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Ashe

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ON THE FASE OF IT!

2017-10-21
Perfect!
Ashe


Without Limit

2017-10-21
What a beautiful wish! With all my heart I wish it comes true for all who wish this. Freedom!
Ashe


E V I L - and you ?

2017-10-20
This is easy. In a word, no. I can forgive many things, but not plain evil.
Ashe


the culture of peace

2017-10-20
I like the idea that "peace is something you sow."
Ashe


Thrust Back into Levittown

2017-10-20
I do believe the magic of France did reach you in this poem. A nostalgia for real food and the small pleasures of life. I like this.
Ashe


Broken Memory House

2017-10-20
What a poignant poem! Your use of the metaphor in this touching poem is done with much skill. Very sad, but the poem is very well written.
Ashe


Crave

2017-10-19
By the way, every time you craving is so bad, write him a message but save it, don't send it. It helps a little.
Ashe


Crave

2017-10-19
Very nicely done!


Aftermath

2017-10-19
Very nice words indeed!
Ashe


Now we are sixty-six (with apologies to Christopher Robin)

2017-10-19
Happy Birthday! And what a delightful poem. Thoroughly enjoyed.
Ashe


Bob

2017-10-19
Beautiful use of metaphors! Love it.
Ashe


A love lost

2017-10-19
So sad to lose a dear love. Your feelings in this poem are well projected.
Ashe


Happy birthday Karoyce Living

2017-10-19
You must be a delight to have as a friend. :))
Ashe~~


Can't Blame Them

2017-10-19
lol :) Can't blame them. I think I did the same thing
Ashe


prison's cell or nihilism

2017-10-19
You akways give us the hard questions. I would say that if you had nothing but your brain, you would probably invent a god.
Ashe~~


Faithful Puppy Dogs

2017-10-19
This is so sweet and so profound. A dog never judges and always forgives unless mistreated. Good poem
Ashe~~


scar

2017-10-19
Sensuous and intimate. It draws the reader into the mood.
Ashe


Kim Jong-un

2017-10-18
Rob, I believe this is an unfair comment on this poem since it is hardly praise for a dictarshp and the USA at the moment is hardly an admired or has a stable situation in government. I don't want this to become a public feud, but I believe that there is still freedom of speech, and poetry has often been used as a vehicle for expressing opinions, unless it is a policy of this site.
Ashe


Max

2017-10-18
I am so sorry that you have lost Rex, but so happy for all he has done in his lifetime to make others happy.

I have two rescue dogs who provide me with all the wonder of their personalities as well. :)
Ashe


Brain Putters

2017-10-18
I love this! :) Your brain is just fine and I love the way it works.
Ashe


Kim Jong-un

2017-10-18
I am in agreement with you, Lawrence, and I want to say more but it isn't printable on this site.

Meanwhile we have an incompetent petulant eight year old with his finger on the button on the deadliest weapon on Earth. Every day I tell myself that I must be living a nightmare, except everyday when I awaken I see that HE IS STILL THERE in spite of having committed every transgression known to man and woman.
(There goes my military pension)


The Way Time Goes

2017-10-17
How time can drag sometimes, and then, its all gone too soon.
Good poem.
Ashe


Man Cold

2017-10-17
Oh, but the tragedies of a man cold certainly desrvw to be praised! And those outrageous wives, of course.
Very nice rhyming. :)
Ashe


Cycling Thoughts at Night

2017-10-17
Going back to the math, I would suggest you skip the trip if you will be moving at 15 mph at an angle of 18 degrees 26 feet. It sounds a bit rough to me ... but then, there is Marketa to soothe the fears and eliminate the dangers.~~
Ashe


2words

2017-10-17
Two words might marry because they value each other, but which two words? Clever writing.
Ashe


Port Angeles

2017-10-17
Each word creates an image and a feeling. Powerful poem.
Ashe~


Haiku for Ophelia

2017-10-17
Ophelia will always be a sad story for me. Nice haiku.
Ashe


Cycling Thoughts at Night

2017-10-17
Please forget the math and enjoy the wonderful ride on the river. A slow ride that ends on the other side over a calm slow river will be a day to remember and cherish and an experience to want to experience again and again.

I could measure the size and the strength of the waves using complicated lorarithms when I go in the ocean, but I only look at the size of the waves and dive in under. Please, enjoy!

Marketa would never take you into a raging river, or are you going river rafting in white waters?

I can't believe you are. Slow drifting rivers are lovely and romantic and so very peaceful. Enjoy!
Ashe*


Tanka the Thirteenth

2017-10-16
What can I say? Each one is better than the last. Such sweet and gentle love. Beautiful!
Ashe


The Hanging of Mary

2017-10-16
This is heartbreaking and shows how cruel man can be. I am glad you didn't post the picture. Animals react to pain just as we do and they cannot be blamed. What a sad story!
Ashe~


The Ticket Agent's Query

2017-10-16
This poem is deep and dark and sad. It's hard to comment on it, other than it is an excellent write.*
Ashe~


Happy Wedding day to my best friend Yasmine and her wife Erica by Ann Wood

2017-10-16
Meaningful and so heartfelt. I enjoyed this very much! Happiness for Erica and Yasmine!
Ashe~


silent words

2017-10-16
And, so very good to read your words here again! I have missed you and all of us as well.~
Ashe


silent words

2017-10-16
I feel the impact of injustice in this poem in your own soft but poignant style. Great writing.
~Ashe


Tanka the Twelfth

2017-10-16
Clever wording and ever so romantic! The last line is dreamy.
You have always been an excellent poet, but now you are softer, more romantic. Love it!
Ashe~


Silverware

2017-10-16
This can make setting the table so much more fun! :)
Ashe


In the heaven by Ann Wood

2017-10-16
You make me smile at these lovely women angels so full of fun.
Ashe :)


god and drugs

2017-10-16
I would think that drugs would break any spieitual
and emotional relationship since a person on drugs can only think of satisfying his need at any cost. Well said that it can break but never enhance.
Ashe


Tuffies

2017-10-15
This is wonderful! I loved reading this poem.
~Ashe


27 autumn poems

2017-10-15
I am sorry I didn't read these before Each and every one of them I felt so deeply. Each one a beautiful scene or a whole story in itself. Your style is magical. I will read these often.
Ashe++


11 poems later...

2017-10-14
I am glad you are writing your poems for us again. I love reading the lines, thinking I am getting an understanding of your meaning until the next line tells me I am wrong. Wonderful lines to read over and over and ponder on them.
:) Ashe


Heaven?

2017-10-14
These are so funny! Thanks!!! :)
Ashe~


THE PLACARD SAID! THE END IS NIGH! (ADISHANS)

2017-10-14
This is very good. I remember seeing these similar men carrying their placards about the end of the world and they always frightened me as a child. Now, it's all too true to carry a placard. The time is here and now. Now I carry the placard with my words. The End is Near. No planet in the Universe can sustain the amount of CO2 we are pouring into ours. What foolish creatures we have been~
Ashe.


Spoiled Water

2017-10-14
This is so very timely, and happening right now. Also a view of our future. A sad and very true poem.
Ashe


ocean and 18th

2017-10-14
I have read each and every one of these over and over again, enjoying them each time. Every time I picked a favorite, I would only find another one I liked more, so I'll just say that these are a very enjoyable collection. Ok, I enjoyed the beach, and Santa Monica Pier, and Venice, but really, I enjoyed them all, and I wonder about the Ravens too, and I am sad about the violence, and I could go on. Thanks for sharing these.
Ashe~~


Sultry Lady Of Summertime

2017-10-13
Drought is what scares me the most. Lack of water means lack of life. How beautifully you announce the waiting of summer. I am not sure when you summer begins, but ours begins in December and we also wait for its arrival while the rest of the world waits for winter. Nice. I can feel that soft warm rain. :)
Ashe~


Lines for Sue

2017-10-13
It's so sad to lose somebody like that, but they live n our hearts for the rest of their lives. She reminds me of Sister Minnie Grace in my life. She would also have loved Pope Francis. After years I still see something, snd I think Minnue Grace were there to shate it with. In that way Sue will live always in the many hearts she touched.
Ashe


October

2017-10-13
Each stanza is a picture full of nostalgia and exotic scents. What a beautiful feeling I felt reading this. I enjoy your poems. They take me to those places that I have only dreamed about. Soft and nostalgic. Love it.
Ashe


reveille

2017-10-12
I love the brevity of Haiku. I like the image this one forms.
Ashe


Heaven

2017-10-12
Absolutely heavenly! I enjoyed everyone of your heavens, which are each person's heaven too if we learn to appreciate all we have. A little borrowing can be forgiven in such a celestial poem. I loved it!
Ashe