Tanka the Twelfth

I do speak inverse

In verses gilded by lies

So it coincides

With what I think can surmise

How I feel. You speak with eyes.




Poetry by Sameen
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Written on 2017-10-16 at 01:45

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Extremely clever!
2017-10-17


shells
Intelligent and eloquent, I look forward to each Tanka and this one is right up there.
2017-10-16


Ashe The PoetBay support member heart!
Clever wording and ever so romantic! The last line is dreamy.
You have always been an excellent poet, but now you are softer, more romantic. Love it!
Ashe~
2017-10-16