the summer I lost my child

The summer I lost my child

snow fell

on my chrysanthemums

Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-05-18 at 23:53

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Lourdes, the pain is so deep here. I am overwhelmed by sadness. kathy

Zoya Zaidi
This is so poignant!
Sort of casts a chill on your heart!
Can feel the frost across my heart...
painful chill of the frost-bitten heart!!!
Hey, Lourdes, frost-bitten-heart, that is a good line, how about a poem on that? Here I go to write on...
Thanks for the inspiration sweetheart!
Love,xxx, Zoya

So much sadness in so few words!

Beautiful work!

Amanda Manmohan
Wow, you really have a way with words! This was extremely heart-breaking poem.... well done, Lourdes!


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by Lourdes