Tanka the Twelfth

I do speak inverse

In verses gilded by lies

So it coincides

With what I think can surmise

How I feel. You speak with eyes.




Poetry by Sameen
Read 127 times
Written on 2017-10-16 at 01:45

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email
dott Print text



Kathy Lockhart
Extremely clever!
2017-10-17


shells
Intelligent and eloquent, I look forward to each Tanka and this one is right up there.
2017-10-16


Ashe
Clever wording and ever so romantic! The last line is dreamy.
You have always been an excellent poet, but now you are softer, more romantic. Love it!
Ashe~
2017-10-16