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My Mother and Me

2017-11-20
Damn, best poem i've read in a while


Half of the Morning Sun

2017-11-20
I loved the ending


Faith Through Grace

2017-11-20
I admire your faith and this poem.


2010

2017-11-20
Nice one


1989

2017-11-20
Me too man. Me too.


Autumn Leaves

2017-11-16
God dammit why are you so talented!!!! Ughhhhhh I'm jealous!!!


Neither Here nor There

2017-11-16
I love your poems man. I haven't read a bad one


One To Watch

2017-11-16
Oh it's about silver tongued people? I was thinking of people who used their tongues in other ways


The old man in the jewelery shop by Ann Wood

2017-11-16
This is freaking hillarious


dead squirrel

2017-11-16
I really liked the line. His eyes were opem and he was all alone. The open eyes but really brought a sense of reality to the poem. Honestly though, I don't wonder about dead squirrels but this poem got me.


Flying

2017-11-16
I fucking love it.

I think the first half is unnecessary tho. The second half can stand on its own alone.

It's beautiful man. If only you'd tighten up your words though. They are still a little loose.


Sketches from College Days

2017-11-10
More! I want more!!!!!


Shaky Paths

2017-11-10
Haha I love it


New Beginnings

2017-11-10
At times the echoes of other steps are heard
sometimes I walk alone

Wow


Bernadette

2017-11-10
Damn


Kiss

2017-11-08
Kisses that are gestures are the worst.


Villanelle at 3 a.m. (Challenge)

2017-11-08
Hell yeah. Not pedestrian at all. Its simple and joyous.


Who's He Kidding?

2017-11-08
Liars and cheat lie about everything indeed.


The Birth of a Leader In Death

2017-11-08
Leaders lead but what if we don't want to follow?


Evaluating My Heart

2017-11-08
I love it. Glad you've found true love and glad it inspired such simple sweet poetry bereft of pretensions. I love it.


The Wordsmith

2017-11-08
Bang away wordsmith bang away


Old Escherís Staircase

2017-11-07
I can imagine them bickering while space laughs in the background


Stupid Men

2017-11-07
Wilfred Owen would be proud


The Poet

2017-11-07
Been there done that haha you've painted a fine picture but i wish the paint was thicker


Grass Snake

2017-11-03
I love it! The metaphor is great and sticks through the entire poem. But I especially love the first stanza. Great work!


October

2017-10-28
How did you become so good?


Go Lightly, Shoppers

2017-10-28
Surely one of these consumers
of electronic stuff
has stood on the streets of New York,
wet and in love.

that is a beautifully haunting stanza


Reading Devkota in a Cowshed

2017-10-22
Holy shit.

You've done it. You're a poet.

I... I can't believe it.

Congratulations.


"Watching the battle of forgotten words,
I canít remember the reason
Why I forsook the language
I loved the most."

I want that carved on my chest


All In The Waiting

2017-10-22
This poem is still so darling. The opening lines are amazing. But seriously "Innocence"


a modern woman

2017-10-09
This is one of the handful of poems published on this site that has made me feel glad to be here


The Ancient Flame

2017-10-09
Ay oh noice


Done

2017-10-09
Sweet


Where Life Is

2017-10-09
I love this poem.


Stormy weather

2017-10-09
Reminds me of when i was a kid and I used to hide away in my attic and watch the rain from the window there.


A Perfect Poem

2017-10-09
You've gotten better


Notebook: September 21

2017-09-23
Love the way its written. damn


ON BEING A EXCEPTED WRITER!

2017-09-22
Happy writer I'm your happy reader


A few things you left behind you'll never miss

2017-09-22
Yo how you sneaked in that me in the middle there is amazing writing niceee


Varanasi

2017-09-22
That last couplet was amazing


Sidetracked

2017-09-22
Niceeeeee


At Basantapur

2017-09-22
Wonderful. Bravo.

Honestly, I love the ending but I love the path you took to get there more. I love it.


All In The Waiting

2017-09-22
This is good. I especially liked the interpolation of that one line from Frost's Stopping by the woods on a snowy evening. The line-
Beauty is
the only mercy to all this horror waiting to happen

is amazing. Especially the usage of enjambment in there.

The only complaint I have is that you're using innocent when i think it should be innocence.

Overall, a great read and an awesome poem.


Ritual: Ordinary Time

2017-09-19
so I pop into The Book Rack
for my soul's health's sake.

Yoooooooooooo


Baggage

2017-09-19
Yeah, love sucks.


Mancunian Rhapsody

2017-09-19
There are thirty-three Manchesters in the USA? Wtf That's funny and so's this poem.


Lipstick on a Barracuda

2017-09-19
Fuck White People is a thought I have had many times since I came to the U.S. but I always remind myself that there are good ones out there.


A Young Woman of Boston

2017-09-05
Beautiful poem with a great ending I love it.


Sickness and Health

2017-09-05
This is beautiful. Hauntingly beautiful. A cliche phrase but this poem warrants that


In The City of Juarez

2017-09-05
This is beautiful like a symphony how the poem flows in couplets until that marvelous crescendo beginning with so. I could write a thesis about this poem. i love it.