I've been wanting to write another song lateley. So I did... but it isn't that good. Definateley not as good as 'Forever'. Probably not as good as what I would have written if I had stopped and jotted down the little couplets that popped into my he


Lies

The only promise you'd keep
'is nothing but lies'

so heres to why's
theres the rage in my eyes
when I see you
I want to die
I see the lies that writhe
just beneath your perfect skin

I wish you could see
the depth of your sin
it tears me apart
and I'm no longer within
those terrible spirals of lies

Through these secrets that you reap
where my soul used to reside

so heres to why
I hope you die
when I see you
I cry inside
for this is the soul
in which I was entwined

sometimes I see
that deep within
past the darkness of your heart
that you too have been
in the terror of his eyes

the devil's eyes...
trust not.

But they're yours now, aren't they?



Poetry by Andy
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Written on 2006-05-20 at 05:50

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Amanda K
i liked it. sing it soon.

rgrds,
Amanda
2006-06-07


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
WOW!
those last lines pack a punch.

brillent.

liz
2006-06-05


PoeticProcrastination
Oh dear. I think it's gorgeous but in a chilling and "ohdeargodthishashappenedtome" kind of way.

"so heres to why's
theres the rage in my eyes
when I see you
I want to die
I see the lies that writhe
just beneath your perfect skin

I wish you could see
the depth of your sin
it tears me apart
and I'm no longer within
those terrible spirals of lies"

Simply astonishing.
2006-05-21


Zoya Zaidi
The anguish is so well expressed here!
"I see the lies that writhe
just beneath your perfect skin"

**hugs**
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-05-20