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Jen

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Your first kiss!

2006-03-09
...clouds of thought in voyage! wow!!!! i remember that being my first kiss with the love of my life! i love how you described it....i felt as though I was going back to that specific moment! ahhh.....great job!!!


For Me

2006-03-09
while reading this I was relating .... I feel I would do that for my significant other! but finishing it - I love your last line. i recently read an article in a magazine - that questions the morals of women....if they're starting to lay them back down, put things off for the man of there dreams....and forgetting what they'd set out to do! i still plan to persue my dreams, as well as continuing to love the man of my dreams! i truly liked reading your poem tho - i recommend this to all women! nice job!


...The Unspoken Player's Lament...

2006-03-06
**tear** WOW!!!
I nearly cried......the sorrow that was embedded in your words.......I feel as though I should *Hug You* and tell you *I'm sorry*............I do hope whatever your situation is that it does heal..........I had experienced the one person who'd meant more to me than anyone....yet he left for his home country. That tore me up.....put I've through my despair God brought me light...... I have someone who is very similiar - - but who is full of love and passion......::sigh:: Amazing....life is!
Anyhow - Best wishes!!!!! AND........GREAT POEM! ~


My star on the altar of love!

2006-03-06
Great poem - I love how you gave her life in the poem. Very great! :)


About Him

2006-02-28
I loved your poem! Awesome job. Reading it made feel as though you were describing me, and my feelings for the "eye of my soul" ......... great read! :)


Twinkling secrets

2006-02-17
love the word choice! its as if you take readers on a bus ride, addressing the many wonders of our mind :) - -