Tanka the fourth

Tangled flesh they speak

More than words when you lay near

Swaying like wind chimes

The breeze so soft draws me in

The musicís there when you sigh

Poetry by Sameen
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Written on 2017-09-23 at 20:50

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You are so good at these, excellent line "swaying like wind chimes." It really complements your opening line.