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NOTE:  2016 09 27  22H02 EST  Vice Versa - for Baz...




Vice Versa

 

He says that he wouldn't know what to do

if this world didn't have her in its realms.

 

And she wonders how that can even be possible,

but then, she thinks on ten years, and what they mean.

 

All they've been through, everything that's enough

to make anyone quit - and that both didn't anyway...

 

He says that he wouldn't know what to do

if this world didn't have her in its realms.

 

She hopes that he realizes

That she wouldn't know either.





Words by F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2016-09-28 at 09:08

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Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
A beautiful and gentle expression of love. 10 years speaks in volumes of understanding, so in answer I guess he does. Hand in hand and heart to heart into another 10 years for you both. :-)
2016-10-02



beautiful i especially loved the ending
2016-09-30


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice.
2016-09-30


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
A very well written poem about the reality of love. Well done!
2016-09-28


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
this is a truly loving poem, you've written it beautifully.
2016-09-28


alarian The PoetBay support member heart!
a very poignant sign of love
très beau, les choses les plus simples sont les plus belles. parfois je me dis qu'on a été fait si compliqué juste pour pouvoir aimer.
2016-09-28


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful, as only Love can be.
2016-09-28