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Dah

74 years old from USA


The latest comments that Dah has written.

INSIDE MY HEAD!

2017-05-10
Bravo Poet! 末))


Sadder Than Anything

2017-05-06
Yes, a dark stormy day creates sad,
very sad imagery within itself.

Thank you, One Trick Pony 末))


Sadder Than Anything

2017-05-05
I'm honored, Ashe, thank you!

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And thank you Ken!


NOTE TO A SIBLING!

2017-05-04
Spot on wisdom from The Dyslexic Wordsmith:

"I'm sure you will have better things to do
than waste half an hour, as my remains, my cadaver, is disposed of!"

Bravo Poet! 末))


GFU #4

2017-05-04
A powerful love-lament.

Bravo Poet! 末))


every bowl has its stone

2017-05-04
Love the way in which this is expressed.

Bravo Poet! 末))


Language

2017-04-27
Yes, I agree.

Thank you, Ashe! 末))


Language

2017-04-26
Thank you Bibek and Ken 末))


HE WAS BORN TO BE OLD

2017-04-26
"He was born to age before his time
born to listen, and that aged him"

末 a unique opening.

Bravo Poet! 末))


F R A U D ..?

2017-04-25
I'm trying to

remember

the reasons

yet

I'm feeling betrayed

because memory

is genius

a timeless witness

that collapses the facts


a lie

2017-04-25
Our hearts are a mere moment
of love.

Sometimes it's better to lie,
sometimes it's important to suffer,
other times a restless heart
will take what it can.


t h e - I N V I S I B L E - a l p h a b e t

2017-04-25
What lies


"between the lines...."

are

so many interpretations

lifting from imagination


what is - NOTHING?

2017-04-25
Nothing is what we put
our entire lives into.

Unfortunately, or fortunately,
nothing matters.


LIFE ON A BICYCLE! (WITH MUCH THANKS TO A DAH SUGGETGEAN)

2017-04-24
Yes, life as a bike
tight spokes, loose spokes,
broken spokes and all.

Bravo Poet! 末))

P.S. In the first line, maybe "be"
wants to be after "can", or maybe not.


Poetry

2017-04-24
A lovely and surreal take
on the art of poetry.

Bravo Poet! 末))


Reflection

2017-04-23
The easiness in flow and rhythm
makes this piece near-music, such a
lyrical verse.

I love the abstract configurations added
to this poem, like: "Suitably Colour my thoughts".

The promise to reflect somebody
is a rich journey.

Bravo Poet! 末))


Every Crushing Step

2017-04-23
Lovely imagery throughout
tied perfectly together with a
solid ending.

Bravo Poet!


northern light

2017-04-22
I love the easy feeling of nature
and desire in this piece; the surreal
imagery is like a quiet drawing
that gathers my imagination

Bravo Poet!