Sameen

2018-07-30
COOOL

2018-06-22
The poets of old aye

2018-06-22
Humbert Humbert?

2018-06-22
Where's the fun in that though, eh?

2018-06-19
You've mixed bukowski with neruda. A combination that strangely works. Though much of the middle meddles the last nine lines uplift the poem to the highest heights. Well done.

2018-06-19
This is really good! The stress stretche on a bit in line two and three but I'm only nit picking.
Thank you for using Ratnapark in a poem.

Wonderful poem. I didn't notice the rhymes at first. That's what makes a great sonnet. It works seamlessly and doesn't seem forced. You've grown. I tremble before you.

2018-01-12
Amazing. You're getting better and better everyday.

2018-01-12
You are quite a craftsman too Thomas.

2018-01-12
Nice jottings.

2018-01-12
That ending is killer!

2018-01-12
Welcome

2017-12-21
Me too. Wonderful poem.

2017-12-21
Truuuuuuuuuuuuu

2017-12-21
Welcome back and what the heck

2017-12-11
Oh such sweet glimpses they paint an intriguing picture my god.
Especially adolescent poets drinking mountain dew?!?!?!?!?!

2017-12-11
I really like this poem. Never thought there could be a compelling poem about book spines haha. Love it

2017-12-10
I love it. I have sent the edited version on facebook. Do what thou wilt

2017-11-30
That last stanza are my fave

2017-11-29
Yeah, I guess in the festivities of christmas it is easy to forget that not everyone has a reason nor a chance to be festive

2017-11-29
Oh how delightful

2017-11-29
You're going ham on these noice.

2017-11-28
That last line ahhh

2017-11-28
Noice. Love this portrait poem

2017-11-27
SESTINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I love this poem!!!

2017-11-27
SESTINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

My favorite form.

2017-11-27
"She" sounds like someone I'd love to meet.

2017-11-27
Noice. All the drug metaphors are woven wonderfully.

2017-11-26
Funny

2017-11-22
I like the poem but

"Merciless starlight mocks me with its mock." I'm kinda iffy on this line. But there's not much you can do with the -ock rhyme

2017-11-22
Damn

2017-11-21
All those decades. I love that ending

2017-11-21
Did you die?

2017-11-21
A pleasant scene indeed

2017-11-21
Lame

2017-11-21
Nice one Ken

2017-11-21
Nice one.

2017-11-20
Damn, best poem i've read in a while

2017-11-20
I loved the ending

2017-11-20
I admire your faith and this poem.

2017-11-20
Nice one

2017-11-20
Me too man. Me too.

2017-11-16
God dammit why are you so talented!!!! Ughhhhhh I'm jealous!!!

2017-11-16
This is freaking hillarious

2017-11-16
I really liked the line. His eyes were opem and he was all alone. The open eyes but really brought a sense of reality to the poem. Honestly though, I don't wonder about dead squirrels but this poem got me.

2017-11-16
I fucking love it.

I think the first half is unnecessary tho. The second half can stand on its own alone.

It's beautiful man. If only you'd tighten up your words though. They are still a little loose.

2017-11-10
More! I want more!!!!!

2017-11-10
At times the echoes of other steps are heard
sometimes I walk alone

Wow

2017-11-10
Damn

2017-11-08
Hell yeah. Not pedestrian at all. Its simple and joyous.

2017-11-08
I love it. Glad you've found true love and glad it inspired such simple sweet poetry bereft of pretensions. I love it.