| Letters In The Attic
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2006-06-18
Omg!!!!!! memoreis, AS you can tell I a m quite sentimental myself
I wish we alll could pocket emotions and things like these.
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| Affair of the Air
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2006-05-06
This is rather a neat and simple poem. I like where it comes from.
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| Yours and Yours alone
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2006-04-30
What a tin g a poem about u and PASSION!!! well yes!!!! U hav no shame? LOL!!! good though!!
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| Who You Really Are
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2006-04-30
Whoa amanda, super long!!! but nonetheless it was a brilliant read!!! I kno i sounded totally british there!!! I like that in the middle of your poems u always seem to respond or shout out to the one your talking about with simple phrases and lines. And yet your poetry seems quite verbose lol
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| The Sea Maiden
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2006-04-08
o gawd o gawd o gawd !!!! wat a read i likey alot hasani u good
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| so different yet so the same
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2006-04-08
i like plenty u make meh feel less ole anf bummy than i hav ever felt for this past week, tanx hasani.
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| My frighten thoughts
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2006-04-02
nice nice good read.
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| *Poka Dot Tea
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2006-04-02
well hehe i like like it alot
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| lost in the dark
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2006-02-27
Weeeeeyyyzzzzzzz dis real bad n not bcause u is me fren. take a full 5 dawg!!!!!!!! smooches lol:))
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| Walk of The Tarmac Path, Part IV: Obstacle of Truth
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2006-02-27
well sorry to be so blunt but the roman numeral for 4 is IV not IIII. Sorry but let me know if it was intentional ok.
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| Corner of My Eye
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2006-02-27
Really i thoiught that this was about secret admiration upon reading the title but now Whoa! I know not to assume.
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| Fly and fall
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2006-02-27
Well I find it to be quite delicate. Somewhat dreamy is that what you were trying to achieve?
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| Your smell
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2006-02-26
good real good, almost as if i could smell that smell, i feel the same way about scents i am attracted by that first and foremost
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| Hot Desert Sands (A Nightmare)
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2006-02-26
Zora, you know how i feel about Shakespeare and the way you used Lear in this poem is OH MY GOSH!!! and guess what i am studying King Lear for this academic year at school!!!
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| Obvious Errors
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2006-02-26
man you real deep!!!email me at brauseo@gmail.com or ppna22_97@hotmail.com
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| Wooden Child
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2006-02-26
Weeeeyyyyyyyyzzzzzzz!!!!!! you real dred. your style different from mine but still, dude you real cool
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| You used to sing
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2006-02-22
wow natalie kudos on this one, i like it but dont worry someone else will sing for You
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| The Country
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2006-02-22
sounds escapist like cheaper by the dozen but in reverse-right? anyway here's your comment *tada*
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| Just a thought
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2006-02-22
wow deep, contemplative, I like
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| Match-Sticks & Silver Needles-Children of Lesser God-2
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2006-02-20
Your poetry is marvelous, and devotes itself to awareness. I truly appreciated the message delivered and as an aspiring UN leader and International icon, you must understand that reading of someone else's awareness of this crisis is reassuiring to the fact that there are people out there who care for the greater and more important things in life, ou future.
Thanks
Bekim RAuseo
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