money

i have reached a conclusion
that ideas are money
and those who are very rich
have the luckiest ones




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Written on 2017-07-09 at 05:36

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
correction :

faudrait retirer "to" entre "reached" et "a conclusion".

Mais j'aurais tendance à vouloir dire "I have reached the conclusion" au lieu de "a conclusion". C'est peut-être juste moi...

Comme d'habitude... j'apprécie énormément ce que tu écris. Tu me fais toujours penser, et j'aime ça beaucoup :)

*hugs* xx
2017-07-19


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
You are suggesting, then, that the very rich also are very thoughtful. I question that.
2017-07-10


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm not sure luck has anything to do with it.
2017-07-09


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo!
Ken
2017-07-09