2018-02-16
Reads like a rainbow arcing across the sky forming, enveloping, and disappearing, making me think of those experiences always taking something with and always leaving something behind too.

2018-01-23
I like the structure of this poem, the lines descend and unwind then curl up again disappearing as mysteriously as they arrive. A pleasure to read.

2016-11-13
An apt and deftly written dedication for a great master.