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Miss me Mrs you

2006-12-09
really nice, honey ^^ cute, I hope you'll become mrs me ^^

*kisses*


The innocent one

2006-11-21
ooh nice and dark honey, me like... :)


Concrete curtain

2006-10-15
this is very dark and some what mystical, seems like you've done it again honey :)

love you


Judge me not, we're all unique

2006-10-09
I will follow Nepenthes here and say: "right on" and hell yeah!!!

hugs
peter


Just a Moment in Time...

2006-10-08
really something zoya... such depth in all the words, and so perfectly combined...

love
peter


Life and Death

2006-10-08
haha, shooort ^^ really good zoya =) so few words and yet such feeling... really love it :D


Mr Butterfly

2006-10-04
funny and cute with a pinch of sorrow, love it honey
<3
peter


Buzz buzz little bee

2006-10-02
really cute Sabrina ^^ I love it, so full of life and happiness, it brought a smile to my face... keep it up :)

hugs
peter


I care for you

2006-09-30
really moving zoya, you never seem to end surprise me with how much you care...

hugs
peter


I just wanted you to see me

2006-09-26
You can't help to detect a lonliness and feeling of sorrow in this poem, you write so well honey... but I hope that you do not feel like this...

love
peter


I would make a hellish angel

2006-09-20
so cool baby!!! ^^ I love it =)

love you <3
peter


My Muse (Source of inspiration-Saga's Challenge)

2006-09-13
zoya is back!! and her superb writing is with her!! a wonderful enchanting text, and of zoya lenght :)

good to have you back fried
((hugs))
peter


I'm crying because it feels like I'm dying

2006-09-11
Nice honey ^^ you can write even when your sick :) hehe, hope you get better soon my dear, I miss you so...

loads and loads of love
yours peter


You only live twice

2006-09-10
I really like this one baby, the rythem and the rimes it all fits perfectly...

I love you honey <3
peter


I feel your beating heart beneath the crystal stars

2006-08-24
cute baby ^^ I'm honored love, my heart jumped when I read it :)

hugs
peter


10) Thank You for Your words

2006-08-21
I can relate, and I think it's so nice of you to write this poem to your friend, he will be glad to know that you are glad you have him, and as you are filled with happiness when you read his/her words he/she will be filled with happiness when she reads yours..

hugs
peter


3) Dear God

2006-08-21
beautiful... belief is a important thing, I don't know if I belive there is a god, but I belive that it's only good to belive...


Infidel

2006-08-21
It may not be the best you've written but it's a damn good write, and I must say I love the ending... infidel... that word sticks, and it makes the poem strong, mayve you shouldl rename the poem to infidel ^^ hehe I don't know, just an suggestion :)

love you honey <3
peter


Pain

2006-08-20
Nice baby.. I hope you're not talking about us... I don't wanna inflinct pain in your life... :(

love you <3


To be or not to be is not the question!?

2006-08-17
Greate text, deep and moving :) keep it up ^^


Ten Days

2006-08-17
don't be sad, long distance relationship might work, and if you want it and fight for it, it probably work out just fine... nice text and a meaningful content... keep it up ^^


Deeper

2006-08-17
really nice ^^


My favorite saying

2006-07-26
really nice honey :)
kisses
peter


c...m...ic.....i...n

2006-07-24
it maybe short, but I like it, it tells me something, it gives me a feeling, I don't know if it's the feeling you are feeling but your text made me think...

keep it up
peter


You Can't Take Away My Soul

2006-07-24
beautiful zoya!!
and of course no one can take away your soul, it's to speciall to full of love for anyone to carry :)

((hugs))
peter


Hello there stranger

2006-07-24
really good honey, not really your usually stile but I like it ^^ your so skilled honey =)

love you <3


ALONE

2006-07-03
oh dear zoya, everybody feel alone sometimes, but that is why you have friends, call on us when you need us =) trust me you've got alot of friends, you shouldn't have to feel alone ;)

((huugs))
peter


Temptation of the greener lawn

2006-06-29
real nice honey =) love the last line, "Don't climb fences" and you know what I love you!!! =D

<3


Aun San Suu Kui

2006-06-20
really beautiful! and how nice of you, this is but one poem that shows what a wonderful person you are zoya!

((hugs))


Karmic curse

2006-06-15
I like it, kinda funny in someway, and yet true...

many kisses to you baby =)
peter


Autumn Leaves

2006-06-11
This is just wonderful, you say that Autumn leavse fascinate you, well you fascinate me ^^ hehe, really liked this text so well described and vivid...

((hugs))
peter


Crystal ball

2006-06-09
honey, oh honey
you've done it again this text is wonderful


If I told you - forever

2006-04-24
beautiful honey, nothing but beautiful...


Let Bygones be Bygones

2006-04-17
Wow!! I really like this one, so vey honest and real to life, this one means so much to me you have no idea... wouldn't be easy if you just could say that to anyone and just start over without any ramifications...

(((so many hugs to you dear friend)))
Peter


My Secret

2006-04-05
this texted moved me... deep in my soul I think my secret is the same as yours, but shhh... don't tell anyone :P =D

((hugs for a wonderfull text))


Fighting fear

2006-03-23
really nice as always!!
But fear not, there are no wrong directions, the path you walk is yours to walk ^^

((hugs dear friend))


MIND AND HEART

2006-03-15
a really powerful poem you've done it once again ^^ , and how I feel like you describe it, sometimes the heart wants one thing the mind another...

how to choose between them one can't have the right answer...


YEARS AGO, I HAD CHOSEN...

2006-03-14
beautiful zoya =)
it brought a smile to my face... Optimism is important, but it's not always that easy to see the light... I think it's strong of you to try ^^

((hugs))

peter


8th of March (An Introspection)

2006-03-09
really good as usual =D
I was really shocked to have learned all those things you mentioned, and I really understand why you're angry and upset, you put the feelings you have in this poem with such a force that one can't escape beeing hit right in the face by it... the anger that tells me what is happening what is wrong... that anger is right... the poem speeks for it...

good work as usual
hugs my friend


Is it a Nightmare; Or Is it True?

2006-03-07
Fantastic !!!! =D

You really captured a feeling, that I feel many times, more recently... I can say I was more than a little touched when I read it...

""Dance the frenzied Tandov* today!"
Blood-curdling cries rose sky high!"

really liked this!! so different, but yet you my dear friend ^^

I truly enjoyed this piece =D
((hugs))


Widows of Vrindavan

2006-03-04
what to say... the text really makes a difference... it reveals truth that I (and I think many with me) don't know or is trying to not see, these kinds of texts are so important... make people see and you're on the way of solving the problem, maybe it's a long way but you took a step in the right direction and ... what can I say... you should be proud..

((hugs))


if

2006-03-01
really nice :)


May she be better than me

2006-02-28
so beautiful ^^
I love it!!!
*bookmark*


Your smell

2006-02-25
love linger in the place where memories sleept... this text stays with me forever...


Shine on

2006-02-24
really beautiful!! the finish line is awesome:

"listening to the airs inner voices
you made the right choices"

love it!! thumbs up ^^


Sweet Evil

2006-02-24
really good ^^
so angry and yet so ironic at the same time, I like how you put the feelings together =) it's just sweet evil, I guess :P
=D


Tearing My Heart Out With A Thousand Knives!

2006-02-24
I just love the way you use facts in your poems, it's so skillfull of you, I'm really impressed.. ^^


The pleasure of desire

2006-02-21
I have to agree Finnman, this one is very erotic!! you write it really good, maybe you should write erotica ^^ haha :P

just kiddin, really impressive, the feeling in the words and the pics you create... so good =)


Young life of mine

2006-02-20
really nice words!!

"Young soul of mine
this is you
Feel free to free me
This is time"

wonderfull!!

If your soul does not free you, you know were to turn, I can talk some sense in to her ^^ hehe

(((hugs)))


Life is never gray

2006-02-20
Really good read ^^
I like the meaning in the poem and I totally agree =D

you go girl!! :))
(((hugs)))