Crashing into now

Fallen trees litter the past
as childhood dreams
drip down the glass
condemned by the weight
of an oppressive cloud
watching once upon a time
crashing into now
a heart full of questions
unanswered by time
I'm falling like autumn
through the thoughts of my mind
a tormented soul at future's door
desperate to rise
from the clinging floor
i'm walking the edge
of a dull ragged knife
just grasping hold of echoes
that underscore my life.


© Rik - 25/11/2006





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Written on 2006-11-26 at 12:32

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sabereh lotfian
Hiiiiiiiiii!
A beautiful title it has *Crashing into now *
It's really motivative & well-penned that the reader feels your words are alive , of course words are always alive we should just believe them & YES! I believe the words:)

peace
Sabereh

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