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Evitable

2016-11-28
Entertaining, Sameen (-:>)

This comes across as a dialogue; we imagine two friends leaving a police station together. There's an interesting mix of the modern and the Shakespearean, perhaps, in the exchange. It feels like a scene in a play and we hope you will write some more.


Grimhilde's Curse

2016-11-28
An amusing and enjoyable write, Friend D. (-:>)

It was particularly relished by Ooc and TF, naturally, but we all like the rhythm and rhymes. 'Woo-hoo-ooh-ooW' (-:>)


Tuesday

2016-11-28
All at Coo & Co enjoyed this well-crafted villanelle (-:>)

We notice that the first line resounds in variations on a theme, rather than exact repetition. 'I like this approach,' chirps Coo :>}

As it happens, we are rather fond of Tuesdays, as in the afternoon our PA visits and makes some splendid sandwiches! However, we sympathise with the sentiments here; and we feel the rhyming words are very well chosen. The overall sense of despair is particularly well conveyed in the short sentences, we suggest. ‘It is indeedy’ :>)


Bennington Street Cemetery

2016-11-22
All at Coo & Co would be intrigued to see the first version of this poem. We wonder how it might differ from the version here. This is superbly solemn, full of sinister imagery and ending quite dramatically in the final verse; 'Rage, rage' comes to mind. We check this online and see that it's a villanelle. 'All very interesting,' Coo concludes :>)


Suzanne's Dolly Gift

2016-11-22
An arresting portrait of the relationship between mother and daughter, daughter and dolly. We particularly like the 'warming glow', as the poem makes us feel a bit shivery until that point, and we admire the description of the highs and lows of bipolar disorder. Well done, Kathy (-:>)


River Hawk

2016-11-15
'I miss countryfog, FT.' Coo looks sad.

'I know, dear Coo,' FT responds, stroking Coo's head, 'but at least we may revisit his poems from time to time and feel glad to have known him.'

'I suppose,' says Coo. 'And I do enjoy this poem "River Hawk" very much! It is so pleasant to read of birdlife and I love the exhilaration of flight, so well conveyed in the final verse.'

'As do I, Coo,' FT agrees. FT finds she tends to agree with Coo rather regularly these days. 'So let us applaud together.'

'Woo-hoo!' Coo cheers :>)


Fall Canyon

2016-11-15
A very dramatic poem! We found the soundscape especially terrifying: the scream, the echo, the hiss. The ending hits the high note for us, though, with its very disturbing visual. All at Coo & Co feel disturbed while they applaud their friend's talent :>)


A Recollection

2016-11-15
All at Coo & Co enjoyed the wistfulness of this, as well as the colour of the text. The details are very engaging and contribute to a pleasing nostalgia overall. We particularly like the expression, 'mental scrapbook'. Applause! :>)


Ch. 6: Meanwhile . . .

2016-11-15
All at Coo & Co enjoyed reading this. The short sentences lend a lot of tension! 'Yikes, jim,' adds Coo :>o


I AM UP ON YOUTUBE! I AM!

2016-11-13
Congratulations, Ken!
It's a BIG THUMBS-UP from all at Coo & Co :>)))


Beakus Morality Tells I

2016-06-13
'Well, it is nonsense,' the wise avian explains :>)


Though I know.

2016-06-03
This feels as though it has been written following a lot of soulsearching, or even soulrummaging, resolving in the weariness described. The contrast between 'staccato' and 'flat lining' is very effective. Applause from Coo & Co :>)


sitting in the sun after lunch

2016-06-03
All at Coo & Co are fond of such games as this. We like the setting too, the reminiscences, and the final striking simile. We would also like to know what you chose to sketch. 'Divulge!' commands Sage Coo, politely :>)


Creation's Time To Play

2016-05-30
Woo-hoo! Bunnies! :>) (Sage Coo is pleased)
We are also fond of rabbits at Coo & Co, though we've never seen a nest of babies such as so magically described here. This is a pleasant and tender poem – and we like the rhyme scheme, which brings to mind one of our own favourite forms, the limerick. We like the similes too. Applause!


Silent Anger

2016-05-25
I (FT) am prone to fury, occasionally entering a world where words aren't enough to express the rage I feel. So this geometric piece is very appealing. I love the contrasts you draw between the circles and sharp triangles, while the boxes are intriguing – I would like to bring them out of their corners and tip them upside down, to find more shapes inside! A wonderful poem, heartily applauded.


Dross

2016-05-24
All at Coo & Co reflect that this is an interesting way of saying one is sorry. We enjoyed the boiling and skimming, which brought to mind the making of a drink before bed. The purification element recalls chemistry lessons for our FT. Sage Coo sips Ovaltine from a test tube and we all applaud together. Well done, Friend D.! :>)


soar

2016-05-24
Ah, Colin again. It is pleasant to walk, though this is possible only in dreams for our FT, of course, whether conscious or not. We enjoyed the journey to the gorgeous gorge and then the description, particularly the 'swan-diving'. All at Coo & Co muse on swans and smile together :>)


To meet again

2016-05-24
We agree with all the other comments and we join Ashe in hoping the lady will arrive soon. Sage Coo, in proactive mode, encourages you to go out and start some conversations with various women. 'That is a wonderful way to make merry' :>)


my heaven, my hell

2016-05-18
A poem of many thoughts, well related and described. That 'insidious blackness' is rather reminiscent of our FT's anxiety, but she is fortunate to have other wiring that restores her to Rainbowland. Woo-hoo! Ergo, we take our spot in thy heaven, albeit not with an arbor for a cut-off saw. We particularly like 'ruddy duck', recalling sight of these dear creatures at Slimbridge once upon a time. 'Russet feathers and blue beaks,' Sage Coo smiles :>)


I Want To Be Broderick Crawford

2016-05-16
All at Coo & Co very much enjoyed this portrait of B.C., poem and picture. We particularly like the concerned serious eye gaze and the playing of band music, while the notion of knowing the bad guys is also appealing. Sage Coo strikes up the band and everyone applauds together :>)


Quiet Complation

2016-05-11
This is very enjoyable, shells. I love all the little details that create and complete the poem, the sights, smells and feelings that draw me in, wishing to follow the smoke and to try to place that unknown melody. Applause!


A new day, a new light

2016-05-11
This sounds like the beginning of a very interesting journey. The reflection in the puddle is particularly striking; it seems the writer has a significant desire to discover who he is away from the comforts of home. We also like the idea of howling in the woods, finding a freedom of expression that perhaps isn't possible in any other environment. Applause!


For you

2016-05-09
A pleasantly waspish write, with a feast of amusing images. We like the solid rhymes – and the twist at the end!


A Corner Full of Rags

2016-05-05
This is a very hard-hitting poem. The image of rags in a corner is striking and endures long after I've finished reading. I think a lot of people are frightened to acknowledge that such darkness exists in the world. A strong and disturbing piece. FT


The Desperation Of Words

2016-05-04
Hi Friend Dave! :>)
All at Coo & Co enjoyed reading this, for the poignant tone, interesting rhyme scheme and memorable refrain. We particularly like the 'Lilliputian mice' and the final lines. Applause from us all :>)


FIRE FIGHT

2016-05-02
The solid rhymes and fast pace here produce a hardhitting poem, with a poignant moment too, in 'I sit and stare at a picture of my son'. Well done, ternic :>)


Park and Hide

2016-05-02
Nice title, shells, and pleasant intrigue throughout this piece. I like the observation of your thoughts and how they blend with the park setting. And the peeping bird is particularly appreciated, of course. Applause!


AGNOSTICISAM

2016-02-11
I like this very much, Ken, especially the line, 'I know where I am at all times!' It is good to know oneself thus. Applause from your friends at Coo & Co :>)


Your Own Sun

2016-01-18
As always, Dave, a poem of interest and intrigue :>o
Our FT nods vigorously, as she came to poetry shortly after her return home from a horrendous hospital stay; and certainly there was a sense of digging, trying to find courage to cope. This is very well described here. We particularly like the line, 'Cathartic and relatable to everyone'. We applaud together and Hap buys you a cider, as a sort of reward (;>)


GLOBAL BOOGERING UP!

2016-01-18
How timely, Ken, as the copyeditors of BBP have recently completed a project concerning climate change.
This seems an excellent summary of the situation and we like the drama of the piece.
Applause!


Wassail!

2016-01-18
PS: ...and we shall catch up with our commenting soon! :>)


a dream

2015-12-01
This is all very pleasant. Our FT has never known a delicate love such as is suggested by thy 'tinkerbell', but we are fond of nature at BBP and we appreciate the images in this piece, all the way through to the tall grass at the end (-:>)


It Was Just A Dream

2015-12-01
I like the way the poem progresses through stages. It feels sad at the beginning, then it seems to move through an analytical time to acceptance. I like the rain because I find the sound of rain soothing. Altogether an interesting piece (-:>)


Silver; or, The Burnt Tree of Coo

2015-11-27
All at BirdBrains thank thee for thy comment (-:>)

Concerning 'torturous', we find that the Burnt Tree of Coo is able to perform this without bite, in her pleasant rural accent.

All Good Things,
Ms Bird :>)


The Wind Changed

2015-11-20
This is very well described, Friend Dave. We can well imagine the look and we like the dramatic moment when the wind changes, causing psychological as well as facial permanence. That is very interesting. The final two lines are a great success, adding another layer to the storytelling. Whirls of applause from BBP (-:>)


Metamorphosis

2015-11-16
Please don't apologise for the repost, Joe; this is a beautiful heartrending poem and I'm honoured to read it. I love the title. There's immense strength of will involved here, all the more in evidence set amidst the very powerful images throughout the piece. And the ending reaches right through to my heart. Gentle applause from BBP.


Down A Long Road

2015-11-16
This is a pleasure to read, my friend :-)
My connection with farms is fairly slight, but I always feel a familiarity when I come across words such as 'barn' and 'horseshoe'. The first shed I knew had a horseshoe nailed over the door. I love the opening lines of this poem, leading to the gradual weathering – 'gray handprints' is particularly interesting and I like the combination of this colour with the 'red stains of hinged rust' in the next line. For the final two lines, I feel a sense of an emerging character and an acceptance with this, as Dave notes. Applause from BirdBrains all (-:>)


The Tipping Point

2015-11-12
Woo-hoo! Praying mantis! We are fascinated by these insects at BBP. And we like this poem very much indeed, particularly the line, 'His green arms waved in disdain'. Both the meeting and the massacre are expertly described. We mimic the mantis in expressing applause to thee (-:>)


Caligula

2015-11-12
Ooh, Caligula! Our FT has interesting memories of watching a film of this title – 'Caligula', that is, though she suggests that 'Ooh, Caligula!' would have been more appropriate. That was during her student days; it is better not to linger here. We like the philosophical tone of thy introductory verse and the intrigue that follows. And the line lengths are pleasant to observe. We applaud and offer thee a toga :>)


November Despond

2015-11-10
All at BirdBrains are sorry to read of thy despond, my friend :-)
I love this poem, though. The quotation by Wright serves as an excellent preparation, as the beauty in his lines continues in your own. I like the 'ragged echelons' especially and it's always a pleasure to observe squirrels, of course. The 'frieze' is very apt and I like the dramatic soundscape of 'clattering in the catalpa' followed by autumn brushfires. Altogether, this is a treat on a dismal day. Applause!


Strange Weather Report

2015-11-10
Yes, this is quite strange. But then, we are fond of strange at BBP. The 'north south east westerly' is particularly appealing. Ms Bird twirls her appreciation :>)


On Learning Of A Friend In Hospice

2015-11-06
Very moving, very beautiful :-) :>)


People Are People

2015-11-06
Nice one, Friend Dave. At BirdBrains, we eschew many people, but not yourself, of course. 'We like Friend Dave,' Ms Bird coos. We also like the expression 'nest unsoiled'. Applause from the spotless offices of BBP (-:>)


Last Days

2015-11-06
A wise comprehension by Friend Dave, very well expressed. Sage Coo applauds mightily (*v*)


To A Grieving Friend

2015-11-06
My friend, I'm sorry for your friend's loss; condolences from all at BBP.
The quote from Keats is a beautiful beginning. The description of the bank and the stream is vivid; I can picture it in my mind. I like the way the poem opens out in the second half, taking in birds and generally more of nature. The conclusion offers comfort while conveying your faith in your friend's ability to carry on. Applause from FT and Ms Bird (-:>)


Through the Rain Haiku

2015-10-28
A very colourful and enjoyable journey. Fine lines indeed! (-:>)


Strong and Sweet

2015-10-28
Ssslurp! Alas, we must eschew coffee at BBP for health reasons, but our FT has fond memories of coffee culture from her time in legal office. We like the third verse especially, as the expression '[s]ipped into a face' brings to mind something cartoonish, which we rather revere (-:>)


Poet Turns To Paper

2015-10-27
All at BirdBrains enjoyed this little number, with its rhymes on each second and fourth line. It is pleasant to muse upon prisms and interesting to consider that 'the singer is the song'. Thoughtful nodding ensues at BBP (-:>)


Prayer

2015-10-27
Here is another delightful descriptive piece :-)
This poem is a box of treasures, both for the nature notes at the centre and the musings on either side. It's interesting, how people differ. At BirdBrains, nature is first art and music, then words (-:>)


Legacy

2015-10-27
A very thought-provoking piece, my friend :-)
A sombre mood is set in the first stanza, as darkness envelops the pines. I particularly enjoyed the description of the needles, holding onto the light, and the alliteration of the last line.
The second stanza is more sombre still. Your concerns are well expressed and I understand your despair. 'Place of peace' is a beautiful expression and the final description brings some solace as the light returns. Serene applause from BirdBrains all (-:>)