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John holliday

62 years old from UK


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The Future's End

2018-07-13
Well written ...ps your not walking this road alone there are more than a few of us coming with you....plus we plan on turning the corner and coming back to good times


THE PAST! (Addishans!)

2018-07-03
Well said Ken......


Sonnet: "In Defiance of Melancholy"

2018-06-21
Having been through the datk, I love the fact that hope triumphs in the end, beautifully written.....words flow like honey


Making light of shadows

2018-06-20
Love the imagery you create


Your face

2018-06-05
beautiful and powerfful....hits totally at the heart love it...


BOTH DESCTOP PC AND LAPTOP STUFFDE UP! (BETTER NOW!)

2018-06-05
ha ha Ken best thing I have read for a long time...you totally summed up up computers, they are great and do anything ......until you need them and then they take over and do what they want lol, brilliant read Ken really loved it the computer I usually use for Poet Bay has given up hence my abscence....now I know this one works Ill make up for lost time....this a perfect poem to illustrate the problems modernpoets face, lol


Rain in Dublin

2018-04-21
Beautifully written the words flow just like the rivers of Old Ireland........


WINTER WERE EXSTENDID!

2018-04-21
Short and sweet Ken...the weather such an important subject for us Brits...good to read you words the Straight onto Summer suits me down to the ground


Being Human

2018-04-12
I loved it ...a perfect way to describe our place in the Universe......


BY ME BEING UP FRONT!

2018-04-09
well said Ken and extremely well written


Ecclesiastical Quatrain

2018-04-05
A smile a day keeps the blues away, this certainly provided me with my anti blues meds ...


Indelible

2018-03-29
Well written and thoughtful...time is indeed a mystery......


Lifescape

2018-03-23
paints an evocative picture.......words conveying imagery


Solid Soul Love.

2018-03-23
gave me a good feeling reading your words........heartfelt.....


Bits of Life

2018-03-23
love the way you've used the words to describe what you feel......


Screaming Under Water

2018-03-21
Really descriptive...harrowing.....


OH WHAT A VERY DIFARANT DAY!

2018-03-09
yes Spring has Sprung...still a few heaps of snow up here but the sun is shining....feels good only so many more days to Xmas...lol


I think of you

2018-03-09
beautiful words tinged with sadness....a lot of people can relate to this even though it is really personal....


Broken

2018-03-08
strong words.....


Only the Stars

2018-03-08
strong message elegantly wriiten


the man in the moon (haiku challenge)

2018-03-05
Beautiful...Ive tried Haiku and cant get the hang of it ...yet...found your work via your Art Work which I really like


His Laboratory

2018-03-01
brilliant...having been behind the curtain I can relate, and it is or was a place of magic......


IT WERE JUST LIKE DISNEY! (A Retuern To A Snapshot Work)((Adishan))

2018-02-28
Just what I needed to read today Ken surround by Snow.....to dream of Sunlit sky and golden meadows sublime


PROPHETS WHO SPOUT WORDS! (Completed - With Addishans)

2018-02-23
Ken on the News today Kim Kardashian....Tweeted about Snap Chat what she said knocked a billion dollars off the shares of the company.....the power of words in evidence so your correct people in power should think before speaking......although the art of thinking may well be strange to them.....


SILANCE AND BLINDESS! (With Thanks to Thomas DeFreitas Work 'SILANCE')

2018-02-18
A really fine piece of writing Ken


Music Therapy

2018-02-18
first title to catch my eye...nothing makes me feel as good as music your words convey shared experience
We are only human after all don't put the blame on us or me or you...just let the beat and rhythm set us free...


For My Astronomer

2018-02-18
Perfectly aligned words and thought....


INSPIREING OTHERS!

2018-02-18
Truth Ken...


WHY DO I SIT HEAR TYPING?

2018-02-18
And we who read are happy that you write


Milky Way

2018-02-16
An elegant description of the dark skies.....makes me wish I could see them..


Cherish the Sparrow

2018-02-15
Beautifully written.....it definitely resonates with me....


The Swing

2018-02-15
Enjoyed reading thisone....loved the rythmn Miles Davis and a Girl swinging in the past....a lazy trumpet solo echoing in my mind


Two Valentine Poems

2018-02-15
I like both......they compliment each other


AS THE POET WALKS!

2018-02-12
A lot like you and I Ken.....once a reader now a writer as well, thanks to your encouragement


A Love Poem For The New World

2018-02-12
Written word with important message, eloquent and heartfelt....


Suspended Animation

2018-02-12
Reading your words gives a real sense of being at one......


A body more comfortable in the dark is a star

2018-02-12
Really enjoyed reading this.....it flows and reflects both at the same time....l


THE MAJORITY ARE NOW PAYING! (Addishans And Changes)

2018-02-12
Six lines of truth Ken.....reads really well.....!!!


Why?

2018-02-11
Makes me feel a sadness ........trust is a hard thing to give if trust has been broken in the past


Missing The Sea

2018-02-11
Evokes a sense of losing something losing something or someone....who has always been but now is not....I miss the sea but also miss a lot of other things, people and friends, your words capture the feeling of not being ....there.....


Scenery

2018-02-09
Concise and to the point....Im trying to get into Haiku, I think Im trying to hard...


IN THE YEAR XXXX! (Completed)

2018-02-09
Strikes a chord Ken....fear is the key, nicely put....paranoia strikes deep, I sometimes feel as though we are being monitored....mention something and your inundated with ads....

Ps signing in was a doddle....😉


RAW POETS ROAR! (addishans)

2017-12-29
Really hits the Mark Ken.....you have unleashed your voice and have now given me space to unleash mine


Peace at last

2017-12-29
Wow powerful words.....everyone hit the target.....


Starry Kingdom

2017-12-29
Well writen leads you through the scene and yo dont know exacly what it means, so you have to read again unill the meaning does descend......Im geting worried have been a member for only three days but my comments seem to be written as poetry...Starnge days.....Ps I cant keep typing on this ipad I cant change what Is written...need my Keyboard lol


POETS AND POETRY!

2017-12-29
Loved this Ken....it explains the way I write songs, I dont write them I just sing them as I play, my reasoning is that they can never be wrong because they only came into existence when I sang them...so even mistakes are are correct because there are no mistakes....ps will have to get my blue tooth keyboard set up on his ipad its a nightmare typing. ..thanks for he link Ken, I will work my way through your work.....I believe in Synchronicity so when the time is right....the time is right..


Today

2017-12-29
Thank you Thomas and Ken, just exploring, finding my feet, they were there not so long ago dont know where they have gone maybe theyll come back if i write a song.....ps fav poets Spike Milligan, Ivor Cutler Captain Beefheart and Dylan...also haveaLove of Da Da and Surrealism...so might well be exploring some strange places....