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Love Letters Never Sent

2017-01-19
i think she will die of a violent death!


Yes

2017-01-18
a very intellectual poem, i like it


Recliner

2017-01-18
not to forget: a potent cocktail of pills


Universe

2017-01-12
it could be a metaphor for the cellular phone as well


Here May Never be Home

2017-01-11
i am glad you are back on the right tracks, stop having those loving affairs with women...they are stuffing your head like a turkey


Shivering in Omaha

2017-01-11
do you think she asks herself so many questions?


Eye Strain

2017-01-10
you are the man of thousands women


A Broken Heart

2017-01-10
this guy needs a good lawyer!


How to Ensure the Survival of the Human Race

2017-01-06
i've read this carefully and i felt deep emotions...thanks for sharing and i cross my fingers

good luck, you are still very young


Anecdote of a lantern

2017-01-05
intriguing piece of writing, intriguing but interesting


Consider The Zebra

2017-01-05
why is it a complex? i know the word in French, complexe: sometimes when you feel ashamed of something you shouldn't by instance, the complexion of your skin or the color of your hair.

a very good poem that made me think


Larkinesque

2017-01-04
some have said that i had something from larkin.
did he like jazz? jazz is a complex music...it doesn't lull you with an easy beat...


modes of speech

2017-01-04
i think you are intending something difficult here, it's not the first time..somehow, in the instant.


HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR!

2017-01-01
happy new year to you


Ghost Stories

2017-01-01
about silent night
it's painful, a silence in place of a language
pain that says no words


A Morning in Concepcion

2016-12-28
who has said that grandparents and children are impotent?


Drawbridges Are All That

2016-12-28
thanks a lot for this poem, you got me thinking. bookmarked.


Raccoon

2016-12-28
i can't figure out it was you


Yule

2016-12-26
sorry could have said


Yule

2016-12-26
yule made me think of yale. maybe the old man could have seen, "if you don't know your history, it happens to come again"


Grinch

2016-12-25
i have known people who prefer to pass xmas alone in a kind of catharsis


A Christmas Carol

2016-12-24
merry xmas to you Thomas


A Mystery

2016-12-22
how many mysteries are worth looking at them since we know nothing about it....


Control

2016-12-21
it's a metaphor of life from different perspectives. it is also how we grew up, from the back seat to the driver's wheel indeed.


Full Circle

2016-12-21
indeed wars can't be glorious, how many die shot in the back?

that's why the soldiers are young and in good shape, the war are triggered by the old, done by the young and lost by the crippled if i can add


Twilight

2016-12-21
when you heart begins to speak, you tongue goes on with pumping


qu'elle vienne

2016-12-21
nice flow of words
beau poème qui sonne français


Lifted by Love

2016-12-21
an ocean of feelings


Old Woman

2016-12-17
good one, i like the last stanza


Rain

2016-12-10
good one


Versailles, Indiana

2016-12-10
very good!


Arf

2016-12-09
well if you were a dog with pawns instead of hands, wouldn't you think that the game is over before it has even started?


Goodbye you guys.

2016-12-09
even if i am not suffering any addictions, i must say things have been written in stones for me too although i don't know what it really means, sorry to be enigmatic but my life is enigmatic to me too. i wish you good luck.


In Acapulco

2016-12-08
sorry for the mistakes
happened, written etc...


In Acapulco

2016-12-08
well, i don't know. i meant the subject is a risk , it must be very beautiful to tip the morality otherwise it's no use trying but that's reality..just think if they had sex without knowing their relation. it has happen in a novel wrote by guy de maupassant.


December

2016-12-07
everything doesn't die, it's like they are smoothing
good poem, thanks


Notice Six Things

2016-12-07
i like the sixth. indeed who knows maybe the smell is stronger than the taste


Fallacious

2016-12-07
actually your opinion against logic betrays your thinking.
if it is difficult to put logic in the world, why is it so simple to prove there isn't logic at all?


Encomium

2016-12-04
good one


THOSE NOT TO BE FORGOT

2016-11-30
good one


Red Shift

2016-11-30
each second spent is withdrawing i guess


The Fact of the Matter

2016-11-30
indeed and i am not worried about leaving something behind.


Ramblings 371

2016-11-29
ce qui intéressant avec tes écrits c'est qu'en général, on ne sait pas de qui ou de quoi tu parles, tu es très énigmatique à ce sujet...


Larson the Liberator

2016-11-24
it is like larson has a failed life with still signs of success, i think this is a metaphor of a material life told in the western countries


Standing Outside of Thebes

2016-11-23
enigmatic poem, i am left with questions, silence is a place for questions don't you believe?


Economy

2016-11-23
thanks for having written a poem titled "economy"
to the question, do we need more money that we can spend? the thing is that money brings power, no only goods.

about happiness, i don't know if men are made to be happy, maybe happiness belongs to their dog


chilled

2016-11-19
your first meditation made me think: is cold the absence of heat. i see here the opposition of two languages, the language of sciences told by the deformation of our words, we oppose cold and heat in english while in fact in physics, they aren't one another in opposition.


Black Night

2016-11-18
thoughts make noise i guess


angel

2016-11-18
beautiful little poem
thanks for sharing


Mom

2016-11-17
there is between a loving mum and a child, something like a divine relationship on the level of irrational traits. a very fine poem.