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Ashe

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Not This Time, Senor

2017-12-12
A very visual and good interpretation of the many who show up in places like where I live--and the younger girls are not all that easy to get anymore. Great one
Ashe


He Said

2017-12-11
He talks double-speak, otherwise known as lies, so what he meant was that he was going to get richer at the expense of the American people. I like your poem.
Ashe


Something Beginning With...

2017-12-11
It must be lonely to be the sun. :(
Nice poem, though. :)
Ashe


Elements

2017-12-10
I saw the news of snow and wind in Northern Florida yesterday. We are having very exciting weather lately, everywhere! You wrote a perfectly rhymed and lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it.
Ashe


emily 2

2017-12-10
I enjoyed this soft and beautifully crafted poem. Your poems have a calming effect, I would choose to read them at night.
Ashe


The Good Posh Woman

2017-12-09
The exotic images and story kept me transfixed. I am still thinking about the question: " We exist because of what we say. I say little. Does that mean I exist only little?"

Ashe


My mother, my Lord

2017-12-09
I wish there was a way to take all this pain and hurt away. This is a heartfelt poem of hurt and pleading. My heart goes out to you and your mother who have been my very dear friends.
I wait for your next poem to be a happier one.+
Ashe


For the Lost

2017-12-09
These are beautiful words, Yanto. They have touched me deeply.
Ashe


Voice

2017-12-08
It made me smile at the many times I have done thst just to keep hearing that voice next to me. I like this very much. Beautiful writing.
Ashe


Dedication

2017-12-08
You are so lucky to have found each other. A beautiful dedication.
Ashe


Dead Before All Time

2017-12-07
I agree. We are only alive when we are remembered. Great poem!
Ashe


NOW AS THE YEAR ENDING!

2017-12-07
So true, Ken, and we will wonder if we will be around at this time next year as well. So much can happen in one year. Time to reflect. I like it.
Ashe


rise - R I S E - to the Occasion ?

2017-12-07
Definitely a good trait to learn, for everyone.
Ashe


News Again?

2017-12-07
It sure seems that way, doesn't it? Meanwhile, the people wait for something to be done. Good poem.
Ashe


dusty glue

2017-12-07
Great story! We can each come up with our own endings. You have given me a great idea for a short story. Could I use the idea? Not your words? Let me know.
Ashe


Redeeming

2017-12-07
I find this very touching and I hope she can see the way. She must have gone through so much to be so afraid. Lovely poem.
Ashe


JUST - WHY ONE DAY A YEAR?

2017-12-07
There's so much hate going on these days that it sounds like a great idea. Why not indeed?
Ashe


THE RITCH AND THE POOR!(Trigerde By Jambo Rockda Work)

2017-12-06
unfortunately this is very true
Ashe


If Rich Men

2017-12-06
Is that like when hell freezes over? Rich men just want more money, even when they have more than they know what to do with it. Great poem!


Don't I

2017-12-06
:) good one!


A POET PLEADS GUILTY!

2017-12-06
Do they still use the guillotine? :)

I don't think so.

Ashe


emily

2017-12-04
A bit of a shock for a young girl, but a lovely scene as well Nice rhyme and rhythm in your poem. I like the format you chose.
Ashe


On Miller's Pond

2017-12-04
What an amazing scene! I would love to see a painting with all of the protagonists just as your words have painted them.
Ashe


December

2017-12-04
December is the end of rhe rainy season so all is green and fresh. The ocean breeze blows unobstructed so the hair is always moving. No hairdresser to worry about! No Christmas trees or presents to buy, but a manger scene in the center of town and good things to eat. I strongly recommend all Christmas haters to travel south of the border and away from cities for the season. The ocean is perfect and the surfing is fun. Memories tend to stay in check.
Paris with an 's' I love it!
Ashe


THE POET! (ADDID LINE))(With Thanks To Liam Work That Trigerd This Work Of Mine)

2017-12-04
Perfectly said!
Ashe


The Minstrel...

2017-12-04
In some American Indian folklore, the one who brought the news and told the stories accompanied by his flute was called Kokopelli.
I love this poem. it read like a song.
Ashe


My Parallel Shadow

2017-12-04
I like theories and I found yours very intriguing. The last stanza is quite shocking. Nice job.
Ashe


evening

2017-12-03
image after pleasant image mixed with sensory sensations. Colin came back. indescribably beautiful evening stanzas. Love those the best, though it's hard to choose.
Ashe


charlie

2017-12-03
Awww ... Dogs are extremely loyal. If he's not fixed, soon he will be out looking for female companiniship -- not the human kind.
Ashe


brain

2017-12-02
That is a very interesting question in these times of artificial intelligence. Can a robot be made with more intelligence than its maker? Computers already perform tasks that no man can.
Ashe


I thought angels were to be only in heaven

2017-12-02
This is almost enough to make me believe. Nice write.
Ashe


In the Garden

2017-12-02
A sad (and angry) description of what our particular county has turned into reflected by the passing of rhe greediest and most devastating bill ever passed against the American people by the most crooked and wretched administration we have ever endured and its hateful effect on the most ignorant of its citizens. R.I.P. USA. This is perfect, Lawrence.
Ashe
(A very angry American Ex-Pat who still pays taxes to that country, even with money earned overseas)


The Passing of Today

2017-12-02
Wekcome to our bay. It's obvious this is a very important poem to you. It feels like one of those days when your life changed. Would love to read more!
Ashe


In the Garden

2017-12-02
How sad!
Ashe


Computer

2017-12-02
The good and the bad. Last night I had one of those mad moments trying to follow directions that didn't work! I went to bed instead.
Ashe


The Vagabond- I sit here writing poems

2017-12-02
I see what you wrote as a stream of consciousness. You have written beautiful, inspiring poems, but you can't write that every day on demand. At least I don't think so. Open yourself to feel more about everything you see abd experience. Your command of the English language is better than a great many Englush speakers. Just keep writing. I like the idea of the vagabond.
Ashe


THE LOOPY LOOP BUS! (A return to a snach story-verce)

2017-12-01
You got into a conversation that would be worth missing your stop and coming back. Of course, the mobile will lose its charge in no time and then there would be no more communication. But, dig him up to see if he's still alive? That's very curious. Good one! :)
Ashe


two poems of love

2017-12-01
You have written a very interesting combination in these two poems of love. One is happy and hopeful. The other turns hectic, linear, circular. There's lots I want to say, but let each person see in it what they want. I like it.
Ashe


After Midnight

2017-11-29
I agree, simply delightful!

I suppose that this one: The "lunatic, the lover, and the poet
Can get slightly unhinged after midnight." might have something to do with this one:
"O timorous Thomas, trembling in the dark!
Pray to your guardian angel after midnight." :)

This was very enjoyable to read!

Ashe


Lotsa Love, Mom

2017-11-29
Lol ... brings back memories. )
Ashe


Coffee in Columbus

2017-11-29
Second chances come around.
Ashe


dog

2017-11-28
Dogs are so much better creatures than humans!
Ashe


With Age

2017-11-28
Very nice!!
Ashe


A Hollywood Romance

2017-11-28
It's pretty good "flash fiction" as it is. :)
Ashe

But, what's Markle?


Hermit Crabs

2017-11-28
This is very well written. A difficult concept to get accross, but you've accomplished it. Of course that the inside is great since we can do what we want and what we like, but until that Inception comes around there is a lot we can do with the outside world, such as caring so much about what others think, including parents, and do what you want, because you know it's right. Great poem.
Ashe
PS. I'll look for the book!


Fix-up

2017-11-28
Lol ... Nice to know one who fixes it up. :)
Ashe


Unnatural

2017-11-28
A brief moment of acceptance, I suppose. Your writing always fascinates me.
Ashe


time

2017-11-27
Eternity has no beginning and no end, so how can it begin after death?


pretty boys and xanax

2017-11-27
Love this! Your inges in words are exactly true. Very nicely put together. So strong and vulnerable at the same time. That's all of us.
Ashe


Winter

2017-11-27
People love to paint pretty pictures of winter snow and icicles hanging, people sitting by the fireplace bundled in clothes, but I must admit that this is the best definition of Winter that I can think of. It's exactly the way I feel about it, and the main reason why I moved to the tropics after 25 years of just THAT!
Perfect imagery of the way some of us view Winter. Thank you for sharing this!
Ashe~~