I'd Rather Watch Paint Dry
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2019-02-17 Dr Who died when Tom Baker left, in my humble opinion
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gone
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2019-02-07 Amen to that
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Weather Appropriate
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2019-01-30 Ooh, he's gonna be mad alright. To lose a well trusted, well needed favourite is going to take years for him to forgive. Every time he looks on the workshop wall and sees the space where it used to hang, your name is gonna be cursed.
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Stuck in the Mud
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2019-01-22 What a fun way to write. Its looks easy but I'm guessing the truth is it takes a lot planning
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Poets & Artists
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2019-01-21 There's art in poetry and poetry in art. How lucky the subjects both have a muse. Maybe we could bring philosophy in and day the wind is given purpose by the feathers, or the feathers are made glorious by the wind...
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To Calliope, Chief of the Nine Muses
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2019-01-20 Oh such sweet angst, to suffer is to mourn, and bleak enjoyment within for the poet bereft.
In other words, I loved this. How softly she left you, how harsh the Winter of loss.
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WE MET!
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2018-12-21 Yes it is. Sometimes we just have to stop and admire the small happenings that make for the wonder of it all.
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Southern Comfort
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2018-11-05 I can taste it, the Southern C. I can feel the aftermath. I can appreciate the need, for it all. You lifted this, literally, with a kite on a windy day, tells me all I need to know about this poem , its characters, the resentment, the buried hurt.
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Mist
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2018-09-26 I wonder if, without the light beam, whether indeed the micro climate exists..they are co dependent on each other to give beauty to each. Can a scream be heard in space?
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she knows
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2018-08-01 Amen
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Indelible
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2018-03-05 Wise choice Editorial Team.
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BABA MARTA by Elin Pelin traslated by Ann Wood
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2018-03-02 I absolutely love this. Thankyou so much.
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Blues and Blowing Wind
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2018-01-15 Beautiful. But, rivers flow into the ocean, and ferry your dreams around the world, to live on amongst the mermen and the pearls.
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November
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2017-11-13 I agree with November despondency. And, as per, your ability to share a scatteing of that emotion so freely and delicately through your poem is a rare talent....a craftsman at the lathe.
...aside..
(Between friends)
Its proper good stuff J.
Cheers Lucy
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THE TIMES WE LIVE IN!
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2017-10-08 I agree. What do we leave our children x
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given anything
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2017-09-16 A lark, no question.
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a summer place
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2017-08-19 One should never underestimate the potential of a cloud.
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Swinger
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2017-08-11 Sooo...woke up feeling happy and generally positive then?
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i fell from those swings
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2017-08-11 A hard read, however I enjoyed the style very much. I was drawn in quickly. I particularly liked how you acknowledged the child's observation of the evening prayers. I felt the helplessness in it all and how clever to use the swings as the vehicle to bring out this story.
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When we Feel like Hiding
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2017-08-10 Very true. I think I call it the Emu Syndrome. I apply this thought process every time I put off a fitness session..speaking of which....
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FATHER WITH HIS DAUGHTER MIKA
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2017-08-09 A stepping stone, a path across a river, a bridge between generations.
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Light Tears
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2017-07-15 Nice light touch to the writing too. Very elegent.clipped and yet sumptuous.
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TO ALL MY FREINDS ON POETBAY
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2017-06-22 Cool. Not sure I want some if my nonsense to last forever!
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TO ALL MY FREINDS ON POETBAY
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2017-06-22 Cool. Not sure I want some if my nonsense to last forever!
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Olivia!
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2017-06-22 Olivia is in touch with feeling everything...carpe deuming so to speak. O and the beach demands you go get in and paddle those footsies...even if they are sub zero temperatures. Reconnect and feel the sand between your pinkies.
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Like that
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2017-06-20 Twisting my melon.
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Lake Michigan Sunrise
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2017-06-04 How many jumps did you get on your skimmy stone?
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Fountain Pens
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2017-06-01 Reminded
Gladly
Nina
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Fountain Pens
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2017-06-01 Well. Im resided gladly if how I felt the first time I heard NAna Simone singing the song Wild is the wind....she said......." ....kiss me, I hear the sound of mandolins..."
Whether that makes any sense to you, Im not sure but I'm sure in high respect for Nina....
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MANCHESTER - 22 MAY 2017!
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2017-05-24 Its heart wrenching Ken, watching this u fold, watching peoples loved ones despair, watching children being wiped it. Thankyou for taking time to give their lives value.
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The Catacomb waltz
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2017-05-14 Sweet. Love it. 'Nuff said.
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WHILE SOMEONE WAS A MUMBLING!
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2017-05-06 Sounds like Star Wars Day and Yoda have been influencing here!!
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there's a broken woman
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2017-04-19 You've caught her very well. Please let her in...tell us the next episode.
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WINTERED MINDS!
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2017-04-18 And how cutting those rocks that slice them
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at any given moment
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2017-04-18 Hmm. Oh dearly me...clipped...precise. ...just enough....ta.
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To a friend
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2017-04-18 Very occasionally, Ill read a piece of beauty that is so exquisite it takes my breath away. This was one of those rarities.
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everything is small
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2017-03-05 Mm...mmmmm.
That me. Licking my lips after gorging on fine words.
Very tasty.
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Wreckage
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2017-02-05 Scavengers are only to happy to dig and pick over bones until...well until themes nothing..which brings a kind of freedom. Hurty feelings here.
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A Barbed Life
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2017-02-05 Lovely xx
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Beginning
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2017-01-21 Having just come back in from a very frosty bitter day I long for Spring. Well put here.
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one day we will remember
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2017-01-21 Oh my. This is something a bit special. Personally I think this reflects the mood on Inauguration Day. Bookmarked.
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THE NEW DARK AGES!
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2017-01-21 Me too Ashe.
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With Loneliness
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2017-01-10 Tasty.
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things that fall between chairs
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2016-10-23 And poetry web sites too!! Love this.
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The Poetess
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2016-10-18 Ok you had me at...Such velocities are difficult to match. And by
I will wrestle with these thoughts for now, I think I was starting to crumble and then darn it by repetition you hammeted home
at best, my worst won't do~
I mean...leave me with some dignity!
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little poem
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2016-10-04 Or the road gearing up to absorb the weary falling traveller
Or the traveller spitting road grit at a powerful little pebble
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Lucy shoots daisies
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2016-09-25 The title caught my eye. Shooting from the hip.
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True Lies Weigh
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2016-09-25 Deep breath Kathy. As many as it takes.
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wind road
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2016-09-25 Love love September.Before the October of Halloween and the rush to Chrustmas begins in shops
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Love The Rain
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2016-08-20 Nice how you have encompassed memory into a weathery scene.
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