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Manhattan, New York

2017-06-23
that's sad, i don't like to be sad
peina...


The Night the Ship Sank

2017-06-11
very good indeed


Post Traumatic Stress Revisited

2017-06-07
somehow, i can relate to this


I Never Saw it Coming

2017-06-06
i don't know what to say, i must be ignorant of that truth and that's maybe good for not being hurt


Lake Michigan Sunrise

2017-06-05
i understood every words but i can't relate


God is a Printed Circuit

2017-06-02
yeah, i won't make plans about life after death


God is a Printed Circuit

2017-06-02
so far so good.


A Common Man

2017-06-01
very good lawrence, i can recognize myself in that for the most part


Post-Traumatic Stress

2017-05-26
very good, it helps a lot, you have tickled something


Welcome Back

2017-05-21
you world seem fantastic:you only need to speak to be listened to , in real life, it happens that people don't want to be talked to


I am enough.

2017-05-19
very good


Fictional

2017-05-18
that helps the woman who hears it!


I Like Rainbows, Too

2017-05-16
the idea of memories being 2D is very good and...very true, it's like turning back time in a cinema. a happy sedate person is someone who can remember those time anyway


Somewhere Else

2017-05-14
a apocalyptic view but that may happen, a few with the help of a computer running the majority


The Passage of Time

2017-05-14
the summarize of existence... very good


Numb

2017-05-08
very sad piece, but i understand it very well.


The Woman with the Dog

2017-05-07
very good for me, i say for me because i am not the capable authority to say that's good or not

the best part for me:When I see her, I stop
And stare. I'm safe. She never turns her
Head.


Caravaggio Would Know

2017-05-03
vague lies is a lie in a lie, a lie in disguise!


Gary Cooper

2017-05-03
for me, it's a beautiful love story, maybe one-way but isn't it often so?
basically, a bad health interferes a lot in love


Time.

2017-05-02
i have to disagree, time is mobility: the electrons move, there isn't anything that doesn't move in this universe, but it moves not
randomly. so time shows that everything cannot happen imo
cheers


Think back in time.

2017-04-30
you made me think


The Difference Between the Republicans and the Communists? None

2017-04-30
i think you are a funny-ist
i have great respect for the doctors who study 15 years in a communist country


Denial

2017-04-30
very ethe-real


Sometimes, the Magic isn't Strong Enough

2017-04-28
the first lines made me laugh out loud, the old shaman creeping in bed is so pictural, it seems she has a lot to fear from an old shaman!


Sprawl

2017-04-23
i can live the feeling which was very well returned. it's a terrible feeling, it's scary while a rational decision can be built up only on such impressions


Such a Stupid Species

2017-04-20
thanks a lot Lawrence, if it's for me that you wrote this poem, i don't know any other albert here.
we as human should cherish the time we spent together on earth, later in the future, others will share space and time together
thanks


Was I made for peace?

2017-04-18
was i made for peace?
4 sure, i think it's part of how we are


Good

2017-04-17
is it the end of desires?


So It's World War III

2017-04-15
all is getting global,
all is getting viral


As I fell asleep and prayed.

2017-04-12
that's good, sometimes i feel the same


Energie Field.

2017-04-09
great poem! did you get this marvelous lines by experiences?


In between

2017-04-09
i will come back soon on your poem and take a big breath
but for the moment, i am deep into my thoughts
namaste

albert


Until the end of time.

2017-04-05
it's the song of someone that has been loved
thank you


Niets is voor niets.

2017-04-04
thank you namaste


Do not compare.

2017-04-03
it's good to be oneself and not somebody else except if you don't know that's you


Beyond ego, Are you there?

2017-04-02
the unravelled secrets of love


A heart/mind thought.

2017-03-31
believe hope and faith are about the future i guess


Thoughts

2017-03-29
i am not sure, your thought might be somewhere far from your brain but hearing, seeing, smelling, touching are linked to your body


A Reasonable Woman

2017-03-12
good and surprised


f a u t e - d e - M I E U X

2017-02-25
when you think that onanisme is a kind of homosexual love


Afraid of getting old ...

2017-02-19
you always learn something by getting older


Why?

2017-02-07
gentle poem, far from everyday's turmoil if i can say


Ramblings 388

2017-02-02
je devrais toujours te demander ton sujet, j'ai du mal à saisir le sens de ton texte parce que je ne maîtrise pas assez l'anglais
bisous


Status Quelled

2017-02-01
that's the reason of empty days


Alternative Information

2017-01-22
sorry is not an excuse to say lies


Alternative Information

2017-01-22
have you read my poem about robots my friends?
i don't think that having his own interest is an excuse to defend his points of view

good one that made me think


Underwater

2017-01-22
good one, i have enjoyed it


Love Letters Never Sent

2017-01-19
i think she will die of a violent death!


Yes

2017-01-18
a very intellectual poem, i like it


Universe

2017-01-12
it could be a metaphor for the cellular phone as well