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John holliday

62 years old from UK


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Taking Time

2018-02-18
I like your poem and Ashes explanation......if only I could understand Quantum physics time and space and all that maybe one day maybe not maybe Ill just lo0k in the box to see what is what may be it is and maybe its not....


SILANCE AND BLINDESS! (With Thanks to Thomas DeFreitas Work 'SILANCE')

2018-02-18
A really fine piece of writing Ken


Music Therapy

2018-02-18
first title to catch my eye...nothing makes me feel as good as music your words convey shared experience
We are only human after all don't put the blame on us or me or you...just let the beat and rhythm set us free...


For My Astronomer

2018-02-18
Perfectly aligned words and thought....


INSPIREING OTHERS!

2018-02-18
Truth Ken...


WHY DO I SIT HEAR TYPING?

2018-02-18
And we who read are happy that you write


Milky Way

2018-02-16
An elegant description of the dark skies.....makes me wish I could see them..


Coffee Hits

2018-02-15
Excellent......humour and great writing a good combo, now I need another coffee becoz I am still a Zombo.....ps Im a master of ryhme.....if I cant find one in time I just make it up


Making a Friend

2018-02-15
Just the thing to read this morning.....made me smile


Something Else

2018-02-15
Beautifully written.....it definitely resonates with me....


Any Higher, And...

2018-02-15
The last verse...perfect made me smile.....😉


The Swing

2018-02-15
Enjoyed reading thisone....loved the rythmn Miles Davis and a Girl swinging in the past....a lazy trumpet solo echoing in my mind


Two Valentine Poems

2018-02-15
I like both......they compliment each other


AS THE POET WALKS!

2018-02-12
A lot like you and I Ken.....once a reader now a writer as well, thanks to your encouragement


A Love Poem For The New World

2018-02-12
Written word with important message, eloquent and heartfelt....


Suspended Animation

2018-02-12
Reading your words gives a real sense of being at one......


A body more comfortable in the dark is a star

2018-02-12
Really enjoyed reading this.....it flows and reflects both at the same time....l


THE MAJORITY ARE NOW PAYING! (Addishans And Changes)

2018-02-12
Six lines of truth Ken.....reads really well.....!!!


Why?

2018-02-11
Makes me feel a sadness ........trust is a hard thing to give if trust has been broken in the past


Missing The Sea

2018-02-11
Evokes a sense of losing something losing something or someone....who has always been but now is not....I miss the sea but also miss a lot of other things, people and friends, your words capture the feeling of not being ....there.....


Scenery

2018-02-09
Concise and to the point....Im trying to get into Haiku, I think Im trying to hard...


IN THE YEAR XXXX! (Completed)

2018-02-09
Strikes a chord Ken....fear is the key, nicely put....paranoia strikes deep, I sometimes feel as though we are being monitored....mention something and your inundated with ads....

Ps signing in was a doddle....😉


The Night

2017-12-31
Beautifully written...conjured up the images in my mind....


RAW POETS ROAR! (addishans)

2017-12-29
Really hits the Mark Ken.....you have unleashed your voice and have now given me space to unleash mine


Peace at last

2017-12-29
Wow powerful words.....everyone hit the target.....


Starry Kingdom

2017-12-29
Well writen leads you through the scene and yo dont know exacly what it means, so you have to read again unill the meaning does descend......Im geting worried have been a member for only three days but my comments seem to be written as poetry...Starnge days.....Ps I cant keep typing on this ipad I cant change what Is written...need my Keyboard lol


POETS AND POETRY!

2017-12-29
Loved this Ken....it explains the way I write songs, I dont write them I just sing them as I play, my reasoning is that they can never be wrong because they only came into existence when I sang them...so even mistakes are are correct because there are no mistakes....ps will have to get my blue tooth keyboard set up on his ipad its a nightmare typing. ..thanks for he link Ken, I will work my way through your work.....I believe in Synchronicity so when the time is right....the time is right..


Today

2017-12-29
Thank you Thomas and Ken, just exploring, finding my feet, they were there not so long ago dont know where they have gone maybe theyll come back if i write a song.....ps fav poets Spike Milligan, Ivor Cutler Captain Beefheart and Dylan...also haveaLove of Da Da and Surrealism...so might well be exploring some strange places....