Tanka the eleventh

The best words are said

In half breaths, whispers and sighs

Like trickling rivers

And all three they coincide

When you tell me you love me




Poetry by Sameen
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Written on 2017-10-10 at 20:58

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Kathy Lockhart
This is very sweet. Makes a girl giggle.
2017-10-17


Ashe
These worda come together to create a very nice atmosphere. Very soft and beautiful.
Ashe
2017-10-11


shells
Words, actions and love, you sound like the voice of experience.
2017-10-10