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A Love Song

Spill over into my hole
drag me down
a love song with no love in sight

A drained rain king
a fluid slip knot
subterfuge

frozen faces
dead roads
closed doors

we kept it all hidden
shut from the light
the attic bomb

the internet museum
the sediment of memories
layer upon layer
like dust

wasp's nest in the secret chamber
paper webbing on the beautiful wood
cobweb heroes
the lies of love.
Ashe




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Written on 2016-10-27 at 01:38

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are you making an experience into your lab? nice words, enchanting!
2016-10-28


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
I confess that I haven't the slightest idea what is going on here, but the imagery is quite striking, and the writing is typically good.
2016-10-28



Beautiful imagery really brings out the vibe of the poem
2016-10-27