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Bibek

23 years old from Nepal


The latest comments that Bibek has written.

to be or not to be?

2017-01-19
True that.


Two at it at night

2017-01-19
I like it.


How Do You Say "Cheers" in Mandarin?

2017-01-19
I know that feeling. Nonetheless, a good poem as always.


Love Letters Never Sent

2017-01-19
A strange turning. Shocked me.


은혜

2017-01-19
I am always in awe of people who are bilingual.


Snow Couplet

2017-01-19
Lovely.


On Ice

2017-01-19
But, what is in it?


January 15

2017-01-16
This we all do. More or less the same way.


Paving the Road to Hell

2017-01-16
Well, well, well. I can feel how painful the trip must have been.


THE TURNING ON OF MINDS!

2017-01-15
Absolutely true.


Faraway Peaks

2017-01-14
Nice. Short and well crafted.


Not to be Seen Again

2017-01-14
Poignant grief that'll endure forever. Nonetheless, an absolutely delightful read. Well done!


I am the difference

2017-01-14
Hmm ... this one was an easy read compared to your other works. Liked the way you linked different images, creating a unity till the end.


One with Earth

2017-01-13
Love the compare and contrast.


Left Undone

2017-01-13
Yeah, so many things are left undone. Including life. Because we lose ourselves to nature, perhaps.


What remains

2017-01-13
So soft. So tender. So poignant.


Inspired

2017-01-13
I like it. I like the animal imageries and how you used them to reinforce your ideas.


Shivering in Omaha

2017-01-11
As usual, the typical sadness lingers throughout the poem. Liked this one too! :)


Inside the Mind's Doorway

2017-01-11
Liked this one. So many diverse images but all of them all well-connected and properly weaved. I see that you have employed many poetic devices here, which I think work very well. :)


A Broken Heart

2017-01-10
Poor Hector. A broken heart is cancer; it keeps eating you from the inside.


Yes

2017-01-10
I like it. An enjoyable read.


Take Me Away

2017-01-08
Nice lyrics.


The Magician And His Assistant

2017-01-08
Love the ending.


A Poem

2017-01-07
Absolutely. That us the kind of poetry I want to read and write.


Larkinesque

2017-01-04
It does resemble with the works of Philip Larkin. Colloquial, reflective, ironically understated, lugubrious than usual, you name it. Well, I love it.

Bibek
:)


modes of speech

2017-01-04
One image after another. This is what I love about your work.


Lizard Lift

2017-01-03
Lovely.


January 1

2017-01-03
Thank you, and Happy New Year to you too, Thomas. :)
Bibek


judy nails

2016-12-27
For the time being, I love poetry and short stories like the way you love rock n roll. Great poem as usual. Loved it.


flustering death I say

2016-12-27
Excellent.


while you may

2016-12-26
Nice one.


A Christmas Prayer

2016-12-24
Life's a nightmare but still we dream. I love it!


Attrition

2016-12-22
Interestingly said. :)


Control

2016-12-22
Something fresh and interesting.


Winter in Seattle

2016-12-21
Wonderful.


Wednesday Night Madness

2016-12-21
Very nice. Reminded me of Billy Collins.


Lifted by Love

2016-12-21
Lovely. Soft and tender.


Diminishment

2016-12-17
Nice.


bringing it home

2016-12-17
A nice end, reverberating with both hope and despair. You really are a poetic storyteller. :)


A Fired Up Love

2016-12-17
Nicely done!


Mr. Good Cheer

2016-12-17
So grotesque. And, ah, the irony!


Dylan, Edgar, Dorothy, and me?

2016-12-17
So true. There isn't any difference. We all feel life too deeply and write about it, raw and free.


Old Woman

2016-12-17
I love it. It is universal yet particular at the same time. The way you evoke emotions with images is really praiseworthy.


Coda

2016-12-14
So sad yet so beautiful. Nicely done!


this is the hour

2016-12-13
So many vivid images. Nice!


Spies

2016-12-11
Lovely.


Where Is

2016-12-11
Nice.


A Letter Home

2016-12-11
This is sad. But evocative. :)


poetic gods

2016-12-11
I love Bukowski. I have read all of his works. And, with your poem, imitating the style of Bukowski, you have done justice to the bohemian poetic god. Kudos!

Bibek
:)


Simple

2016-12-11
I like it. :)