that's the curse of loving someone who's gorgeous I guess ^^

Love
Nat


Love and Hate

2007-01-10
Love is a wonderful thing.
A portion of love a day can cure anything they say ^^
Love your poem, as usual.

How are you by the way?

Love
Nat


Tell her...

2007-01-10
Three BIG words is you really mean it :)
Great

Nat


a new sky

2007-01-10
Wonderful pictures you created there
Fortsätt så :)

Nat


There was a beautiful Woman from Sweden by M.A.Meddings

2006-12-17
a big "Woho!" to being Swedish ^^ Haha


There is No Excuse....But Sorry

2006-12-09
This is a great over all text. :)

I really liked the part
"Apologies themselves hold no moral value
Words mean as much as you want them to
Words don't change the tide of regret"

Becasue it's so true.

Keep it up!
Nat


Am I dead?

2006-11-28
Haha, I love the ending "god? god??"
Like "dammit, I lost him too"


I want my heart to be torn to pieces…

2006-11-15
Perfectly written :)


then again

2006-11-09
This is beautiful :)


Israeli National Anthem (Censored Version by Edna)

2006-11-09
You stupid, silly, pathetic little man


Freeze Burn

2006-11-09
Hi
This poem is really great,
I love the beginning :)

love
Nat


I rejoin myself to her~ A contribution to Zoya and Alienas Earth element challenge

2006-11-06
:O *speachless* DAMN!
I love it, love it, love it!

Almost as much as I love you <3


Skillfuly mastered

2006-11-03
Damn you've got skills ^^


Yikes!

2006-10-28
Pink clouds <3


Queen of the Underworld

2006-10-28
This is great honey :)

Älskar dig <3


Judge me not, we're all unique

2006-10-13
And don't you change missy
I love you just as you are
and IF you did change
I would be out of my mind
with sadness. <3

love <3


april 22.06

2006-10-11
Cute :)


Glare

2006-10-08
This is wonderful Bekim.

Btw, long time since

Love
Nat


let's pretend we're the only ones

2006-10-04
Wonderful :)


Cater to You

2006-10-04
Really sweet :)


I Mourn my friend Joshua, Mexican-2006

2006-10-03
I have tears in my eyes
It's so sad!
At least they'll get to be together now
Forever

I will hold a silent minute for Joshua
I say that we all should
even though I didn't know him
I knew that he was a wonderful poet

I'm so sorry for your loss Zoya
And I think I speak for everyone at the bay when I say:
We're here for you

<3


Buzz buzz little bee

2006-10-03
Aww, cute cute cute :)


My heart is filled with thorns...

2006-10-01
Aww :)
Cutiepie!


English is the main language in Sweden and some people say - ironicly - that Sweden is the 51st state of USA

2006-09-30
Haha really funny :D
And yeah it's true..
Smorgasbord,
a word to be proud of.

Nat


Memories of horror

2006-09-30
"He say himself stroking her gentle neck with the palm of his dry hand. "
Huh? ^^

I love the ending honey
wonderful!

<3
Nat


I care for you

2006-09-30
I must say it's very cute.
You care so much,
it's adorable :)

Love <3
Nat


Salvation

2006-09-26
It took me some time to actually understand it. But with the help of my dear friend Mr dictionary I understand it now ^^
It's great hun! <3


Me??you??

2006-09-11
Actually I think that if you removed the cuestionmarks this poem would be so much better :) Otherwise it's good.


Can't fight this feeling any longer

2006-09-08
Awwh, söt :)


Long gone?

2006-08-24
Not one of your best ones
but ok :)

<3


Enter the mall

2006-08-13
As a shopoholic addicted to shoes I say;
Wonderful :)
Those evil sales men can make us by anything ^^


Mind-blowing sex

2006-07-26
Wow, really good :)
Loved the finishing line


A hug

2006-07-25
*hug* I don't wanna let go :) <3


Killer

2006-07-24
Ohlala ^^


To All of my writing friends: GOODBYE!

2006-07-18
Naw, why are you leaving?
*waving goodbye*


Things that makes me feel good

2006-06-30
Aww that's so cute!


I LOVE YOU

2006-06-27
Good poem :)
But shouldn't "make whole the different",
be "makes all the difference"?

Nat