It's only the beginning

The pathway yet unknown

At times I hear the sound of other steps

Sometimes we walk alone.

Poetry by Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-03-22 at 03:20

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Excellent poem of destiny! I love reading and writing about journeys which lead to unknown paths that causes beginnings to questions faith. You did an exceptional job on this short poem that writes about loneliness and its route. It was to the point without any extra words. Overall, very exceptional job!

France England
Brilliant! When we walk alone it is the beginning of another chapter to come; full of the wonders of living. I would think that if the path was known then this would not be much of an adventure; it's like the first kiss hoping we nail it. The hearing of the unseen fills ya full of hope; something great is about to happen. What a fun and wise write.

Excellent, succinct and so true. That's life, I need to bookmark this one.

Kshiti Dubey
This is so simple yet so meaningful!

Some times have to be faced alone


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
A fine little poem. It sounds like a prelude

josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
This is so succinct and focused! Well done, Ashe. You're so right we progress alone, even with other's help, it's still our journey... Alone.