the first poem I ever wrote.


Feelings

Nothing compares to how much I love you
I've thought and thought about this
Yet nothing comes close to how I feel.
You make me smile, you make me laugh.
You make each day brighter than the last.
I think about you every day
You're what makes my heart light aflame.
I look at the distance from here to the moon and how far it is away.
I would walk every mile from here to there, just to get to you.
Because nothing compares to how much I love you.




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Written on 2016-08-28 at 20:11

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
You have a gift. It's evident in your very first poem. You are able to convey your feelings so others feel what you feel, see what you see. You paint pictures with words. Evoke emotions. Poet/Artist--who you are.
2016-09-15


Kshiti Dubey
This poem is so sweet! How wonderful it is to be in love; that yearning, those goosebumps when that person is around. :)
2016-08-29


jim The PoetBay support member heart!
As you said earlier—"you really got me!"

I hear song echoes in this poem, which is very good.
2016-08-28