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The Ancient Flame

2017-10-08
Oh yeah. I like that too.


THE TIMES WE LIVE IN!

2017-10-08
I agree. What do we leave our children x


Done

2017-10-08
A tough call on both parts I reckon. Seems like the other in this is between a rick and a hard place.


a summer place

2017-08-19
One should never underestimate the potential of a cloud.


State Fair

2017-08-14
I know the feeling of this situation.


The Little One

2017-08-11
Made laugh and remember my own and theirfunny ways.

My eldest saw a hutterhigh...butterfly
The tullert....was the toilet
My rubs....were her blisters from new shoes ( purchased for fashion against my advice)

Happy days. Thankyou for reminding me.


Swinger

2017-08-11
Sooo...woke up feeling happy and generally positive then?


i fell from those swings

2017-08-11
A hard read, however I enjoyed the style very much. I was drawn in quickly. I particularly liked how you acknowledged the child's observation of the evening prayers. I felt the helplessness in it all and how clever to use the swings as the vehicle to bring out this story.


When we Feel like Hiding

2017-08-10
Very true. I think I call it the Emu Syndrome. I apply this thought process every time I put off a fitness session..speaking of which....


Little Scratch?

2017-08-10
Oh no. Why am I reminded of the Flintstones car here? Hope itdoesnt cost too much to repair.


Lunatic Factory

2017-08-10
Its because they're afraid of what they don't understand. Most artist have a thread if lunacy..cut me in half they'd and fund the word quirky written all the way through...like Blackpool rock.


I Wait

2017-08-10
Seems your rivers are a place if reflection ( well, I guess they would be mirror like) but no. I live in a Mountainous region and in times of pondering or trouble I take off to the mountains and they listen. I always come back feeling restored. Anyway less about me. Have one thing to say....women can't sparkle all the time...the sparkle would not be noticed then would it? We save our sparkle for those most deserving , and then only on high days and holidays!


FATHER WITH HIS DAUGHTER MIKA

2017-08-09
A stepping stone, a path across a river, a bridge between generations.


Light Tears

2017-07-15
Nice light touch to the writing too. Very elegent.clipped and yet sumptuous.


TO ALL MY FREINDS ON POETBAY

2017-06-22
Cool. Not sure I want some if my nonsense to last forever!


TO ALL MY FREINDS ON POETBAY

2017-06-22
Cool. Not sure I want some if my nonsense to last forever!


Olivia!

2017-06-22
Olivia is in touch with feeling everything...carpe deuming so to speak. O and the beach demands you go get in and paddle those footsies...even if they are sub zero temperatures. Reconnect and feel the sand between your pinkies.


Like that

2017-06-20
Twisting my melon.


Melancholy Eggs for Breakfast

2017-06-10
Loving your egg-cellent portrayal of inner dialogue in relation to melancholy. Sorry..couldn't help myself. Eggs-tremely neat...oops...there I go again!


Ablation

2017-06-04
Noooo. It is the journey that makes us. Just think how dull your poetry would be if it hadn't been licked by the sludge!


Lake Michigan Sunrise

2017-06-04
How many jumps did you get on your skimmy stone?


My Favourite Poets

2017-06-04
Oh yes me too, me to.


Harnessed

2017-06-02
I might disagree and say if hopelessness were a shroud...we could cast it off maybe. Or maybe we are like animals who repeatedly have to shed this skin Of hopelessness ...only for it to become hardened again. ..and cast away and so on...either way Im liking the idea of hopelessness being a shackle.


Fountain Pens

2017-06-01
Reminded
Gladly
Nina


Fountain Pens

2017-06-01
Well. Im resided gladly if how I felt the first time I heard NAna Simone singing the song Wild is the wind....she said......." ....kiss me, I hear the sound of mandolins..."

Whether that makes any sense to you, Im not sure but I'm sure in high respect for Nina....


MANCHESTER - 22 MAY 2017!

2017-05-24
Its heart wrenching Ken, watching this u fold, watching peoples loved ones despair, watching children being wiped it. Thankyou for taking time to give their lives value.


The Catacomb waltz

2017-05-14
Sweet. Love it. 'Nuff said.


A Long Haul

2017-05-14
Id like to know if the grass was or want greener there.


Love Letters Never Sent

2017-05-07
Well isn't this just a little bit of lovely. Really enjoyed this xx


WHILE SOMEONE WAS A MUMBLING!

2017-05-06
Sounds like Star Wars Day and Yoda have been influencing here!!


there’s a broken woman

2017-04-19
You've caught her very well. Please let her in...tell us the next episode.


WINTERED MINDS!

2017-04-18
And how cutting those rocks that slice them


To a friend

2017-04-18
Very occasionally, Ill read a piece of beauty that is so exquisite it takes my breath away. This was one of those rarities.


everything is small

2017-03-05
Mm...mmmmm.

That me. Licking my lips after gorging on fine words.

Very tasty.


Slice of Life

2017-02-11
I do a lot of running and I am familiar with the feeling of showering and being pleasantly sore. I think Lawrence Beck's poem about iron filings touched on this feeling to earlier. I sense a theme running through poetbay here. I like the clipped way you used your words here to for maximum effect. Any way a rest day affords me to indulge in poetry. Thankyou.


The Sun is Up

2017-02-09
Methink's one must be earlier to rise!
In liking the feeling of despondency strangely.


The Sun is Up

2017-02-09
Methink's one must be earlier to rise!
In liking the feeling of despondency strangely.


Knight in Armour

2017-02-05
One wonders who this is for? Either way...intriguing.


Wreckage

2017-02-05
Scavengers are only to happy to dig and pick over bones until...well until themes nothing..which brings a kind of freedom. Hurty feelings here.


A Barbed Life

2017-02-05
Lovely xx


Underwater

2017-01-22
This how I feel when politicians are talking.


Beginning

2017-01-21
Having just come back in from a very frosty bitter day I long for Spring. Well put here.


A skylark

2017-01-21
Thoroughly enjoyed this. I like how you used the bird as a carrier of your inner thoughts which had the effect of amplifying your emotions.


THE NEW DARK AGES!

2017-01-21
Me too Ashe.


With Loneliness

2017-01-10
Tasty.


the lotus

2016-12-17
This makes the reader dig deep into their own experiences of life, of situations and people they have known. Thankyou. I agree this is no fragment.


things that fall between chairs

2016-10-23
And poetry web sites too!! Love this.


it's the story of someone...

2016-10-23
Well as long as they gave you a name check then thats ok!


The Poetess

2016-10-18
Ok you had me at...Such velocities are difficult to match. And by
I will wrestle with these thoughts for now, I think I was starting to crumble and then darn it by repetition you hammeted home

at best, my worst won't do~

I mean...leave me with some dignity!


Fallen from the earth

2016-10-12
Very. Very nice work.