....eternal eternities?


deadly - D E A T H ?

























I think a lot about


mortality,


not 2 speak about


im-mortality





scrutinizing


- LIFE




not because



I am found of death,


but because


there is


so much death


around us


these days,



even closer on telly.





I just cant take in




that what we call



"death"



is The Final Ending.



just cant




Words by KYREUS of Sweden
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Written on 2017-07-06 at 22:34

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one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
i can't either. just can't.
2017-07-07


Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
Nice picture too! :)
2017-07-06


Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
Good comment, Ken. Our immortality will be in our writings.
But, back to the poem and how much death we see on TV. I think about it too when I see the policeman shoot bang, a shot on the forehead, right between the eyes and the man is dead on the floor. Such ease of dying that it makes me envious because I wonder about how I will die, and how painful and humiliating it can be. I like that you mentioned "the ritual of death," because you make it sound more dignified. I want to die fast and not be in bed with someone cleaning after me for months or years on end. Yes, that's what I wish for: a fast death, and if I could also ask for a painless death. Good poem.
Ashe
2017-07-06


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo!
Ken
2017-07-06


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Now, I write, I will achieve my immortality! I and you, my dear freind, will be alive as soon as some reads our work, Wil be with the reader! ;)
Ken
2017-07-06