Tanka the sixteenth

All I can is try

Your eyes illumine the night

Like stars but I know

That these stars are suns disguised

Iíll burn if I look too long




Poetry by Sameen
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Written on 2017-10-22 at 21:01

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Bibek
Another fine tanka. The last two lines are lovely and terse.
2017-10-23