P I E R C I N G ???


F I E R C I N G.......?































she always said


LOVE


needs total commitment


cutting trough


your false superficial


attitudes,




cutting trough


like piercing.





I must have misunderstood


the whole plot,


hearing - fiercing,



cant have - that



thinking,


my inner "me"


cant be cut 2 pieces




Short story by KYREUS of Sweden
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Written on 2017-07-19 at 23:44

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Clever and striking altogether.
2017-07-21


Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
Indeed the commitment has to be willing by two parties. The poem is fierce in your belief. Being cut in 2 will never work for anyone. Strong poem.
Ashe
2017-07-21


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Bravo! Chris a very work.
Ken
2017-07-20