| A Prayer for my Enemies
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2007-07-25
If we could all pray for our enemies then all strife will cease.
Earth will be at peace.
Reading this has made me think.
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| Sunrise
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2007-06-28
Nature is beautiful. This is a beautiful portrait of it.
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| Will You Marry Me My Lady?
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2007-05-14
Hey Paul,
Get off these love themes.
I would understand this fixation if your name was Paula.
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| Hatred With Love
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2007-05-11
Goodbye is a very sad word Paul. Once said, a disturbing vacuum is created that would need filling.
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| No One
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2007-05-10
Low self esteem...an interesting theme.
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| When a Dinosaur Is Hungry
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2007-05-03
Good imagination. Great write!
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| Fall Out Of Love
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2007-04-26
The last lines of this poem are rather weak and Loose. Did you write this in a hurry?
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| Eternity
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2007-04-23
I read through most of your poems. The power of the first pulled me to the next and then to the next.
You are very articulate and gifted. But I am sure I tell you what you already know.
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| Brought up in the ghetto
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2007-04-23
Brought up in the ghetto
Built like a mosquito
The Ghetto...which one would that be? Ajegunle?
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| The Goats' Invasion
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2007-04-23
A touch of humor. Thanks kid.
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| Set Me Ablaze
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2007-04-23
Only one fire I know of that burns and doesn't consume or leave things in feeble ash and it's not desire.
It's called God fire.
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| I'm Dying
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2007-04-23
Addiction huh? Lol.
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| Finally
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2007-04-23
Oops! you must be young and reckless.
Take a friendly advice dude: love's song has got not just rhythm but blues. I hope you are prepared.
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| She Was Robbed
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2007-04-23
Who would dare rob love when it's free?
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| Fake
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2006-10-26
This is good poetry. Neat arrangement!
A problem of our time is addressed in an enjoyable way.
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| Canto In Silence
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2006-09-28
This reads like the "gospel according to Chike".
Enjoyable read and no doubt a poignant message that we should all do well to heed or suffer all the consequeneces you mentioned.
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| The Abused
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2006-09-05
This is a question we should all answer, "do I see, do I care?"
This poem is so touching and deeply moving. The questions it asks will prick the conscience of many and open the eyes of others to see the evil of a culture that wont bother to see or care further than itself
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| Recycle
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2006-08-29
Is this a poem, if so, how?
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| Echoes of Pain!
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2006-07-27
Night soul woman,
It's my pleasure to have set the writing ball rolling for you.
I enjoyed reading your text too and it seems you have been thinking of the idea for a while because it came out in a large volume.
God bless you.
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| World Peace?
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2006-06-03
Kid, I loved this poem.
I KNOW just what you are talking about.
God bless you.
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| WORLDS OF SORROWS X
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2006-05-24
I was happy coming here until this poem plunged me into worlds of sorrow.
I didn't get the meaning in the line "Identity follows"
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| Anything...but God!
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2006-05-24
Didn't have the chance to meet them
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| When I Was Born
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2006-05-24
So George, you were the noisy kid who's scream pierced my dream while I tried to sleep after a hard day's work?
Good writing. Keep it coming.
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| the noose of love
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2006-05-18
Lovely.
I guess you overdozed on love my friend.
Be more careful, so you don't die a second death.
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| The Koran 2
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2006-05-18
No one stops my George from making those bold statements.
Islam truly strums hatefilled lyrics but it's only because it's a false religion.
God is love.
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| The Black Halo
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2006-05-17
Don't Give up on love, because of "your angel in the dust"
Who was "sadly overcome by lust"
Can lust overcome love?
I doubt it. So please try again.
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