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Lunch?

2017-02-19
How sad.


Sad Melting Man

2017-02-19
Nice.


Frost

2017-02-11
Interesting.


The Regrettable Existence of an Iron Filing

2017-02-11
Excellent poem, Larry. Loved the allusion of iron filling.


Ariel

2017-02-11
Lovely.


The Sun is Up

2017-02-09
Bright and dark at the same time. And playful with the rhymes. Good work.


alt-left or the phoenix

2017-02-08
I agree with Ashe. Nonetheless, brilliant poem.


Salvage Operation

2017-02-08
Lovely.


How the Clintons and the Bushes and Millions of Supid People Begat Trump

2017-02-08
Exactly.


Phone Call to Aleppo

2017-02-07
Poignant.


Air

2017-02-04
Nice. "The curio" image.


Look Up

2017-02-04
This is funny.


Thinkers

2017-02-01
Lovely.


The Deep Thinkers

2017-02-01
A bitter satire. The detachment between the poetic world and the normal world towards the end of the poem humorously criticizes the 'deep thinkers'.


La La Land

2017-01-28
This poem killed me.


On Second Thought

2017-01-28
Lovely.


Memory

2017-01-28
Nice.


I Went Looking For You

2017-01-28
Touche.


alone with my thoughts

2017-01-28
So much yearning. So much wishing. And, yes, one life time is not enough--so true.


Arms Raised in Hope

2017-01-22
Hope is a wonderful thing.


The One

2017-01-21
Soft and poignant.


Two at it at night

2017-01-19
I like it.


How Do You Say "Cheers" in Mandarin?

2017-01-19
I know that feeling. Nonetheless, a good poem as always.


Love Letters Never Sent

2017-01-19
A strange turning. Shocked me.


Snow Couplet

2017-01-19
Lovely.


On Ice

2017-01-19
But, what is in it?


Poetry's Chapel

2017-01-16
This we all do. More or less the same way.


Paving the Road to Hell

2017-01-16
Well, well, well. I can feel how painful the trip must have been.


THE TURNING ON OF MINDS!

2017-01-15
Absolutely true.


Faraway Peaks

2017-01-14
Nice. Short and well crafted.


Not to be Seen Again

2017-01-14
Poignant grief that'll endure forever. Nonetheless, an absolutely delightful read. Well done!


I am the difference

2017-01-14
Hmm ... this one was an easy read compared to your other works. Liked the way you linked different images, creating a unity till the end.


One with Earth

2017-01-13
Love the compare and contrast.


Left Undone

2017-01-13
Yeah, so many things are left undone. Including life. Because we lose ourselves to nature, perhaps.


What remains

2017-01-13
So soft. So tender. So poignant.


Inspired

2017-01-13
I like it. I like the animal imageries and how you used them to reinforce your ideas.


Shivering in Omaha

2017-01-11
As usual, the typical sadness lingers throughout the poem. Liked this one too! :)


Inside the Mind's Doorway

2017-01-11
Liked this one. So many diverse images but all of them all well-connected and properly weaved. I see that you have employed many poetic devices here, which I think work very well. :)


A Broken Heart

2017-01-10
Poor Hector. A broken heart is cancer; it keeps eating you from the inside.


Yes

2017-01-10
I like it. An enjoyable read.


Take Me Away

2017-01-08
Nice lyrics.


The Magician And His Assistant

2017-01-08
Love the ending.


A Poem

2017-01-07
Absolutely. That us the kind of poetry I want to read and write.


Larkinesque

2017-01-04
It does resemble with the works of Philip Larkin. Colloquial, reflective, ironically understated, lugubrious than usual, you name it. Well, I love it.

Bibek
:)


modes of speech

2017-01-04
One image after another. This is what I love about your work.


Lizard Lift

2017-01-03
Lovely.


January 1

2017-01-03
Thank you, and Happy New Year to you too, Thomas. :)
Bibek


judy nails

2016-12-27
For the time being, I love poetry and short stories like the way you love rock n roll. Great poem as usual. Loved it.


flustering death I say

2016-12-27
Excellent.


while you may

2016-12-26
Nice one.