Please sign in and create a new post
Hello, I just finished my very first poem, and since it is my first one, I am in no way thinking highly of it at all, but please, review, thank you very much.
My very first poem I just wrote. I have never written one before, please review it thanks.
Honestly, little Shieldmaiden of Earth, I know your persona, arise!
Thus our witching hour has yet to arise, arise, arise -- darkness must baptise!
I may, whoever I might be, may spare you whichever you secretly despise,
Within souls elder than Heaven itself, I ask you cunningly, furthermore, believe!
From galaxies miles away, personalities generations away, believe, find faith in your power!
I see all -- the longer then skin sheds from deepest within, let the skin shed all the way, devour
Till the narrow bones of Earth, I say, you seem narrow underneath, unidentified by Adamís ale
You know, behind the wuthering heights, I am right, and that is why I tell you this tale.