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State Fair

2017-08-15
This is amazing. An eerie kind of existential nothingness creeps all the way from the beginning to the end, making the reader sigh with the last line.


I Wait

2017-08-10
So much yearning here. I love this.


Cars

2017-08-02
Life's like cars. Cars' like life.


The Clocks Have Gone Silent

2017-08-02
Precise.


READ OR BE PUBLISED?

2017-08-02
It's a fact, isn't it?


Forget Forever The Past

2017-08-02
Words of wisdom ~~


Five

2017-08-02
Five seems like a unique number now. Great poem!


Another Night at the Folies-Bergère

2017-08-02
I like it immensely.


Sex in the Laboratory

2017-07-29
Beautiful.


at the park

2017-07-29
I'm reading a novel called Shantaram by Gregory David Roberts. Reminded me of a chapter where the narrator goes to a village, and later reflects back on his life. Your poem is a beautiful read, nonetheless.


Actually

2017-07-24
I always love your ghazals. So nice to read.


Scenes From The Window Seat

2017-07-24
I love the images. So vivid.


Would You Believe me?

2017-07-23
So lovely.


reunion

2017-07-23
So sad. So poetic.


Pensacola

2017-07-20
Well-written.


Going to the End of the Street

2017-07-20
I like it. "Time catches all things at any pace"--so true.


Misunderstandings

2017-07-01
Misunderstandings


Perhaps, we'll laugh about it someday.

~~

Bibek


night

2017-07-01
I like the stillness that comes with the end of the poem.


Unfading Summer

2017-06-29
Beautiful.


Greatness

2017-06-29
When are you going to publish a book, Larry?


TO ALL MY FREINDS ON POETBAY

2017-06-24
Thanks, Ken. You've been a constant inspiration to all of us.


lost in paradise

2017-06-19
So at peace, so serene.


Killer Poem

2017-06-19
Another wonderful Ghazal.


From a Chair on the Deck

2017-06-19
Yep, very true.


Dinner Stop

2017-06-15
I can relate to this. My family and I used to take such trips too. It was boring as always.


The Single Area

2017-06-15
Something that poets normally do all the time. Well-crafted.


Free Amusement

2017-06-15
Lovely.


Verily

2017-06-13
This is so witty. Loved every couplet of it.


Wandering Around the Louis Salk Institute

2017-06-10
Grotesque.


Potato Eaters

2017-06-10
Beautiful. And sad.


'not me, not yet, not quite.'

2017-06-10
Beautiful descriptions. Loved the ending.


Parting

2017-06-06
To the point.


Patiently Enjoying Memorial Day Weekend

2017-05-30
You paint a picture here! Lovely work.


Still

2017-05-28
Lovely!


only a moment ago

2017-05-28
Revery seems to be a poet's forte.


The Snore

2017-05-23
Nice! I like it.


And We Call It, "Love"

2017-05-22
Yep. Very true!


Horror Show

2017-05-22
Spooky and brilliant.


I'm Here

2017-05-20
Here you are. Welcome back, Thomas. Missed your poems.


An Ordinary Day

2017-05-20
Nice!


I Like Rainbows, Too

2017-05-17
I like it. Your melancholy thoughts.


the sutra of disconnectedness

2017-05-17
WOW!


Sadness

2017-05-17
I feel this poem. :)


outside the restaurant

2017-05-17
Aha!


inside the restaurant

2017-05-17
This poem is a sweetish sugary confection. Loved it. :)


Outside Only A Few Sounds

2017-05-11
This is good. :)


People Can Be Mean

2017-05-09
Love the irony!


Dirty Plates

2017-05-09
Very funny!


Do You Know it?

2017-05-05
So sad yet so good. Loved it.


every bowl has its stone

2017-05-05
Now, I really want to read Han Shan.