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The latest comments that LFD3 has written.

Call Me Matt

2017-01-16
Oh now then. You have quite a wonderful piece off pondering here. Really. Sometimes I read words...and they Sam eck me full in the mouth... Thankyou.


Eye Strain

2017-01-10
Oh dearly me. How awful. I feel like I'm reading the thoughts one with a love unrequited.


With Loneliness

2017-01-10
Tasty.


the lotus

2016-12-17
This makes the reader dig deep into their own experiences of life, of situations and people they have known. Thankyou. I agree this is no fragment.


Dog and Rose

2016-12-17
Mr Beck. I can't begin to tell you how splendid I think this is. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, I like the way you use the dog and rose, heavens we've all been there. Top work.


Changing of the Season

2016-11-22
Did I give permission to have my rusty old heart chords to be played so effectively? This really is lovely.


things that fall between chairs

2016-10-23
And poetry web sites too!! Love this.


it's the story of someone...

2016-10-23
Well as long as they gave you a name check then thats ok!


Head Over Heels

2016-10-20
This reminds me of Nina Simone's Wild is the Wind. Think it must be the mandolins.


The Poetess

2016-10-18
Ok you had me at...Such velocities are difficult to match. And by
I will wrestle with these thoughts for now, I think I was starting to crumble and then darn it by repetition you hammeted home

at best, my worst won't do~

I mean...leave me with some dignity!


Fallen from the earth

2016-10-12
Very. Very nice work.


little poem

2016-10-04
Or the road gearing up to absorb the weary falling traveller
Or the traveller spitting road grit at a powerful little pebble


Lucy shoots daisies

2016-09-25
The title caught my eye. Shooting from the hip.


True Lies Weigh

2016-09-25
Deep breath Kathy. As many as it takes.


wind road

2016-09-25
Love love September.Before the October of Halloween and the rush to Chrustmas begins in shops


Psychotherapy Begins

2016-09-25
Am I the only one who wants to know how it ends!!!! She might have welcomed the question!


Love The Rain

2016-08-20
Nice how you have encompassed memory into a weathery scene.


Why read this?

2016-08-19
I suppose you need to make poverty tangible, not just something we view from the comfort of our million mile removed armchairs


Compression

2016-08-19
Rio.


What If?

2016-08-19
And on the horizon lay optimism
It tugged away at the thorny constraints
Of regret,
Of misgivings.
It opened a yellow brick road to..
To that brilliance
They call hope.

Sorry, not meaning to hijack your post. Sometimes it's easier to express how poems make me feel in prose, instead.


Regretful Arguments

2016-08-19
Oh dont they just! Liking this very much.


How you change things

2016-08-12
I just bet, its the tiniest if things about your sweetheart that you remember, not an overall image. Say, the way they blink, or the curl if their lips as they smile, or the rhythm of their walk or the lightness of their touch. Just saying...


calligraphy

2016-08-06
I see the calligraphy written by the hopping sparrow, oh that we could read its thoughts. I think it would be signed Brave Little Sparrow.


The trick is to keep looking

2016-08-06
Ooh a sneeky bit of people watching from the security of a seat in a secret cafe seems to have purged this write. Nicely done.


peter and wendy

2016-07-30
But he has the thimble....


Tribolights

2016-07-24
Sounds bliss. Would love to be in violet shadows right now


Love at some safe distance

2016-07-21
Whether it was intentional or not, this reminded me of several sermons while sitting in contemplation, gleaning what I could from Biblical verse at times of great change.
There is a quiet acceptance, gentle advice and a gradual realisation of those things you secretly knew, but had to complete the journey to realise.
Thankyou.


the facade

2016-07-21
Hi Kathy. You're right here, that which doesn't break us makes us. I like the effect created by selected letter spacing, makes the reader feel the breeze.


Zeusy

2016-06-15
The number is 42 of course. Its the number that represents the answer to.life, the universe and everything.

According to one very famous book.


You're not depressed you're just a dick

2016-06-09
Oh yes! It is rude, but justly so. And I'm smiling a wry smile as I salute the idea of honest communication. I LOVE this. Great, " yeah," stop being such a %únker and leave me alone!!! ". Brilliant!


In or out ?

2016-06-09
Out.


Globular

2016-06-04
What are you writing about....trainers ( sneakers)


The Hope of Holes by Daisy Wilson age 9 (granddaughter of KL)

2016-05-21
I love reading children's poems. They are unbridled by preconceptions and delightfully fresh. Well done Dsisy aged 9, I'm sure Robert Frost is smiling, somewhere.


Most Souls

2016-05-20
This is rather lovely.


A Corner Full of Rags

2016-05-07
" "
That's a display of how inept my comments are for these victims
I have no words that could comfort.


Bye

2016-05-03
Cheerio!


Mirror Ring

2016-04-19
Mirror, mirror on the wall
Who is the most intriguing one of all?

Who shall adore and who shall call?
Reveal all please, mirror, on the wall.


No Trojans Needed

2016-04-09
The eternal dilemma. Follow one, the other is bereft, and so it goes.


Giving Up The Ghost

2016-04-06
Well this is pretty. Cuffs definitely frayed.


The seaside

2016-04-06
I too live the mountains and the rivers and the woods. But, also the beaches. Hint: Avoid the tourist beaches with their burger bars and car parks, go off grid, find a beautiful, unpopular bay or inlet, so much peace there too.


Ch. 3: Mrs. Smith-Cotton Takes Advantage of the Situation

2016-04-05
The ability to enjoy it without the social hang-ups maybe? Because we all know, that she'll be judged whatever she chooses.


WHEN ALL YOU NEED! (thanks to LFB3 - inspierderd by Nils work Simplicity beyond words)

2016-04-03
Indeed...Sunday best though?


Who am I?

2016-04-02
Ooh I like this. This is so relevant to so many. I read it as a relationship issue, possibly a younger, more timid, as yet inexperienced version of you and being led by one who was willing to let you become dependent on their selfish love.

That's my take. Hopefully, you grew back stronger after your trampling.


Better Champagne

2016-04-02
Double negative.....should be "would"


Majorette

2016-04-02
Ah...huum.. Thank you for posting Elliot's mind twisting musing...I'm going to be thought wrangling for hours.


Better Champagne

2016-04-02
Hello Elle. I doubt, even with the gift of hindsight that you wouldn't change a moment. Don't you agree then, that you have to taste everything, the passion, the misery etc, or else o e would not exist without the other, passion would merely become normality...heaven forbid....what or where would we find our kicks!!


Job Well Done

2016-04-01
Do everything twice, you may nit enjoy it the first time! Do a thorough job, just to make absolutely sure!


Holiday Canvas

2016-03-30
Bang on.


Easter I Land

2016-03-27
Sploshing sadly were my feet
In many muddy puddles
Curses! Blisters, podiatry wise.
Pressure popped, needed cuddles!!


Secret Love

2016-03-27
Ah, but she showed mercy...she only bent the rolling pin...