And under these stars

The small of my back recalls

Your hand was weighted with so many potentials

As the October night advanced


Poetry by LFD3
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Written on 2016-10-18 at 00:46

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Instantly, so much was revealed as the curtain was drawn back and the scene began, then the story was told. All this in four very powerful lines.

Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
This is so good. It is so short but woven so well to complete the meaning. Like a small elegant figurine.

Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
This has such an intangible something, ( velocity ? )