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Sadness, Happiness and Anger

2017-04-26
I like the comparisons.


You asked!

2017-04-26
Absolutely true!


Sprawl

2017-04-26
Even more lugubrious than the usual, but I like it that way. :)


Kalaloch

2017-04-26
Is it the Kalaloch Lodge from where you wrote this poem? And " the shallow flash of workshop/Shit, the streams of consciousness/Which lead, like little Jordans, into/Empty seas" made me smile. :)


tea

2017-04-26
This is so soft, so sensitive, so insightful at the same time. I absolutely love it. :)


Language

2017-04-26
Hmm. Interesting work. :)


Such a Stupid Species

2017-04-20
Haha! You said it right! ;)


Enlightenment

2017-04-20
Brilliant!


You May Want to Stop Back Later

2017-04-20
At times I feel the same, Larry.


Craft

2017-04-14
Reminded me of Donald Hall when you said "sound matters the most". Anyway, thank you for writing this poem. I need to follow the advice. :)


Review

2017-04-12
Beautiful poem. :)


Homecoming

2017-04-12
Loved this one! :)


Tiny Human

2017-04-12
You're a granddad now. Well, congrats! Expecting some happy lines in the next poem.


on the isle of corfu

2017-04-11
Must be a lovely place to sit and watch the world go on its own. This reminds me of mindfulness and meditative calmness.


Eden, One Night Only

2017-04-09
Brilliant! Loved it.


Pathetic

2017-04-09
A phallic symbol? Ah!


Crank

2017-04-04
Isn't “Crank” a slang for a low purity, crystallized Methamphetamine that is administered in a powder form? I am trying to figure out the metaphor that's used in here. My thinking is muddled. Nonetheless, a fine poem. "I'll fly to home to produce something that nobody will see" makes me sad, though.


Revolution

2017-04-04
A sad truth. Well-writ, as usual.


Idolatry

2017-04-02
Into idol worshipping?


People

2017-04-02
Great irony.


Cry For a Memory

2017-03-30
Witty little poem. :)


I look into the world.

2017-03-30
Lovely poem. :)


My heart in poetry.

2017-03-30
Very true. :)


Denial

2017-03-15
So true.


Room For Memories

2017-03-09
I like it!


Zoned In

2017-03-09
Nice!


East of Damascus

2017-03-09
You write about death so well. :)


everything is small

2017-03-07
I love this! Thank you for writing this poem.


Lunch?

2017-02-19
How sad.


Sad Melting Man

2017-02-19
Nice.


Frost

2017-02-11
Interesting.


The Sun is Up

2017-02-09
Bright and dark at the same time. And playful with the rhymes. Good work.


Thinkers

2017-02-01
Lovely.


On Second Thought

2017-01-28
Lovely.


I Went Looking For You

2017-01-28
Touche.


alone with my thoughts

2017-01-28
So much yearning. So much wishing. And, yes, one life time is not enough--so true.


Arms Raised in Hope

2017-01-22
Hope is a wonderful thing.


The One

2017-01-21
Soft and poignant.


Two at it at night

2017-01-19
I like it.


Love Letters Never Sent

2017-01-19
A strange turning. Shocked me.


On Ice

2017-01-19
But, what is in it?


THE TURNING ON OF MINDS!

2017-01-15
Absolutely true.


Faraway Peaks

2017-01-14
Nice. Short and well crafted.


I am the difference

2017-01-14
Hmm ... this one was an easy read compared to your other works. Liked the way you linked different images, creating a unity till the end.


One with Earth

2017-01-13
Love the compare and contrast.


Left Undone

2017-01-13
Yeah, so many things are left undone. Including life. Because we lose ourselves to nature, perhaps.


What remains

2017-01-13
So soft. So tender. So poignant.


Inspired

2017-01-13
I like it. I like the animal imageries and how you used them to reinforce your ideas.


Inside the Mind's Doorway

2017-01-11
Liked this one. So many diverse images but all of them all well-connected and properly weaved. I see that you have employed many poetic devices here, which I think work very well. :)


Yes

2017-01-10
I like it. An enjoyable read.